Well you've just gone and done it again!!  Amazing chapter...amazing!!!

Loved everything about it of course...and it definitely included a little of everything!!  I'm so happy to see that Edward is finally trusting himself more and more and is realizing the control he has.  I can't wait to see how they get back at Emmett...especially now that Edward is in on it!  And of course can't wait to find out what the surprise is!!

Your writing is enthralling and I'm always left in awe of how you do it!!!  I especially loved the last paragraph.  "I am a new man." It reminded me of the scene in Midnight Sun when Edward sat in her chair, watching her sleep, realizing that he loved her...that he was a changed man.

You're great!!!!

This chapter + me and my pint of Ben&Jerry's Phish Food + your ALIR reference = Pure WIN  =)

I winced at "tits" too but overall twas still very satisfyng

I really enjoyed that chapter, the bit about Jacob especially. Breaking Dawn was a bit of a disappointment to me so this is proving to be a good substitute in my mind :D I really like the chapters with less sex in it as well. I really enjoy your writing! just thought you should know that ^.^

LOVE this chapter! Finally Bella gets to do some saving! can't wait to see what the surprise is.

::happy sigh::  Aah, Laura Cullen.  All is right with the world when you update.

I kind of wish I had something critical to say...  just so I wasn't so repetative.  Alas, you have dazzled me yet again!

I hope the novel you are writing gets picked up soon!  I will most certainly run out and buy it!  In the meantime, keep updating!!  :)

 

p.s.- Maybe "While You Were Gone" will be updated soon?  ::not so subtle hint, hint?::

win. just pure win. u absolutly rock and plzzzzzzz update soon! i have a new love (apart from edward) and its this fic! and since i crave anything i love u gotta feed my craving and update soon! plzzzz :) ok ill stop bugging and begging u now but OMG u rly ROCK!

"She has saved me in every way it is possible for one person to save another." 

So, um, Edward's a big Titanic fan, is he?  Heh

Author's Response:

God.  Now that you say that I can hear the line in my head!!  Um, apparently?

Awesome story, I absolutely can't wait for the next chapter!

OH I love it! So good!! There is so much that went on in this chapter... angst, romance, and good ole sex! (well to a degree haha) I cant wait for more, and I'm really excited about his new suprise for her especially since he is nervous!

Thanks!!

Oh PS I LOVED that he trusted himself to take control and guide her with his hand... SO HOT! :) 

Okay, loved the weather conflict in this chapter!  You know mishaps like that have to have happened to them in the past, but what I really liked was how you demonstrated Edward's confusion and guilt about putting not just himself, but Bella in danger that way.  However, I'm also glad you allowed Bella to get it through that rather thick skull of his that it is not something to overreact about...it happened, it's over, no one noticed, etc.  And, of course, her insight on how to make him feel "in control" again was brilliant...just too bad she still hasn't taken care of No. 31, guess she'll have to work on that one ;-)

So...what is this surprise Edward has in store for tomorrow?  I'm very curious...looking forward to finding out!

great story...i'm sure you have a busy life but i hope you can update soon for my own and others selfish need to read this great piece of prose! xx

Author's Response:

My 2100th review!  How awesome!  Thanks so much!

this story is the perfect combination of cuteness and sexiness.  I love it!