Whew. HOTT!!! I was home sick and read the whole thing starting last night until this evening. DAMN GIRL!

Haha, omg I will never be able to step into the Imax again without laughing xD Don't worry, you did a great job explaining Victoria! It is a pretty old kind of city, but it has it's modern touches. Boring in my opinion, but I've lived here all my life :P

Anywho! This chapter was great! (: It was nice that you stepped away from the whole sexualness (yus, as of now that is a word) and added some other parts. The Imax scene was the cherry on the cake ;) Some how that sounds creepy. D:

This was like the first ever Twilight Fan fic I have read and it's defs my favorite. I find that the first story I read when I find out about a new book is always my fav. (ex. Daddy on HPFF. If you don't know what I'm talking about you should read it!!!) I love how Bella is so not Bella, but at the same time she is xD Your characterisation is really good! So, keep up the ah-mazing work & I'm totally looking forward to the next chapter!

xoxox <33 - Caitlyn

That Aerie resort is amazing! It absolutely seems like a place Edward would take Bella, or any of the Cullens for that matter. And who knew that a punishment would be a freaking Tiffany's ring?! I'm so jealous....lol.

Oh my ... you have to be kidding me! You cannot just leave it there! This isabsolutely and completely amazing! I cannot wait to find out what EDWARD has planned!!! and what Bella's revenge will be (for emmett) ! I hope you write again soon ! please ... if there is some way to let me know !! thank you for this!

Wow! I'm getting all kinds of brave ideas ;-)...

really reall good. i hope you add more.

I love the emotional side to their relationship just as much (if not more) than their physical.  Well done!

expectations met and then some!!!! you go girl! i mean damn where did that coome from? could not have imagined better by self. please keep writting i think i speak for all of us readers when i say we are hooked.

First time reviewer here!  I have been home on maternity leave and late nights up with my sweet little babe have gone by MUCH faster thanks to your story!  I read a chapter or 2 each night and I can't WAIT for the rest!  It has also made intimacy with my husband more passionate, as we can't partake of the dirty deed right now!  I suppose we have something in common with E&B, although for different reasons!  You've reminded me again of how wonderful and intense young love can be!

Keep on writing.  Can you tell us something of your novel?  Obviously you don't want to just give it away, as you'd like to be published and GET PAID WOMAN ... but maybe a teaser chapter?  You need a website. 

Author's Response:

I have two little ones so I remember those days--only there was no Twilight yet to help me pass those hours!  Congratulations to you!  An author website isn't a bad idea--I'll have to think of that.  It would be nice if there was a place to post some original fiction here, but that's not Twilighted's purpose...thanks for reviewing!

Can't wait for the next one! This thing is addictive!

So, normally I don't review in the middle of a story. But I jsut have to say, I LOVE your ExB texting. They stay in character, use fairly good grammar and english, whichis awesome. I hate text speak, though the occasional @ or whatever is fine if it's tasteful, which you accomplish.

E:  You have mail!

Haha. I laughed out loud for that, literally.

B:  What are you wearing?

E:  Boxers

For some reason, this had me cracking up. I could just imagine someone stating "Boxers" proudly.

LOVE the Emmet twist...I feel her pain and embarrasment!