I like the chapters like this, makes it easier to read at work!  Again, another great chapter!

Wonder how he is going to make Bella explain?  Thanks for a fun story!

Awesome and very hot chappie! =)

I like the blood parts. I find it more erotic and real.

Well....um... that was very , very heart thumpingly wonderful - damn, I haven't got any work done this evening though...Ah well it was so worth it :)

I love the detail that you added, where Edward checked to see how Bella reacted to him cursing.  Great! 

Creative little Bella!  I never would have thought she had it in her!  No pun intended!  Great writing.

Wow. HOT. And I'm speechless...

i apologise in advance for how long this is but i actually wanted to say a whole lot more! :)

most of the time when im reading The List i could swear you are SM herself writing under an alias... you just seem to 'get' the characters so perfectly. i dont see this as some dirty (but awesome!) thing that should never be spoken about, i think its a beautiful story of two people who are desperately in love and are so consumed with one another they can barely stand it. i think we've all had that feeling of intense lust for/with someone, particularly at the beginning of a relationship, the only difference being that the level of trust and comfort in our real lives couldnt even compare to that of edward and bella. i dont want to speak for all of female kind but i know that i want that kind of a relationship someday.

ive said it in previous reviews but i think you are a great writer, you know just how to explain things (both sexual and non-sexual) in a way that captures our attention and i really hope you have a successful writing career ahead of you. i will definately buy your books... i think its safe to say youve already got a decent fanbase out there. i heard about The List from a whole bunch of people on a chat fan website thingy. everyone was gushing about how great it is and told me i just HAD to read it.

thankyou for what youve written so far and im looking forward to the next installment!

Tabs xoxo

I'm lovin' this story...can't stop, got to keep reading!

Once again fantastic, waiting in anticipation for more!

This story is sexy and sweet, which is very hard to balance out in stories. But you do it perfectly! Your characterization of Edward is really good, I love the vulnerable yet naughty persona he has...it's like taking the Edward from the book and giving him Viagra. I love it! Keep up the good work, and review soon!

you are amazing.  I really love the way that along with all the extra...  stuff..  lol  that it is still so very twilgiht.  it is things that they would actually think and say and do...  i have read so many fanfics that are so off from their natural characteristics.....  Bravo