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Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
I seriously feel like I need to smoke a cigarette with EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER!!!! Two weeks!!! I love it!
Reviewer: all_appologies (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
yup, you went there and i'm glad you did. that was hot. damn virginal principles. the first time can never be on a balcony, but the second time! how did she not notice the friction while he was thrusting between her thighs? no diagram needed, i'll figure it out.
Reviewer: cbear (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
SO amazing. I love this story and I love you for posting it for us
Reviewer: TwilightFiction (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Great story! Bella seems to have forgotten to tick things off on the list...though, I would be pretty distracted, too. Looking forward to more!
Reviewer: Helens_Love (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
I say it everytime but I just adore your words! Amazing I hope this list continues forever with Edward and Bella Im sure there's just an eternity of firsts waiting for them!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
"Taste me. Taste me, Edward." Fucking yes.
I swear, I stopped breathing for a second when I read that (and what came after). It was everything I imagined it would be. There aren't any real words. Guh.
And the symphony? So sweet of Edward. No wonder he was nervous!
As for the balcony after dinner during the thunderstorm...I definitely need to have a balcony constructed, ASAP. That was panty-ripping good!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: G1175 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
So hot wow!!!
Reviewer: KayRad816 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
I really don't know what to say. This whole story is awesome. Great stuff you're writing here. Just saying it's pretty damn wonderful.
I guess that's all.
Thanks for writing, it's a pleasure to read. Pun intended. lol. =]
Reviewer: KS123 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
How is it possible, that just when I think your story cannot get any better, it gets hotter, sweeter, sexier, more passionate, and even better? This was amazing.
You. own. me.
More! :)
Reviewer: Alunya Eclipse (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Wow... just wow. I just found this story and I'm going to need a shower myself now. You've managed to crate a story-line that lets you slowly build the couple towards sex without indulging too early, making it a build up instead of just a sex fest like some of the other stories are. I grovel at your mastry and plead pathetically for more chapters.
Reviewer: Marjojo (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Great chapter! In my fic, "Bella's Naughty Idea," I mention the "giving blood" idea, and Edward does *ahem* "taste it at the source." I'm surprised not more people have written about these things. You did a really good job with it!
Reviewer: Luna_daydreamer (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
awwww,can't wait for the wedding day ;)
Reviewer: imnotuniqueimmonique (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Really hot! I love how you are able to make a great lemon but still stay mainly true to cannon. Keep going it's so great. And I really appreciate that you proof read so well, makes so much easier to concentrate on the story. I'm begging for you to keep writing!
Reviewer: Nannabell (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Ok... That was well.... I am off to take a really cold shower..lol Loving the story!
Reviewer: lovetwilightforever (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
i love it when he says, 'mine'. it sends chills down my spine.
:D
Reviewer: geg (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
What can i say? there is nothing like having any type of physical contact with the love of your life.
To bad no every one can have the cake and eat it (on top of Edward), too.
*sigh*
love the roamntic smutt.
Reviewer: amycullen (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
This story rocks! Can't wait to see what they check off the list next!
Reviewer: lauraleeor (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
so hot! please update soon!!!
Reviewer: Nightshade (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
!!!!
fuck. I don't have anything to say. that was beyond amazing. that was SO FAR BEYOND ANYTHING. EVER.
thank you for making my shitty day go far, far away and bringing me to this very happy place. hahaha, you're amazing, woman!
Reviewer: lionslamb13 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Yowza! Keep the chapters rockin' babe!
Reviewer: Sarichka (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
YAY!... ooft great add, totally made my day. This is AMAZING.
If i could write half as good as you id be content forever.
cant wait for more
Sarichka x
Reviewer: amberlady22 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
wow wow wow wow wow bravo...more please...this was so incredible...thank you this is my favorite fice on the web....it's absolutely amazing!!!!!!!
Reviewer: amberlady22 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
wow wow wow wow wow bravo...more please...this was so incredible...thank you this is my favorite fice on the web....it's absolutely amazing!!!!!!!
Reviewer: tooblu96 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Super hot with some wonderful romance! This story gets better and better. Just when I think I've read the best chapter, you bring us another beauty!!
Reviewer: lovestorylover (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
i just love this. Please hurry with the next chapter.
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