great chapter! I love the part of the whole edward and the sun, totally didnt expect that to happen. also of course..loved the theatre part as well!!

Can't wait for the next update!!=)

seriously i just want to thank you for writing such an amazing story ... it was SOOOOO worth the wait ... i truly find myself investing your characters as i did twilight --- i have already read your series, THIS SERIES several times over and over again ---

thank you, thank you, and thank you!! please continue writing, i can't wait to see what happens next :)

Okay, seriously, this is one of the best Twilight fanfictions I've read so far! You are an extremely great writer, constantly making me feel like I'm with Bella and Edward.  I've just finished reading the whole thing from beginning to end, and I can't wait to read more!

I've lived in Victoria for sometime, and you got the idea of the city quite well in my opinion. An awesome job for never have been there yourself. I find it hilarious that you used the name Robert as the attendant to their room at the villa. I'm sure this must remind some people of a certain ... actor.

Please update soon! :D <3

I love this story!  I wonder what Edward's "major surprise" is!  Can't wait to find out!

wow....

 

that's the first time i review your story so i don't really know how to say..

 

I love it!! I love your story, the way you write.. you really are a good writer...

 

I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

 

thank you.. really thank you very much for giving us such a great story...

Hello!

I'm new to the site, and this is the first story I've read. I stayed up until 6am reading it and it is so well written, so visual, that when my husbands alarm clock went of a 6:30 this morning.. well let's just say he had a good start to his day!

I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!

i am enjoying this story.. please continue to update soon

i think i reviewed already, but i just read again and allmost came in my pants.  Holy fucking shit, that is the hottest thing ever!!  And you just posted part 2!  I might explode!!!!

oooh hope you update soon!

 

Good...very realistic in terms of what could happen with the sun.  I liked that he didn't freak out too much and do the whole 'I am not good for you thing'.  I like that Bella took charge and man, I LOVED the BJ scene.  More more more!

Ooooooh that was so lovely - I like your pro-active, stronger, protective Bella so much. She's so much more Edward's equal and I can see why he loves her. Meyer's Bella is so passive in comparison. This is a much more believable sexual relationship too IMHO - not to mention hotter than hell! Thanks for sharing and update soon!

I have something to say. Yours are among the best lemons  of the tree, but that is not the point. The point is the depth of the story. In this chaper we see Edward maturing. He starts to understand that Bella is his equal and she can help him too, and care for him.

Great.