Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I love that SHE took care of HIM!!!!
Reviewer: Leesh (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I don't even know what to say that was so freakin' awesome! How about this...That was so freakin' awesome!!!
That was just everything a ff readers little heart could ever desire right there!! I laughed, I cried, I got horney...it was better than CATS!! hehehe!!!
Ice cream/penis analogies....always hot!!!
Love, love, loved that she saved him and then wanted him to dominate her! That whole exchange was just redonculous in it's sincereness!!! I also loved that they spilled things they were keeping hidden to each other! I just love how you have written them in this story! SO AMAZING!!!!
Update soon!!! Can't wait!!!!
LOL~Leesh
Reviewer: Blaculicious (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Phew is right! That was fucking AWESOME! It exceeded my expectations in many ways...I was hoping for more clittoral stimulation but what your provided was truly delectable...I'm logging off right now to chase my very own Edward down and replay this fantasy.
Reviewer: yeuxdor (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Hooray! What a lovely twist - Bella getting to be the rescuer for a change.
Reviewer: edward08 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
that was amazing
Reviewer: dhArma (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
aww the last part was just adorable
Reviewer: Beckylady (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Beautiful and not just fluff! There was danger and fun and sexyness combined in a lovely chapter. Thank you!
Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Aww this chapter was great. I loved the mix of horniness and sweetness. I love how Bella was able to protect and save Edward for once...which might not seem like a super big deal, but she's always kind of the underdog in the relationship, and this gave her some power and also really let her show her love and protectivess over Edward. I thought it was great!
Plus, the bj in a public place wasn't bad at all :)
Great chapter!
Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Without a doubt one of my favorite favorites. Another terrific chapter. Worth the wait!!!
Reviewer: yihyu (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
how touching it is.
Reviewer: xoTinyxo (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Bella protecting Edward! Priceless!!! I loved it ... & the theater fun ..hehe ... can't wait to see what else he has up his sleeve... or even bella 4 that matter.lol. =)
Reviewer: Blaculicious (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Ugh! I hate this teasing but I also have to admit it was a necessary chapter. Your writing is freaking fantastic!
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
When a women is alone - one must have her fantasies :)
Reviewer: melissa95 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
amazing chapter! way to go wuick thinking bella! lol please hurry with chapter 17 i cannot wiat! xoxo
Reviewer: maisydaze (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
oh my f-ing god! Do you have any idea how good you are? Your partner must have it really good!
So hot...the blood, the growling...seriously... This is my favorite FF by far and I simply quiver with anticipation of the next chapter...
P.S. You don't have to reply to me since you get so many reviews but I just had to tell you how I feel
P.P.S. Will we ever see 69 on the list?
Reviewer: sheba (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Sorry I have to stop reading now, must go and dominate my husband!!!!!!!
Reviewer: artsyfartsy (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I love optimistic Edward!!
Reviewer: an_edward_chick (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Wow, you just keep making the chapters better and better. This chapter had hotness and some true intimacy. I believe Edward and Bella took their relationship to a new level with the events of this chapter, and therefore your story has reached a whole new dimension for me. Bravo!
Reviewer: Blaculicious (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Though I'm not a fan of combining blood and sex...I've got to say that was the best fucking chapter yet, that should have been in the book, so so so so so good. I LOVED it!!!!!
Reviewer: caesiioculi27 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I'm sure a lot of work went into this chapter, and it came together marvelously! Yay for checking things off the list!
Reviewer: mwild (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I love that Bella's instincts kicked in and she just knew she had to save him. It shows how much she's grown in the 2 years they've been together, just as Edward has. Loved it!
Reviewer: girlys75 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Thank you for the new chapter, when can we have the next one ?
Reviewer: amandahugnkiss (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
LOVE LOVE LOVE this chapter! I love the way their relationship is progressing. Yay!
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Great trip for them both...and they're certainly pushing their boundries (and checking things off that list of hers). Loved his reaction to her tatoo...and the scene in the theater was...um...HOT!
More!
Reviewer: mishel635 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
LOVED it!! So glad that Edward was able to relax and accept that Bella protected him. I love how much closer and connected they are getting, not just physically but emotionally too.
And the ice cream situation was too funny! Can't wait to see what Edward's surprise is!
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