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Reviewer: booboo_kitty (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
I think my arms went numb at some point. Jesus.
Reviewer: melissa95 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
amazing chapter i think possibly one of my favorites i can not wait to read 18! xoxo
Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
uhh, too delicious
Reviewer: SarcasticGirl (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Just when I think things can't get any hotter, you go and unleash this chapter on us. Good heavens woman, I hope you have enough tricks left up your sleeve for when these two finally DO do it!
Reviewer: flormi (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
amazing!
Reviewer: wolvesnvamps (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
You are asking what I thought? I can't think straight after reading that mind-blowing chapter. Damn-I think I need a cigarette.
Reviewer: lisa89 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Holy crap, that was amazing! I thought you couldn't get any better after the first scene, there, but you totally lived up to that standard at the end. That's all I can say, holy crap!
I also loved the idea of Edward's composition being performed, although I really wish he could've played it himself. That would have been amazing.
I'm glad Bella convinced Edward that they should wait, because she was selfless enough to know that was really what he wanted. But man, it's so hot to see Edward lose control like that!
Reviewer: Holliebell (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Omg at first I was a little iffy about this, but then I love how Edward knew and was playing games and then outta no where Alice shows up and of course knows everything! I loved this chapter.
Reviewer: greenfirl35 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
It's okay...delay of gratification only makes the next chapter all that much better! Nice one on the missing panties - gee i wonder where theycould be - not to hard to guess...Loved it!
Reviewer: greenfirl35 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
I absolutely agree - #10 Definitely deserves a review! Whew! Where to begin? "Abort! Abort! I can't handle dominant Edward." That pretty much sums up the whole thing, I almost couldn't handle that either! :) I love how the they worked together as a team both times - very sexy. And I love the last paragraph! Keep it up - I never want the list to end! Thanks
Reviewer: greenfirl35 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
That was seriously hot - Jasper and Edward? Come on! That was over the top, but in a really good way! :) Your Alice is cracking me up, too...
I liked his thought that she is making him fall apart without even being present and the "This woman" lines - excellent! You have the physical and the emotional perfectly combined! Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: greenfirl35 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Oh and the panties in the bed for retaliation? Diabolical!
Reviewer: greenfirl35 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
I like #17 -how is she going to manage that? Is she going to get Carlisle to help her "donate" a pint or two? Why not - the ultimate gift to Edward? Can't wait to read more...:)
Reviewer: playing_with_cullens (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Just wanted to say congrats on becoming number 1!!! Woo-hoo!! I can't get enough of this storym can't wait for the next update :) xoxo
Reviewer: greenfirl35 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Keep up the excellent work! That one is going to be hard to top, but I have every confidence that you will! :)
Reviewer: tmr (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
This is a great story! I read all of the current chapters (16) straight through - I can't wait until you post more!
Thank you for filling in (and skillfully... um, expanding...) this compelling love story.
Your writing is true, sweet, and sexy all at the same time.
Please add new chapters soon!
Reviewer: silversetsfire (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I know you've heard this many times, but I love this story. I think you have struck the perfect balance of sex and plotline. I really enjoy how you can make converstation between Edward and Bella seem so natural, it's obvious that you are a very talented writer. I'm hoping that they can go 'all the way' before Bella is turned, and I'll be interested to see how you approach Bella's transformation. I always wised that in the actual books Edward and Bella could have expressed their desires more and this story really fills in the blanks for me!
I don't know if this site allows posting links to other websites but I coulden't help but remember a certain O.B. advertisement while reading the latest chapters. (http://commercial-archive.com/ooh/ob-tampons-dracula-print-switzerland) XD
Reviewer: 23beatrice (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Love your take on things! I just spent the week rewarding myself with chapters from The List after the kids were in bed. I want to write a more in-depth review, but don't have the time at the moment...but wanted to at least tell you how much I LOVE the story you've imagined. So many details were included, and seemed like things SM would have written. you really thought this through, and finally...SOME ANSWERS to what happens each month when she has her period!!!! As a 34 year old mom of 2, I was wondering how any of them stand being in HS!!!!
Will write more in the next few days, but thanks for allowing more tidbits (and steamy ones! yes!) of Bella & Edward's story to be added to the story.
ANNE
Reviewer: magicdreams (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Yeah you're good. I'm going to have to read all your other stories! I hope you never stop writing!
Reviewer: magicdreams (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
AAAH! You have a gift!
Reviewer: Charly (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
You go girl. At 64, your writing turned me on. "Bella was making me whole," is my favorite line. I am new to the site. YOurs is the second story Ive read, and I am thrilled with getting regular Twilight fixes.
Thank you. (Charly is my nickname; I am a woman.)
Reviewer: magicdreams (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
You are EPIC. Hollly cow. WOW. Wow, wow, wow. Amazing!
Reviewer: magicdreams (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
YOU ARE AMAZING! Holy Toledo!
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
This is fun and i want more plz!
Reviewer: moon_stone (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I'm going through withdrawls from one of my favorite drugs!! I need more!!! When will we get more yummy-ness??
Author's Response: I submitted the next chapter on Thursday afternoon. Will be up as soon as it is betaed!
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