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Reviewer: girls_got_bite (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Hot, hot, hot!!! I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: irebporti (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
laura you never cease to amaze me
another perfect chapter just like the rest *sigh*
Reviewer: isabellatrix (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
WOW that was AMAZING! My breathing picked up just from reading it...phenominal job!
However, the best line in the whole chapter, hands down... "Alice, I am going to buy you a present".
Yes. Phenominal.
Reviewer: Dr Jones (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
That was FUCKING AWESOME!!!!!
Finally trusting himself? So great..
Sex on the balcony? Fantastic!!!
The symphony playing Belle's Lullaby? So damn romantic....
Guh! You hit it all with this one... out of the park!!!
Reviewer: Bled Dry (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
so ... hot .... no ....words....
YES!
Reviewer: Beckylady (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Gah...please tell me you're planning on doing a wedding night in this series. I am so enjoying insatiable Bella and Edward!! Woohoo! Thank you. :)
Reviewer: Ebun (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
HOT!!! Can't wait for the next installment!
Reviewer: Simona (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Would review but can barely concentrate on anything but trying to breathe right now. So incredibly hot, I was yelling at one stage for them to just fucking do it, the tensions killing me! Great work!
Author's Response: You and me both, bb. My fingers were just fucking itching to describe how it felt to him when he slid into her from behind. Like, seriously, I was at war with myself!
Reviewer: LauraLynn (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
wow! so much variety in this chapter!
i love that Edward found his confidence! and Bella's patient encouragement <sigh>
fabulous!
Reviewer: IleanaCullen (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Seriously MADE MY FUCKING MONTH!!!! I just kept thinking of that picture that used to be on the pervs pack smut shack with the guy taking the girl from behind! Could you imagine...oh wait I can now....over and over and over again with edward...like I said you made my month!!! Loves it!!!!!!!
Reviewer: maisydaze (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
its not a matter of what I thought...but of what I felt! Ah...and it feels SO damn good!
Your writing is amazing and so frackin' erotic! It keeps me gasping for more! ;)
Reviewer: Jessica1971 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
So. Fucking. Hot.
In the words of Edward..... MORE
Reviewer: BellaGioia (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Holy crap was that HOT! I loved every bit of it and...yep...gonna go back and read it again right now.
Such lemony goodness!
Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Fucking hot damn if that wasn't one of the hottest chapters, oh my god. You are amazing girl I love how long these chapters are! Seriously please keep it coming, I can't even wait for more! SUCH a good chapter!
Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Holy shit.
I can't think.
I love this story too much it's unhealthy. And I'm pretty sure I love you as well. (haha I hope you aren't freaked out by that :D)
This was unbelievably hot. Like, wow...I'm really speechless.
AMAZING!
Reviewer: Burrberry Bugsy (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Wooooow. I can't even put into words how many different kinds of sexy this chapter was. Great job! I don't think I've ever said this, but your writing skills are absolutely amazing! I kid you not. Seriously, I applaud your work with loud claps because every chapter you put out seems to be better than the last. Bravo!
Oh, and I'm sure you were already well aware of this fact, but did you know you're now number one on the top ten reviewed list? Congratulations, you totally deserve it! Thanks for the amazing update and I hope to see another sometime soon!
Reviewer: TastyOne (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
OH MY GOD!!! Best chapter EVER. Hmmm...I think I need a moment to myself :-) KEEP POSTING... LOVE IT.
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Okay, that chapter was just freaking hot. Loved everything about it. The symphony was really romantic. Just...guh, loved the entire thing, and then some. Can't wait for more.
Quick question - I honestly can't remember if I asked this or not before, so forgive me if I'm repeating myself - but are you planning on continuing this story after the wedding? After the change? I love everything thus far, but of course there are certain things on the list we can't fully appreciate until after all that happens, and I'd love to read about them.
Author's Response: Glad you liked! Definitely after the wedding. How I'm handling what happens beyond that I haven't fully decided yet. But I'm aware of the issue you raised and plan to figure out some way to address it. I'll leave it at that for now ;)
Reviewer: sintia (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Wow! I'm speechless, so just Wow! So hot.
Reviewer: sherilynn (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
I think this is the best chapter by far!! Very hot and sexy
Reviewer: bigred (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
i think im gonna go take a cold shower!! haha what can i really say, hummmm STEAMY AMAZINGNESS wow awsome i would very much like to find me a man much like ur improved version of edward. and wanna say THANK U as have had a really shit day and well this has made it a whole lot better!
LOVE IT!
xx
Reviewer: Dava_Luna (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
oh...... my..... edward...... how i wish i was bella on that balcony. (cept i would have told him to go for it!) How long is this story?? Will you write in the wedding? and the fun afterward? and the change? okay im getting ahead of myself here......... POST MORE SOON!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Where's the fire extinguisher. Forget the extinguisher, just let me burn...
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
I would write a long review but I think I need a cold shower first lol :)
Great chapter!
Reviewer: Alyssafan (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Wow - you do the best writing of Edward and Bella's sexual relationship! It's terrific - imaginative, fun, and hot. I think it's tricky to write about Edward and sex without making it silly or without compromising the character, but you do it really well. I think the OOC moments also stay in line with the characters while showing new sides of them. Sorry if this feedback isn't more useful, but I just wanted to tell you how much I like your work.
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