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Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

Edward's debate whether to wake up Bella and satisfy the desire that she dreaming about was very steamy. The concert was a very romantic and the intimate scenes were very hot. 

Reviewer: xoTinyxo (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

That.chapter.was.HOTT!!! I can't believe he actually did it.  YAY Edward! LoL. & the fact that he had 2 get her to convince him 2 wait ... thats a big 180 for him.  I'm definitely liking this new edward :)    ... can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: flyonthewall13 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

i think edward should get jealous :) i kno bella would never do anything like that with another guy, but it would be nice to see edward growl at a hot wator trying to hit on bella when they go out to eat or something haha then edward will just say something like 'see love, that is one of the reasons that i cant wait to have you to officially make you mine'

Reviewer: joviswoman (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

Loved the symphony, and their dancing to his composition.

And sweet mother of god, the hot sex is just, well, bloody brilliant!

Can't wait for more, excellent story, fantastic writer.

Reviewer: MrsJasperHale (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

There are only two words to describe that chapter: HOT & WOW!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: VampireGroupie (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice

.....that was hot.

Reviewer: Magnolia1988 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

I have loved every single chapter. You have really captured each of the character essence, as well as a little something more. I happy that it finally got to a climatic part, and can not wait to read what happens next.

Reviewer: SweetDulcinea (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

Wow, just w.o.w!  That chapter was incredible.  A perfect blend of sweet and sour and fuckgood.  Any other thoughts I have are far too dirty for me to admit in a public forum  =)

Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

I don't know if I wish you would have had them do it then or if I'm glad you waited. It's torture I tell you. I haven't anticipated anything like this since I was in highschool starting to do all that myself. Update soon please.

Reviewer: jedishelly1 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

Loved it!

Reviewer: wishesonstars (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

oh my. where do i even begin on what i love about this chapter. truth is i can't. i loved every single word. truly amazing. one of my favorite things about this story is the slow build up of their need for each other and how in each chapter it gets more and more powerful. i can only imagine what's to come.

Reviewer: Luv912 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

Sweet! i loved this chapter! and i cant wait to see whats gonna happen next! lol

Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

Only a truly gifted and amazing writer can accomplish what you do: You convey love and lust effortlessly. It seems your writting flows throught he pages.

Your story is filled with love and respect and lust and need, and I can keep going but I´m spent (Just like B). I´m pretending to smoke a cigarrette because I don´t smoke. LOL.

After a satisfying read I have a list of your own, enjoy:

1. Laura Cullen´s The List  # 1 on most reviewed stories list.

2. Laura Cullen´s The List  # 1 on most favorite stories list.

3. Laura Cullen´s The List  # 7 on most read stories list.

4. Laura Cullen´s The List  # 6 on most favorite authors list.

 

Way to go!!!!!!!!

Keep the excellent job you are doing. Anticipating next chapter already.

sincerely,

Karina.

 

 



Author's Response:

Holy cow!  That is a great list!  Thanks for that!  So glad you're enjoying!

Reviewer: twilover09 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

Edward surprising Bella with her lullaby was very sweet!!!! This was a great chapter, and I'm glad they're still at the resort (that place is awesome!)

Reviewer: read_all_over (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

That was wonderful! That symphony idea was so wonderful, just so....perfect! I loved it! I could easily imagine how beautiful it would be for them to dance to their own lullaby! *sigh* Amazing!  

Seriously, this was a brilliant chapter! Still so full of love and desire even after everything they've done together. Not to mention the desperation for the wedding night, bless them. And I don't think it's just Edward and Bella who are anticipating that night so much! ;) he he Can I just say once again, how pleased I am that you're continuing it after the wedding! *squee* >.< lol

This is such a wonderful story, I'm so glad that it's currently climbing the top ten lists. It truly deserves to be! I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope you update soon! XD 

Reviewer: ReluctantRomantic (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

Oh, there are no words: Edward's resolve, Bella's reciprocation, and the symphony playing the lullaby!!! That was incredibly romantic, beautifully set up. and truly awe-inspiring.

Loved the action on the balcony too. (snicker)

Reviewer: Re-Re (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

So amazingly good!

More, please!!!!!

Reviewer: twiighter143 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

EXCELLENT

Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

This story is just awesome! I have enjoyed reading what you have posted already and can't wait to read more!

I like how, even though it's a little OOC, it's still IC enough. And the little things you have them do for each other is amazing and sweet!

I can't wait till you update again!

Reviewer: TheMrsCullen (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

another incredible chapter (as if it wouldn't be!) i particually liked the last balcony scene, so hot.

the concert idea was awesome too, i only wish he had performed it for her!!

amazing job, yet again.  ill be impatiently waiting for more.....

Reviewer: MrsDoctor (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

thats a bit hot?!??!?!?!?!?!

Reviewer: SweetImpakt (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

I really really loved the last chapter. I don't want their weekend to end either ! I hope you update soon, I'm addicted to your story! You're doing an awesome job. I love it.

Reviewer: edwardandbellaforever (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

I hate you! You've made me obsessed!!!!!! lol! This chapter has to have been the hottest! The last scene, phew... cold shower time!!! Cna't wait for your take on the wedding night if this is the lead up! Although i'd be happy if you didn't post the last chapter for years cos i never want this story to end... its so good! Update soon tho... i need my List fix! Can't wait for the lab table one tho! lol. Another truly stunning chapter!!!!

Reviewer: michellerella (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

AMAZING ... no other words :)

Reviewer: Randy (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

Wow that was really hot, and sweet and awesome. Please do not stop writing any time soon. I am so looking forward to the wedding night and when Bella gives Edward the gift of her blood.

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