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Reviewer: jdhsmomth (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
loved it! Love this story too. Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: celticstorm08 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Wow! That was amazing! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: alicia cullen (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
dude that chapter was even better than the last, lol i like how alice walked in at the most devastating time, lol
Reviewer: alicia cullen (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
i thought it was pretty good..odd to think of bella doing or acting like that but good
Reviewer: emmemannonen (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
That was an awesome chapter, even though it's the last for now, I think it has been the best so far in term of the development of their relationship and for Edward realizing that he won't always have to take care of Bella, eventually. Even now before she's turned. I thoroughly enjoyed it, I'll keep checking back to see if there's an update. Thanks for much for sharing this whole story, I can't can't can't wait to see what's next!!
Reviewer: emmemannonen (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Oh bless your heart for writing such a long chapter, I haven't even read it yet, but I wanted to say that! I was getting sad it was getting to the most recent chapter!
Reviewer: konstantinaaliyah (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
A wet Edward deserves ..... I'm sorry that was completely innapropriate. This is an excellent story, and I disagree completely that any of it is OOC.
Reviewer: SecretlySeverus (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
aww... everything we could want (smut, lemons, plot, edward!!) all wrapped into one glorious chapter: you rock!!! Thanks!!!
Reviewer: konstantinaaliyah (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
yessssss perfect amount of smut and morals
Reviewer: SeeMyEvil (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Oh no, I'd forgotten which kind of protection she was wearing. My mistake. lol ;P
Author's Response: XD!
Reviewer: emmemannonen (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Thanks for the tip about Emmett's text! OMG! I was immediately confused too. Still going great!
Reviewer: nicolleblack (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
this is such a good story..well done i cant stop reading it!!!
Reviewer: emmemannonen (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Oh my wow! That was hot, actually this whole story so far has been really hot. I'm SO glad it's not over yet!!
Reviewer: lily_flower (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Hi there! I just recently found out about your fan fic here so I don't know if you already explained or addressed this. (This story is AWESOME to the MAX, btw!!!) Didn't Edward already tasted Bella's blood when he saved her from James...unless you mean tasting her blood just for the pleasure and not in a matter of life-or-death. Totally understandable. Did I mention you're awesome? I'm gonna continue now...Thanks for this great piece of writing. Please continue, too.
Author's Response: Exactly--you've got it. She says something in that paragraph about "this time" it being "for pleasure"--Edward did not think it was okay to taste or want to taste her blood then and derived no pleasure from it. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: SeeMyEvil (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Hold on, I thought she was on her period? Good chapter otherwise though :D
Author's Response: Yes. And?
Reviewer: calusariver (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Clever AND funny!
Reviewer: wishiwasacullen (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Oh. My. God. I don't know what else to say......I have been up all night, unable to peel myself away from this story. You are amazing......I cannot wait for MORE, MORE, MORE.
Reviewer: icetease69 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 01:08 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
You are the queen. I bow to you.
I saw this reviewed on PPSS and I HAD to check it out. You. Did. Not. Disappoint.
Good, good story, with chemisty and love. So much smut is either too sexual with not enough sweet, or too much sweet and they skimp on the sex. Such a great balance. Guh.
I would be up til 4 reading all 16 chapters instead of writing an essay. Congratulations on an amaziiiing story, enough to distract me from one of the last essays of my life :P
*applause*
Author's Response: Thanks for such a positive and fun review! Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: LoriRae (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Hi, I picked up your story a couple of days ago and i just wanted to say what a great story it is. I think it is so well written and your sex scenes are so hot. I absolutely love it. I think it all is so tastefully written i cant wait for the next installment. great job, well done.
Lori
Reviewer: makelim (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
You are awesome. I was so hoping you went there!
Reviewer: Lumin (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
wow. just wow that is all i can say
Reviewer: SeeMyEvil (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Ah, good chapter. I don't mind blood talk, don't worry. lol
Reviewer: juicybitkathy (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
its was really good, lol!MORE!
Reviewer: Emeralds and Rubies (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update ASAP!!!!! Can't wait for more!!!!!
:) :) :)
Reviewer: SeeMyEvil (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! I love the ending! And not in a bad way. lol Great story.
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