I love that see had to be the one to protect him it was so sweet. I love how close and comfortable they have become with each other. Cant wait to see what else he has in store for her. Great job

BITCHES! Guh! Please do not make us wait this long again. I went through horrible withdrawal. Major. This was sooo good. I hope he doesn't make her pull away much more when uh... she's... uh... having his icecream = ] Ice cream is good! Edward has to understand that. And Bella likes it especially. So he shouldn't deprive her of icecream *EVILGRIN* Plus, she just totally proved that icecream doesn't kill, so...

Their sexing is so sensual! It totally sounds perverted, but whatever. I think it's totally satisfying. A lot of other stories just aren't written this well. I mean you go into great detail and you write it so tastefully - no pun intended - and the dirty talking is a major turn on. You write quite professionally, which is one of the must-haves for FFs that I read. Great chapter! Once again, pleeeasse, don't wait too long!

Author's Response:

Your repeated use of the ice cream metaphor totally cracked me up.  Glad you enjoyed!

Every time I get an alert in my inbox that this story has been updated, I find myself doing a happy dance around my computer - the sad thing is, I'm totally not exaggerating. This story is so full of emotion, humor, sexytimes, and... awesomeness... that I reread the whole thing every time you update. No joke. It is beyond spectacular, and this chapter is no exception. You take so much care in crafting the storyline and making it perfect, that you could go without updating for months and I would still be indescribably giddy over this story. Thank you so much for taking the time to write for us readers - you are truly appreciated!

awesome chapter. This story never ceases to amaze me. more more more

That was so awesome. I am getting hot just reading that WOW!!!!

Okay this is DEFINITELY my favourite chapter yet. 

 

First of all: The part about the ice cream is just awesome. I love it I love it I love it. I think it's so great because I'm pretty sure a LOT of us ladies have used that trick in our lifetimes :D

And ohmygoodness the whole Bella-going-protective-over-Edward just melted me. I *adore* that entire scene. You did so well getting into his head with his typical overreactions. 

Oh, and PHEW the BJ in the movie theater was smoking HOT. I realllly want Bella to swallow. ugh, SO BADLY! hahaha :)

 

SO well done, definitely worth the wait (though it didn't seem long to me, love!). I also really enjoyed how you brought Bella's feelings for Jake back into it, as well as the whole cliff-jumping bit. It makes me remember that this is actually an in canon story!

Great job! I'm really looking forward to what's next!

YEAH!!!!!  I'm so glad that you posted another chapter..and what a chapter it was.  I can't wait to read what the big suprise is!!

Aside from the blow-job (which was HOT, per your usual), this was an interesting chapter, and 'felt' quite different from the rest of the story.  Some of the lightness of the others gave way to a thoughtfulness and consideration of how they have both changed that is quite nice.

I like that they seem to be actually talking to each other instead of at each other.

See ya around the Rob thread, bb!

The only thing I can think to say right now is............. DAMN THAT WAS HOT!!

Yeah!!! That was... ung... I don't know what to say except... I need a shower. Now!

Delicious update!  And I mean that in the same way that Bella thinks Edward is delicious ;-D *slurp*  (or rather, LICK)

Now that Edward is in on Operation Emmett, I can't wait to hear what you come up with!  And, of course, to see what the surprise is that Edward has for Bella. 

xoxo Sarah

LOOOOOOOOOOVED IT!

This was good, and I loved the way that you set up number 31 - in public. It worked perfectly.

I can't wait to read the rest.

Author's Response:

You wrote my 2000th review!  How cool is that?  Thanks so much!

I can't wait to read more!! Update soon please?