Reviewer: obbesseddeb (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Totally fantastic! I love the weekend part so far.
I gotta go get some sleep the dvd mid-night parties are starting in a few hoursw.
obbesseddeb
Reviewer: cbear (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
WOW! This story is AMAZING! I am so in love with your writing right now.. I just read all 15 chapters at once and geez! Since I got spoiled and got to read so much at once, I was wondering, how often do you update? I feel like I might explode if I dont get to read more soon lol
Great job, This story is going with my favorites!
Reviewer: krobs (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
OME!!! I just found and read your whole story so far....WHEN WILL there be MORE!!!!! I am so far beyond hooked!!!
YOU ARE AMAZING! You have captured Edward and Bella to a T!!!
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE MMMMMMMMOOOOOOORRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEE!!!
Reviewer: 8th-cullen-is-here (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
well it would be great to see how they go in their lab room on their table oh and in a thunda storm that would be awsum... um wot else i think the hot tub and the beach and maybe you could find more suggestions to add to your list like ummmm like for your "in a public spot" suggestion how about in a booth at the italian restaurant where they 1st had their "date" or in a fitting room while shopping or if you do two things on the list in one movement that may be good to like parked in a public place in view and in his volvo ummmm there all i can think of atm if i think of any more im sure ill let you know hahaha tell me what you think thanks
Reviewer: truelove4ever (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
this is amazing
when is there more???
soooooo good... really looking forward to the public place, amazing job.
cant wait for more!!!!!!!1
Reviewer: KS123 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Ok, so I just reread this story. I have decided that I would like to take you to this resort and I will take care of everything. You will just have to write. All the time. Is that weird? Noooo. :)
Can't wait for the update!
Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
*faint*
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Wow now thats how every time you leave a club she go
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Oh Edward seems never to fail us with all his guilt, does he
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
who knew Edward could make so much progress so quickly
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
A little OOC ? My dear I would say you just made a u-turn on a one way street ;-)
Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
I don't know what else to say..but OMG!!! This is one of my favorite stories!! And I look forward to reading about the rest of the weekend!!
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
R u sure Bella didn't get ahold of Rosalie's list? Some of those things are more her speed, but go Bella speed ahead, Edward can watch fro cops :-)
LOVED her leaving her underwear in his bed. Thants great!!!
Reviewer: Cali Twilighter (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
That was HOT Please keep it coming. No pun intended!
Reviewer: Cali Twilighter (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
That was HOT Please keep it coming. No pun intended!
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Alice talking to Bella had me cracking up and the reaction to seeing Jasper was priceless and then Emmetts remark.
I'm so going to go looking for a meadow and a tree.
I always hoped Bella & Edward would do it on that tree at Lapush beach, but I don't like Jacob very much so thats just me
Reviewer: lionslamb13 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Okay, at the risk of sounding totally gross...I almost slipped off my chair! You have not only met my expectations, but exceeded them. I cannot wait for more!
Reviewer: magaliaa (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
3 words. so fucking hot
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Wow this was heated and I loved Edward trying to get what she was thinking about out of her and Always love Alice
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
.....Grabs keys and heads out to get removable shower head
Reviewer: Jealous_of_Bella (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Niiiiice
Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Oh, wow! What an incredibly erotic, fantastically sexy chapter! You more than met expectations. And that last paragraph--after all the delicioius fun in the chapter, that was the thick, delectable icing on the cake. The vision of Edward in the shower that's in my mind is going to stay there for a long time and get some good use! Bring on some more, girl!! You rock!
Reviewer: Vanessa Wolf (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
I think I'm looking most forward to "in a public place." What can I say?
Reviewer: HUNTRESS88 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
oh, I need to take up smoking............
Reviewer: MeiraV (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Heee! that met ALL expectations!
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