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Reviewer: angel1babe86 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
sooooooooooooo good!!!.. now I have to get ready to leave on my trip... lol I leave for the train station in 15 minutes! haha I just HAD to read this before I left....
Reviewer: Marliarna (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
OK. great. Now I need a cold shower and a dose of Kryptonite.
Reviewer: Olliemama (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Woohoo!! It just keeps getting better and better!
Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
God we love you....from behind.
Author's Response: Right back at ya bb!
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Reviewer #2500 here again. What do I think of your last answer? Yay! No devil spawn in this story! Thank you!
By the way, hubby says to say "thanks". I've never read any TW ff to him, read ch 17 to him earlier tonight, and well...you know. haha
Reviewer: isabellatrix (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Fun, FUN chapter!
Reviewer: kaii (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
OK can anyone say AWESOME!
AMAZING
EPIC
BEAUTIFUL
MIND BLOWING
LIFE ALTERING?
I loved these last two chapters!!!
Can't wait for the wedding night
Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Wow Laura. Just...wow.
Thanks to your masterful writing of this chapter, white lettering against a black background has burned into my brain a very powerful sexual trigger.
Well. Done.
Reviewer: Jmemac (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
You are an amazing writer. I am enoying this story so much! Your writing and story telling abilities are addicting!
I am a 42 year old mother of 3 boys. When I discovered the Twilight series I couldn't wait to have an hour to myself each day to read. I hated when the books were finished. Honestly, I think I went through a bit of a depression when I no longer had the love story of Edward & Bella to escape to.
I realize now that so many aspects of their deep & passionate relationship were never fully covered by SM. That is why I believe I was left with such a strong feeling of wanting & needing more. Your beautiful & clever writing skills have allowed me to find a bit of closer, so to speak . You answered so many of my questions! Your ability to stay true to the original charcters and yet bring such a fresh and original twist to this wonderful story is inspiring . You are a wonderful writer! I look so forward to more stories from you in the very near future, I hope!
although I certainly hope you will continue to add many more chapters to this story, & I can't wait for Edward to discover the list & prehaps add a few of his own numbers!!!
I think I should also tell you how very much my husband appreciates your clever writing skills as well! He has a new apprecition for the power of Vampires!
You Rock! Thank you!
Your fan, Jamie
Author's Response: Hi Jamie--I have never read or written fan fiction before Twilight. I found myself searching it out for the very reasons you listed--disappointment at there being no more of their story to read, and a feeling that there was still so much left untold. So I can identify exactly. So glad you're enjoying, and thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: erinnv007 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Wow! You definitely deliver! This was the first chapter I had to wait for (I only recently discovered this story) and though it was torture waiting, it was definitely worth it! I can't wait to see the next items they cross of the list!
Bravo! :)
Reviewer: nannanutbread (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
i cried....so sweet and so FREAKING HOT. keep them coming, and i'll keep reading!
Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Oh my God, that was fucking incredible. Unbelievably sexy--him waking her up and then actually tasting her was amazing!!!! Loved it, loved it, loved it. The part where Bella was glad to have him cum on her--very hot. Eager for more!
Reviewer: isabellatrix (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I'm not weirded out at all by the idea of him drinking her regular blood...I find that to be a really cool, sexy twist. However, the whole period blood thing...is kind of grossing me out. Not gonna lie. I wish it wasn't, but...ew.
Everything else is phenominal, though!
Author's Response: Sorry, I realize it's not for everyone, but it just seems quite natural to me in the general context here! Thanks for giving it a try, anyway.
Reviewer: windchime (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Very hot indeed, with some goregous romantic moments thrown in. Bravo!
Reviewer: vampiremama (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
I don't know what to say. I think I'm blushing a little bit.
Reviewer: IntoTheNight (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Fated indeed. Another awesome chapter. :) Jeez. I need a cold shower.
Reviewer: isabellatrix (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Haha! Oh Emmett... =) That was great! Just the right amount of sexyness and fun/sweetness.
Reviewer: arfalcon (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
OMG, this is the freakin hottest story of them all. The way you keep ratcheting up the anticipation, then the excitement and finally the release is absolutely unbelievable. You are the Goddess of Love.
Reviewer: littlelady (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Damn, girl! I freaking love it when you update on the weekends! Hubby is home, kids in bed.....yeah....
You did not disappoint! Thank you, Alice ; ) for that extra day! How sweet and thoughtful she is! Yeah, I loved every minuted of this chapter...it was all so damn hot! Whew! "Be bad, Bella" and "Use me. Please." Those words nearly did me in!
So, now it's close to the wedding, but still plenty to do on the list, so I'm still stoked! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: LoveStoryFan (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Oh My God!!! That was absolutely amazing. I hope you update again soon!!!
Reviewer: mishel635 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Holy f-ing crap! You know how to write those sex scenes like it's nobody's business!!! (Or should I say, those non-sex scenes :) Really though, SO hot!
Seriously, you are an amazing writer overall, and I LOVE this story. Genius idea having the symphony playing Bella's lullaby- I got goosebumps at that part! So glad that their weekend is being extended. I love how Edward has become so close to actually giving in and now has Bella reminding him that they shouldn't! GREAT chapter! Can't wait for an update!! Absolutely LOVING this story!
Reviewer: sdcullen (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Ohmygod I love this story!
Reviewer: sarawthouttheh (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
That was a delicious update. DELICIOUS. And this may be the first time in a very long time that I didn't read the update at work. But yeah. Yum. -gives self papercut and waits for Jasper so I can seduce him, List style-
Reviewer: msdenisetexas (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
HOLY.. OMG.. I have no words.. GAH.... Best chapter yet.. by far.. I am sitting here panting.. I kid you not... I really really hope you plan on following this through her change.. Dear Lord...
Off to go ravage my husband.. I am sure he will be thanking you!!!
Reviewer: isabellatrix (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Perfect. I think I need a cold shower.
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