Reviewer: louemrog (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Just wonderful! xx
Reviewer: louemrog (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
I'm really enjoying this story, you've managed to keep the characters basically very true to themselves.
Reviewer: flecour (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
This is a fantastic story! =)
Reviewer: Twilight_Fanatic123 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
OMG, that was SO hot! *fans face* And might I add that I do love an Edward in control. ;-) Keep up the good work and update soon!
Reviewer: amberlady22 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
This chapter was so sweet. I really enjoyed the ending. You really captured the connection they shared long before Bella was changed. Please keep the chapters coming!!!
Reviewer: LauraLynn (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Love the natural rapport, before Edward starts to (typically) overthink things in the next chapter!
Reviewer: miztrezboo (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
teehee
on the fucking piano.. gotta love it
Reviewer: mgg (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Wow!!!!!
When are you submiting a new entry???,I got to know!!!
You have a very dirty mind,congrats!!!!!!!
Reviewer: lucy the divaqueen (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
SQUEEEEE!!!! go bella!!
Reviewer: miztrezboo (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
muahaha edward likes the taste huh, wait till he FINALLY gets his tongue to the source!
Reviewer: miztrezboo (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
holy effin rub me touch me make me feel
GOOD
that was
SO hot.
Beyond hot.
I don't think SM would ever have thought her little Edward and innocent little Bella would ever have gotten into anything like this!
FANTASTIC!
Reviewer: iloveedward7795 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
yay!!! it is really gooood....please write more
Reviewer: abbythebollix (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
oh my this is... intoxicating in the word's most powerful meaning
Reviewer: abbythebollix (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Oh my fucking goddess. This is... <3<3<3
Reviewer: abbythebollix (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Mmh. I loved the part in Jasper's POV :D And yeah, the thought of a wet Edward is definitly.... something I won't write xD
Reviewer: friendofseth (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I love it! Entertaining and fun... I can't wait until the next installment ^_^
Reviewer: abbythebollix (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
oh fuck.
Reviewer: abbythebollix (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Wauwie. Mmh. You get a heart for this one, <3
Reviewer: abbythebollix (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Oh man this is frickin' awesome, so much in the spirit of Edward (!) You write beautifully.
Reviewer: terriberryc (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Another fantastic chapter.
Your writing is so erotic and so beautiful, I love this line:
"My heart beats for you, Edward. For both of us." Truer words had never been spoken.
Looking forward to seeing Emmett tease Bella, that should be funny. I'm amazed he was able to restrain himself for a whole day before calling her!
I think her tatoo is on her upper thigh, where Edward gave her her second hickey!
Reviewer: terriberryc (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Great chapter.
You leave me breathless, wanting "more."
Reviewer: miztrezboo (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
oh score Bella! Edward.. your little frustrating defence system is going to be a TOTAL fail with team bella/alice!
Reviewer: terriberryc (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
SMOKING HOT! LOVED THIS CHAPTER
Reviewer: amberlady22 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
I love this fic! This chapter is by far the best one you've written...please keep up the good work!
Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Awesome chapter!
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