This chapter was HAWT! This whole STORY is HAWT! lol

~ B

I couldnt begin to tell you How Much I enjoy "The List"

you are an Amazing writer! with Amazing talent!

Please keep up the Great work! can't wait for more Chapters!

 

This one was Beyond Fantastic!!!

*blink* *blink* Um... all coherence has fled me, so I'm afraid this review is going to be pretty useless... and damn, I need to go to work in 5 minutes, with this in my brain! Another spectacular chapter, with another item crossed off the list, right? I loved how tempted Edward was to say 'screw the wedding' (heh, no pun intended), and how Bella managed to bring him back, even though she wanted it as much as he did. Though I am loathe to admit it, I'm glad they decided to wait. The shenanigans they're getting into without fully sealing the deal are certainly more than stimulating! Thanks so much for writing!

Excellent chapter! Keep'em coming!

Bella would NEVER get a tattoo, right? Wrong!!!  I loved it and I especially loved Edward's reaction to it. Thanks for sharing your dirty mind and your great writing, I'm hooked.

That was great, and of course, totally HOT.

I must tell you, I was a relatively casual user of Twilighted until I found your story. And now I'm completely addicted. I'm so in love with these characters...or Edward, rather...and you treat them with such respect, while at the same time creating something between them that we've all been craving. What you write feels real and fitting for Edward and Bella, which is so important. I'm so happy to have found this, which is my Edward and Bella, still themselves, but in more exciting and intimate situations. I'm always checking for and anxiously awaiting updates on The List. Thank you, and please, oh please, keep them coming! =]

Author's Response:

Wow.  That's awesome of you to say.  So glad you're enjoying!

You're a bad bad woman Laura. I brought the lappie up to bed so I could read and I swear to God I could only read half the chapter.  I should have known to bring a mop and bucket upstairs with me!

Needless to say the dh was VERY pleased with the result ;-)

I then had to reread the whole damn thing this morning cos you know...I kinda lost my place.  The image of Edward naked outside against the balcony is an image I want to carry to my grave along with the one of wet Edward....gah.

Joking apart bb you really outdid yourself here.  The passion and the emotion just leapt of the page and the depth of how they feel for each other is palpable.  I just love love love this story so much.

Answer me this though....how are they going to last out two weeks till the wedding?  Doesn't the embargo start now?  How are you going to manage?  How are we going to manage.  JESUS. WEPT.  We'll all be on the verge of implosion.

See you on the forums bb

MWAH

Author's Response:

Shiv--I'll forever associate the phrase "Jesus Wept" with you!!!!!!!!!!  Yes, everybody is asking how they (and us) will be able to tolerate the two weeks with no action.  Should be interesting.  I'll leave it there.  Sorry I made you make a mess.  But if you got sex out of this chapter (while I haven't, damn it all to hell), then I don't feel too bad about it!  XD

omg!!!!!!

i want to hug you!!!!!!

it was amazing i loved it so much, there was nothing missing, i need more this is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good!!!!! 

ahhhhhhhhhh amazing i dont know what to say!!!!!!

lets just say i called my boyfriend after ;) 

amazing!!!! when is there more????

 

 

Need a drink and a man! Hot!

OH.MY.GOD. That chapter was definately worth the wait it was HOT.

But please try not to make us wait so long for the next chapter thank you.

 

That wuz breathtaking...I absolutely luved it. It just keeps getting better and better.