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Reviewer: Phae (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
It's two more weeks until the wedding, right?
How the HELL are we (Bella, Edward, and your readers) going to survive until then?? We'll all be babbling idiots, dragging our knuckles on the ground.
Wow, what a way to start the weekend!
Reviewer: LoriRae (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
so fucking awesome. great job!!!!!!!!!!
Lori
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
wow
Reviewer: Andilea (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Absolutely Brilliant. If you ask me they have way too much will power to not just finish the deed. But Im glad they are waiting. Please keep up the great work on this story. I cant wait to read more.
Reviewer: sstreger (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Whoa another amazing chapter! I loved Schumann's Piano Concerto lol I'm so glad you used it, it's so beautiful. That last scene was so hot. I don't even remember the list anymore....except for the bio table! I can't wait for that one!
Reviewer: SoImpossible (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
UNF. Hot. I love these two crazy kids. The symphony surprise was utterly adorable. Their escalating passion is a joy to read. I'm not sure who can't wait for their wedding night more.. the readers or B/E.
Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Wow. You made just the right combination of romantic smut! The concert was so sweet and everything back in the room was HOT! GREAT job!!
Reviewer: sugarfoot (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Such a great chapter. It was romantic and sweet yet undeniably sexy. Great job as always!
Reviewer: scottslass (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Totally freaking hot! You are the Queen of NC17 in my book at this particular moment. ;-)
Reviewer: isabellatrix (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
PERFECT amount of steamyness and first-time akwardness. Wonderful!
Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Okay, this is love.....never ever stop writing. It is fated to be!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Great chapter. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Twiggy (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
God I love your writing! Always a pleasure to see that you have a new chapter posted! Thank you for the amazing story that you have laced into each and every chapter, I truly enjoy how you have expanded Bella and Edward's story for us all.
Reviewer: myedwardismine (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
OMG!! I'm speechless...freakin' speechless!!! How do you do it woman?!?!!?
I'm so glad that he finally did the deed...that was amazing writing as usual! Loved it all...too many good parts to even mention.
And how you ever resisted having him take her from behind right there on the balcony I'll never know. UUUGGHHH!!!!! For a minute there I thought, ok, this is it....this is really it!!! How did you stop those fingers of yours?!?!?!! You have more self control than Edward Cullen for God's sake!!!
Loved it loved it loved it!!!! You're the best!
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Hello again! I was reviewer #2500 and can you tell how much I love your story since I'm here again? haha I noticed you told one reviewer you were going to write past the wedding and her change. YAY! Here are my 2 cents. In BD I thought the honeymoon was terrible, didn't like the pregnancy and the "bloodbath birth". I really could have done without their having a kid but its SM's world and her books. However, in YOUR delightful AU, I'm SO hoping you change the post wedding part of their story and continue to stick with Bella's "List". There are plenty of other ff stories out there that use the pain/angst SM used in BD. I really want to continue seeing fun, sexy times for our lovely ExB and I hope you do, too. Pretty please? I'll keep writing and beg if I must!
Author's Response: Not to worry Richelle. This is a post-Eclipse fic, so I will be completely disregarding Breaking Dawn. There will be no demon spawn. There will be no angsty begging for sex. None of that. How's that sound?
Reviewer: irishjo (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Genius writing!!!!!!! Superb chapter!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: isabellatrix (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Nope, don't hate you at all for it. In fact, I think it was necessary to have a break between all of the go-go-go, and have them pause and reflect. It was fantastic, and much needed. Great job, hon.
Reviewer: KelBellaCullen (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Thanks for spoiling us with that awesomeness!! Holy Hell!
Reviewer: isabellatrix (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
HOW can such a hot, steamy chapter make me CRY at the end!? Seriously, how the fuck did you do that? I was all, "Oh, that was so hot", and then the last sentence hit, and suddenly I'm CRYING saying "That was SO BEAUTIFUL!"
You're amazing.
Author's Response: That's awesome of you to say. Thanks. So much.
Reviewer: tosani (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
whew, i'd never want to leave that villa! this is just so damn good to read with the added bonus that its just damn hot!!!
Reviewer: r-pks (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
I'm not even half way through this chapter but I just had to review and say uhh... well.. er.. that's reeallly FUCKING HOT! I cannot explain to you how fantastic you are at writing these lemons. It's indescribably hot. Not describable, you are thee master at lemons for sure.
Author's Response: Keep reading! Keep reading! It ain't over yet!
Reviewer: Leesh (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
HOLY HELL WOMAN THAT WAS HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You crammed more hottness into that one chapter than should be allowed by law....and let me state for the record.....I friggin' loved it!!!!
Thanks for the update chickie!!! Can't wait for more smuttilicious-ness!! Keep it comin' baby!!!
LOL~Leesh
Reviewer: mmfcfa (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Very hot!!!
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
I love this story so much and look forward to every chapter! You write so well. I really enjoy reading everything. I sincerely mean that.
Reviewer: isabellatrix (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
I LOVED the bit of Alice/Jazz action in there. That was phenominal.
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