Reviewer: SeeMyEvil (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! I love the ending! And not in a bad way. lol Great story.
Reviewer: jennayg123 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
So I' ve just read this entire story and actually created an account on Twilighted just to read it because I've herad so many good things about this story and every good thing I heard was absolutely right. This story is AMAZING and I can't wait to read about the end of their weekend and everything else they do to complete the list!!
Reviewer: absmw1618 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
great chapter, love this story :)
Reviewer: tinytina (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
excellent story, very fun!
Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
You write so well.....just everything is perfect, perfect, perfect.
And nothing tops perfect.
Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Goodness gracious -- it's hot in here.
"Goodness had nothing to do with it." Mae West.
Reviewer: bridesmaid (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I love Edward's realization and Bella letting him take control. Nice chappy!
Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
That went by so quickly.....just terrific!
Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Those vamps are a kinky bunch, aren't they? LOL Kinkward is at the end of his rope.
Reviewer: katyt22 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
YOU ARE SO AMAZING!!! Thank you so much for this story. PLEASE, keep writing. I can't wait to see what happens and I am soooooo feeling this.
Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Evil Em, working hard to screw Bella's world. Bad boy.
Bella and Edward are so sweet together. Loved the poem.
My guess is the tat is on her bottom -- where only Edward would ever see it.
Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Totally hot. Damn girl, you are good!
Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
I am just so damn proud of her -- and you for letting her turn out like that! As for Edward, we all knew he was a sexy beast -- we should all have one of those. Doncha!
Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
!#?&%!?
The most eloquent line in this chapter. Cannot quit laughing about this one.
Author's Response: Yeah--that's one of my faves too!! XD
Reviewer: justreadit (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
gloriously sexy story!!!
Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Car sex in the Aston???!!!! Talk about close quarters.
Reviewer: EmberIce22 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I love how Bella gets to be the one to save Edward in this chapter....fantastic!! Also I forgot to say that I had to chuckle when I saw that you made the "bulter's" name Robert....priceless.....Rob can wait on me hand and foot any day!!
Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
No hate.....way too good and I don't care if anything gets crossed off entirely. Sexcapades continues.....
Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Loved that last line -- that was beautiful. The rest what hot, smutty, get-down to the ground sex. Fantastic job!
Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Good grief! What an unbelievable turn-on!
Reviewer: bubbadoghouse (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
This was fantastic! You have kept me sneaking off to read all day! I never ceased to amazed at your talent. Great job!
Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Whoah, what an imagination and it is running completely amuck! I'm sitting on the tiles outside the bathtub completely agog.
Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Tic off #1 - pretty close to perfect!
Reviewer: LoriRae (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
i love this story. the sex scenes are so nicely written and so well done. so very hot. cant wait to read what cums next. ;)
Reviewer: Weredragon (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Gah...just Gah! Hot, sweet, loving, sexy, exciting, scary and comforting. How do you roll that all in to one chapter? Well done.
- H
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