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Reviewer: Priyanka2424 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
aww bella saved edwardd =)
pmsp..loved tha chapter among the others too!
Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
So much fun! I'm loving it.
Reviewer: tinytina (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
awesome fun story...
Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Too much fun! You go, Girl.!
Reviewer: twilightzone (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
OME, I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this story!!! I just found it today and I couldn't shut off my computer! Keep 'em cumming, er, coming. hehehe
Reviewer: EmberIce22 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Woo Hoo!! That was HOT!! Thanks a million for the three-fer.
Reviewer: IleanaCullen (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I love that she saved him. That she proved to be his equal and showed she can be just as strong when he needs her! Really touching, I'm sorry but when I saw that Part II was up I was not expecting that! It was really moving! Loved it! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: otter68 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Fucking Amazing.
Reviewer: Daniela1 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I am loving this story so much. The internal struggle and EPOV is great
Reviewer: Kyrene (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
This story is freaken hot! I absolutely love it! I really want him to find the list though. With all his thoughts, I think the list would do wonders to his head (just out of amazement that she would write it and would want all those things done). I'm very excited to see what else comes of the weekend. Keep Going!!
Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Unbelievably exciting. I can't wait to hear what the surprise will be.
Reviewer: TeamFuckmeEmmett (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Okay this is going to be a totally TMI review. I think this was by far the best chapter you've written so far...the shower scene...was.....was...well it left me speechless and pretty damn horny. (O_O) Chapter 13 was really hot but when you got to the movie theater...I already knew what was going to happen, but Bella's moment of protecting Edward was absolutely...I loved that role reversal...because it is always hard to imagine how she could....show him how devoted she was to protecting what he is, as much as he is constantly saving her. ^__^ But oh my, the Bella sucking him off in the movie theater...was so perfectly written...hot damn you should go into writing smutty novels...I had to go take a cold shower. That scene was mind-blowing...and so incredibly sexy...I couldn't sit still.. You are amazing...
Reviewer: grothe (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
this is a very good story, and very well written. i cant wait to find out what happens next. and when will edward find oout about the list?
Reviewer: miztrezboo (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I love you, Bella. Forever could never be long enough."
that was beautiful
Reviewer: EmberIce22 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Ohhh yeah!! Hi and hers self gratification in the shower...now that's what I'm talkin' about!!
Reviewer: lindamasen (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
i loved it :) really really good, keep it up! :)
Reviewer: EmberIce22 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
All I have to say is Thank You to the pack of pervs at the Smut Shack for recomending this story!!! It is everything and more that my dirty little mind wanted to read in the entire Twilight saga!! LOVES IT!!!
Reviewer: Rockel (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I know I only reviewed on the first chapter, but I just wanted to read straight through. Great story so far. So hot. Loved the explanation for the mestrual cycle too. From the human standpoint that was kinda yucky but still pretty hot. And gotta love goofy Emmett and him torturing Bella. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work!
Reviewer: miztrezboo (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
heheh
dirty talking Edward
i fucking love you too!
Reviewer: miztrezboo (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
MUAHAHAH Em is SOO evil! Gotta luv him!
and the phone sex.. she's turning that over a century old vamp into the 17 year old he once was! HORNY HORNY HORNY! lol
Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Aww that was so cute! I LOVED the bit with the ice cream! he he I can't believe thay've got to wait another two weeks. They must be getting so impaitient, bless them! But still, we don't mind, as long as it means we get a longer story of course! lol
Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one! This story is wonderful, you deserve all of your reviews and more! :D
Reviewer: Too_Dazzled_Gurls (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Lol I LOVE Alice!
This story is awesome....very interesting
Reviewer: dilly12000 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
This story is AWESOME! pretty please update as soon as poss!!
Reviewer: twilover09 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
This is a great story so far. Of course Alice would offer her assistance and guidance lol, and I absolutely loved the line about crucifixes, garlic and holy water!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review--my 2300th so far--wow!
Reviewer: wishesonstars (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
i stumbled across this story while searching for another and have been enthralled with it all weekend. your writing is amazing.
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