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Reviewer: dianscot (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
This is the BEST Bella and Edward story ever!!
Reviewer: dianscot (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
OMG!!! that is all i can manage!
Reviewer: Siledubh (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
This story has Everything! Sweetness and sweatiness, love and lust, conversation and cavorting and even a travel log -This was a learning experience on so many levels and, just yum! I was so "there" that I have to go attack my husband and follow it up by staring soulfully into his eyes for a while. Thanks!
Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Awesome chapter! The bit with Carlisle...hilarious!!! And the club thing & after was hot! Great way to break in the Aston Martin which is hot all by itself!!!
Reviewer: dianscot (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
genius!!
Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
please update! I need a LIST fix!
Reviewer: dianscot (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
sheesh... how IS it that this is not the top favorite story???
Reviewer: Kalle (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Amazing. I can't wait to find out about the surprise he has for her. I loved that she was able to save him in this chapter.
Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Wow, this just keeps getting hotter, doesn't it! Great, again!!!
Reviewer: magandaangel (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Such an excellent story and i absolutely loved this chapter and the development between the 2 of them.
It was great that bella took charge of a potential messy situation and also edwards realisation that he can keep control.
Cant wait for more and keep it up! :)
Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
A wet Edward deserves more than a review! :)
Jasper's reaction was great, and Alice, only wearing blue lace panties! I love that!
Great chapter!!!
Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
That list is hot! Number 17 is hot in a you know you should think it's gross or wrong, but it's not way. And she left him her panties...haha, Alice would be so proud!
Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
This story is all kinds of awesome so far! I read what you have up of your other story "While You Were Gone". Can't wait to read more of that, and I can't wait to finish what you have posted of this one so far and then some!!!
Reviewer: Rayette (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
The best first chapter I've read so far. Well done! Great concept, great execution. You are a real writer.
Reviewer: cfmom (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Now that I'm caught up... Whew this story is HOT. I will admit that it took me some time to get used to the language become more sexual, more graphic and much more intense throughout the course of the story as Edward and Bella just don't read that way to me; well they didn't before now. It was hard to wrap my brain around a 19th century Edward Cullen using some of words that he did but once my brain caught up it may have caused a slight higher heart rate. ;) Bella taking control didn't catch me quite as off-guard as it was practical for her to learn how and want to help Edward with control. Some of her fantasies though? I agree with Rosalie, I didn't know she had it in her.
I'm anxious to see how the rest of the story plays out, especially as everyone is now in on Bella's revenge plan for Emmett. Can't wait for that. And even though I know (if you're following canon) that Edward restrains himself from taking Bella all the way until after the wedding, it will be fun to see if he can actually make it that long.
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review. I know the language seems very OOC for some readers for Edward. But here's my thinking/rationale: he was a teenage boy who wanted to be a soldier; cursing was common in his day too, though not necessarily a polite thing to do among people of his class, so certainly he would have been familiar with it even then; he's had a century of not only hearing people curse out loud but hearing it in their heads; he has the capability to learn; he picks up other aspects of culture as time passes (clothing, music, etc.); and he's never before been in a situation where he feels this out of control and therefore might be willing to let himself go more than usual. I realize you didn't necessarily want a dissertation (!) on the matter, but others have asked this question and so I thought you might not be the only one interested in why I took it this direction. Really appreciate your reviewing!
Reviewer: teresagabriela (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
This was fabulous. Thank you so much for writing this and sharing it with us! You captured the characters so well and then took them even further than Stephanie Meyers. Your story brought out so much depth of character and yet it always felt true to the original. You are a wonderful writer and I hope you will continue to create.
Reviewer: dianscot (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
that is the best chapter of any story ever!
Reviewer: courtenay (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Wow - this is seriously amazing. I'm definitely anticipating the next chapter.
Reviewer: dianscot (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
sooo great- sorry, no better words to use! thanks!
Reviewer: twilover09 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Wow, that was great how Bella saved Edward for once! I like how their relationship is progressing in so many ways. I just started your story a couple days ago, and hope you are able to update again soon!
Reviewer: futuremrsvampire13 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
you are an exceptionally amazing author.
i'm not going to lie,
i creamed my fucking panties.
more than once.
: ]]
will you marry me?!
Author's Response: Are you opposed to polygamy? XD If not, the answer is yes!
Reviewer: sidewalkcandy (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I am absolutel in love with this story! I find I have the same enthusiasm for reading it as I did when I read Twilight for the first time. Although the characters are the same and the premise of the story hasn't strayed too far from the original, you have found a way to develop a different energy around Stephenie's beloved characters which makes their story seem new and exciting all over again. You're a very talented writer and I find myself anxiously awaiting your updates everyday. I enjoy reading where your sexually twisted imagination takes Edward and Bella, enough so that it has inspired an Edward and Bella moment in my own life. My husband greatly appreciated it and pays you much gratitude for it! We both do!!!!
Reviewer: GeneralGem (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Whoop i re read it again and i love it even more yaya. keep writin gr8t work.
Gem
Author's Response: Gem! You wrote my 2400th review! I can't even believe it! Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Redlady (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Holy cow woman!! I just found this thread a couple of days ago. WONDERFUL!!! You do an awesome balance of their emotional/romantic love and their physical love. I hope you decide to do a series of them post Bella's transformation. Keep it coming! (no pun intended...)
Reviewer: xFeathersxx (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
There. Let him suck on that one for a bit. Er, actually, let me suck on that one for a bit. Please? With a cherry on top? My cherry! On top! Ha! I'm so far gone....
Oh my god. That is seriously my mind on a daily basis. Hilarious.
So I totally love this story. Hot and sexy and awesome and sweet and cute and fluffly and angsty and soooo true!!!
You have the characters down, with just the right amount of everything that goes into Edward and Bella's relationship.
Thank you so much for this story! Please update!
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that particular internal dialogue out. I thought it was cute and it would be what would be going through my mind if Edward Cullen and I were teasing each other! Thanks for the review!
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