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Reviewer: WishingIwasHis (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Absolutely wonderful! Such a great story and very well written. Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: HannahCullen (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I was having the shittyist day..
then I saw that you posted and it made my day SO much better!
Great post!!
loved it :)
Reviewer: Venus_Star2_com (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
tee-heee ***LOVED IT***this cheered me up sa I'm not having a great week
rachie
Reviewer: onyx8514 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
jumping up and down like alice spinning in circles!!!! you're like my own special brand of heroine!!! i almost fell out of my chair when i saw you finally posted again!!! i want more more more!!!!
Reviewer: Emmy (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Wow! WOW! WOWOOWOWOWOWOWOOOWOWOWOWOWOOWOOWWOOWOWOWOWOWOW!
WOW.
I love love love this story...
Its thanks to the tits-tastic Tasha that I read this. I owe her big time...
Your writing is brilliant. It goes from Sexy to emotional, from tender to intense. From connection to impact. Without jarring or fissure.
Its just an amazing story. I am so impressed by it - & of course turned on. But this is so much more than just a sexy tale.
Thanks so much for this story. & for the great new update.
Love it & now therefore you!
Cheers
Emmy.
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Reviewer: littlelady (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
How do you do it? This is amazing! Freaking Amazing! So beautiful! I don't know what to say. I keep typing something, then deleting it because i am speechless!
That was so brilliant to work in the sun and Bella actually saving Edward. I loved her instant instincts. She is a protecter. She will save the ones she loves. And to see that even then, in her human state, it was absolutely enthralling!
And Edwards reaction to it all... the humiliation, the guilt, and finally the acceptance and acknowledgement of Bella was making me all fuzzy inside. Because Edward is always difficult, and melodramatic and you just captured that so easily! (or so it seemed!)
I love that they talked and had a heart to heart. These two sooo needed that!
Also, I just have to say that everytime I see an update for this story, I squeee! Everything you write is awesome! I wish it were in the book, and that it really really happened. I can't wait for my friend to finish reading the books, because this story is where I'm sending her first!!!
Reviewer: dashamedeiros84 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
wen they end up havin sex oh my god shes gonna get it
Reviewer: Humble (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I love how Bella protected Edward from harm!!! So wonderful!!
Reviewer: icy cold (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Oh, I love that! Finally, she was able to look after him, save him from harm, and, after thinking about it, he was able to accept it. He could understand that it was important to her to be equals. And he could appreciate and enjoy being equals! The love and trust between them is absolutely awesome and thank you for writing it so beautifully.
Reviewer: krosson247 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I loved seeing (reading I guess) Bella take charge and take care of her man...nicely done!
Reviewer: edward-bella70 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Wasn't Bella on her period? Good story!
Reviewer: Audrella (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I was so excited when I saw an update!! And it was good! Loved it. Can't wait for her surprise and to see how she gets Emmett back. :-)
Reviewer: Steelerfan (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
very good... hope the updates keep coming (haha)
Reviewer: irebporti (Anonymous) · Date: March 26, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
HOLY SHIT! i suddenly feel this impulse to just run over to a theater near me and jsut go crazy
aaaand i'm loving the strong bella! wimpy bella pisses me off
amazing chapter! really!
Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
The last paragraph was perfect and loving. Excellent job.
Reviewer: twifans (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Well it took too long to get this chapter!!! That is my only complaint. I thought Carlise said the semen would not hurt her. I would of liked her to taste it and then kiss Edward...a little kinkier. But it did have the right amount of kink! lol When do we get the next one?
Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I adore the last paragraph!! I adored the whole chapter, of course, but those last few sentences really sum up Edward's feelings for Bella. LOVED IT!!
Reviewer: angel1babe86 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
awwww..... i absolutely love this chapter... so poignant and important... i like bella saving edward and then the movie theater :-)
Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Yum! Lovely chapter!
Reviewer: cptnsassypants (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I loved this chapter and how you had Bella save Edward for once! Well, besides how she saved him from living a lonely existence...but you know what I mean, right?
I think it is definitely time for Edward to return the favor Bella paid to him in the movie theatre....just sayin'! :)
Great job!
Reviewer: emt_lvr (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
This is one of my favorite fan fics. Sweet and hot and just wonderful.
Reviewer: unicornaddict (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
*sigh* fantastic again! TY it was worth the wait!
Reviewer: Stacey Joyce (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I'm sorry you had trouble but you did a great job! I love Edward's revelation and I love that Bella got to save him!! Well Done!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Reviewer: Meegan (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
WOW!! This story gets more amazing with each new chapter!! Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: babbling_brooke (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
This chapter had it all... sweetness, sexiness, angstness (yes, made that word up), danger, mystery, and overall Edward and Bella times... I love that Bella got to be Hero and Edward got a BJ in the Theatre (that has to be a fantasy for a guy) and it sould sorda count as #31) In a public place... So funny about the Imax movie that is actually a valid movie!...
Do you plan to write up to the honeymoon? Will you write the actual act of when the time comes (he he comes!)?...
Their heart to heart by the Fire was great, No secrets, all Trust!
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