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Reviewer: Tallulah Remiter (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Wow. I love an Edward who isn't afraid of the word 'fuck.' Sure, it's out of character a bit, but that's why we're reading this! We WANT OOC Edward! :)
I loved this entire chapter! :)
~ Lu
Reviewer: Tallulah Remiter (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
I don't know what it is about the grindage (my story's most recent chapter had grinding too), but it is SO HOT!! And Edward having Bella up against the tree? Telling her to come? *fans self* GUH...and UNG.
Reviewer: tosani (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
just amazing, I couldnt even stop reading to review in between chapterd, I had to keep reading..lol you have written this so well, its a good story and hot as hell! cant wait for bella to check off more things from her list!
Reviewer: breaking-dawn (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
You have a fantastic story here! I squealed a little bit when you mentioned Victoria. I live there and my mother actually has been to the resort that you talked of. It's kinda cool thinking about it! (it's even cooler to think that most of the main characters are on YOUR island and in Vancouver xD)
Anyways! Fantastic story! Only a truly amazing author could transform such a sensative topic into something rather enthraling to read and quite beautiful. So props to you! I hope you can update soon (:
Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Please Please Please Update soon:) I love this story..Its one of my Very Favorites!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!
Reviewer: SunMoonStars (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
All I can say is W.O.W!!
Next chapter please...oh, and don't miss ANY details please!
Great work, I will be waiting the next part to this....oh and can you also do the wedding night on ALL accounts??
Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
You are amazing at making fairly innocent things hotter than a full on sexcapade. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: BlairW (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
omg!!!!! pls!!! im dying to read next chapter!!
Reviewer: SunMoonStars (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Now it's Edwards turn!!! XD
Love it.
Reviewer: SunMoonStars (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
To me, personally, the thought of a guy wanting to be around me when I am menstrating is a little...off.
But it is a vampire thing..*shrugs*
Good reading though.
Reviewer: SunMoonStars (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
I will NEVER look at a piano as a musical instrument again.
W.O.W.
Reviewer: Kellansgirl123 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
NO WAY??? Would you mind maybe, possibly, kinda sorta emailing me the 1st few chapters....? If not, I completly understand... just curious!
Reviewer: popsewini (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
ooOMGOMG this is such an uberificlly awesome series! You have to write moore!!! Please!! xD
Reviewer: Kellansgirl123 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
HOT DAMN YOU CAN WRITE LEMONS. LIKE SERIOUSLY. THEY HAVENT EVEN HAD SEX YET AND I FEEL LIKE THEY HAVE.... THATS CREEPY, BUT IN A GOOD WAY.
Okay, well... i was thinking about writing a review for every chapter, but that would have just beeen really annoying for you to have to read each one.
Your story is WAYYYY popular, and for a hell of a good reason too! I could go on and on and on and on.... about how much i love this book, and what i like about it... but I'm sure that every single one of your 1959 allready covered that!
You should be way proud to be writing one of the most popular stories on Twilighted, thats AMAZING.
Deffinatly update soon && think about writing new stuff too, you could SO start writing your own book or something like that.
:D good luck & keep it up!!!
Author's Response: Hey KG--thanks so much. And, no, reading multiple reviews would NEVER be annoying! Trust me! I live on each and every one of these babies! XD I have written my own novel, by the way, but I haven't had luck landing an agent for it yet. I'm still trying though. I also have the beginnings of two other novels started. All supernatural fantasies. Thanks for your wonderful feedback!
Reviewer: Libby Michaels (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
...must...have...more!!! This is by far one of the hottest smut biscuits I have ever read. And I should know, I was an X-files smutster from way back in the day.
Reviewer: Jadalulu (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Oh my god you HAVE to finish this !!!!!!! PLEASE!I'm dying over here!!!! And I'm really lovin the less inhibited edward & bella! If only he'd trusted his self-control in the series!!!! Yikes!!!!
Reviewer: KS123 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
I just had to tell you that I recommended your story to a few people at a DVD release party in my area last weekend. I know at least one of them has started reading and loves it as much as I do. Well... maybe not as much, but a lot. :)
Update soon!!! No pressure. ;)
Reviewer: darkdreamworld (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
okay just to let you know I have read all the chapters so far and I never commented on them because I couldn't stop reading for that long! I love them! I cant wait to read more!!!!
Reviewer: ermcj (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
CAN NOT WAIT for the next chapter. I'm hoping you play the list out through her change.
Reviewer: swan_song (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Heehee, I read it again! So, so hot, Laura! And so realistic. If Edward had done these, uh, steps to knowing Bella's body, their honeymoon might not have been so disasterous! Really can't wait for part 2 :)
Reviewer: ShadowEyes (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Holy God, you just raised the bar for every other author on this site, and THANK YOU.
Reviewer: FoxxyJ (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 02:29 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
This is SO GOOD. I just love how you have gotten into their heads!
Reviewer: Eclipse_in_the_Desert (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Loved it, blood talk is good! I always have wondered about that with the extra sense of smell our precious vampires have, your POV makes menstruation...sexy? LOL!! Keep writing, this Edward and Bella are friggin' hot!!
Reviewer: cptnsassypants (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Phew! *wipes off forehead* That was intense! Seriously. I love a dirty talkin' Edward...
This story has been fun to read...I think I will let myself read one more chapter before I have to go to bed! Thanks for writing!
Reviewer: TeamAlice (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
32. With a toy.... ; )
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