soooo good!! and i am so glad you have extended the w/e!

Holey moley - that was pretty....intense!  Another great chapter!

FANTASTIC!!! AMAZING!!! MORE! MORE! MORE!

HOT, cute, beautiful, HOT, porny, and sweet. (that is the order when I read it).

I loved this chapter! kudos

if god gives you lemons, read them! yummy. that's all i can say right now. i will read more tomorrow. very good by the way, sehr gut!

Grrrr!!! Very Sexy!!! More! More! More!

I'm such a slut! (whimper)

awsomeee! i missed like the last 3 updates cos i thought i had this on my faves, and it wasnt. and reading 3 updates at once has made me greedy. keep updating!

Number 10: Check

Great Chapter. I am trying to review all your chapters because they're just that exquisite. :D

Your characters are soooo themselves, nothing is out of order.

:D Except the swearing, but that's a great addition I believe. :D

Author's Response:

Thanks for the multiple reviews--I really appreciate it and am so glad you're enjoying!

The past two paragraphs have been wonderful!

Wow! Bella is way more erotic than I thought.

Swatting Edward's ass? Laying panties on his bed for revenge?

Naughty Naught Naughty.

Beautifullly Written, and might I say tastefullly too?

:)

The only word I have is AWESOME...and that doesn't even begin to cover it....WOW...

Hahaha, Alice and her future telling. :)

I can only guess what Bella is doing in the shower.

I think I kinda love dense Edward and bold Bella.

I couldn't stifle my giggles while reading.

:)

 

Where to start with good.

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She rolled her eyes. "I don't even know why you ask me that question anymore." She cupped her hand around my cheek. The warmth was life-giving. "I think the more important question is, can you trust yourself? I don't want you to do anything you're not ready to do, Edward, because there's no hurry. We have forever."[Quote]

Thank you for putting that part in. I think it's important that she say that before they go any further. She is pushing in to possibley dangerous territory, not that I think he would hurt her. I'm just saying she knows how important it is to him to wait but his control can only be pushed so far. I'm glad that she is thinking of him too not just pushing him to fulfil her desires. She would never want him to regret their first time. Her pointing out that she is willing to wait and she wants him to be comfortable is huge and shows her growing maturity.

[Quote]I heard her groan against the light after she turned it on and chuckled to myself.[Quote]

I don't know why it is so important to me. But I love these little moments of reality.

[Quote]I'm the vampire. I'm the one who's lived over a century. I'm the one who's indestructible. Yet she's the one throwing down the challenge. Fine. I. Accept.[Quote]

That made me chuckle. So cute.

There are noo other words that can describe the rest of Edwards POV but DAMN HOT!!

[Quote]I laughed. "You were purring."[Quote]

Lol that's so cute.

[Quote]A growl rumbled in his chest. Oh God that sound is so hot. [Quote]

Oh Bella I so agree

[Quote]He had never come so quickly for me before and it made me feel powerful. I felt like his cum on my body was proof of my power and I relished in it.[Quote]

I love her reaction and the reason for it. It's important for her character development. And I love her feeling of power and how good that makes her and more that she is willing to tell him that. It's a long way from The Bella she was when we first met her. Kind of shy and fainted after a kiss. She's come a long way.

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"I laid some clothes out in the bathroom and breakfast will be here in ten minutes." He helped me up and kissed me. When I tried to deepen the kiss he pulled back. "You. Bathroom. Now."

Author's Response:

I absolutely LOVE it when people point out particular sentences or quotes they enjoyed.  Thanks so much for taking the time to do it--I loved the ones you chose!