Reviewer: Vanya (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Hot damn! There’s number twenty-one! lmao
I love this keep up the good work please Lol, i think we all have a mental list of what we want to do with Edward lol
Reviewer: bananahammock (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
I made an account just to read this story. It is incredible. I am finally caught up and loving every minute of it. Hopefully you will update soon :)
Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
3 words from my trembling fingers: holy. fucking. shit.
gahhh girl-friend! you are the goddess of all that's fucking HOT!!!
I WANT MORE...SOON! LIKE..TOMORROW?
Reviewer: Word Play (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
wow!
Reviewer: Word Play (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Loving the first chapter On to the next!
Reviewer: Minutiae (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
They're VAMPIRES! You can hardly avoid blood talk or blood anything else! Fantastic chapter. Your story is the first Twilight fan fiction to pull me all the way in - I've only started Eclipse but yours is too good to walk away from. Keep it coming!
Reviewer: fencing babe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
I can't stop reading. I need more - you rock!
Reviewer: fencing babe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
going to need a longer list. I can't stop reading
Reviewer: Twililo (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Love love it. Can't wait for more. (More!)
Reviewer: fencing babe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
OMFG don't stop writing
Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
great chapter. That was so hot I thought the words would burn through the computer.
Reviewer: Tasty (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
DAMN woman!! I couldn't even pause to write a review until now. My hubby is SOOOOO loving you more since I am living out each and every scene of this right along with him. This is just how I would have written the saga if I was as excellent an author as you obviously are lovely lady. KEEP BRINGIN IT!
Reviewer: fencing babe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
need more on the list. Lovin it so far. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: fencing babe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Love it. Kept waiting for Charlie to come in and catch them.
Reviewer: fencing babe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
The panties on the bed is pure genious! Edward isn't going to know what hit him. Love the story so far. Great work.
Reviewer: fencing babe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Fantastic! She definitly needs a longer list. Love that Alice is in on it and helping her. I had assumed when I read the books that they would fool around like this and had been very disapointed that they were so chaste. Thank You for setting it right.
Reviewer: fencing babe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Loved that he could smell her heat and that it drove him crazy.
Reviewer: blkdahlia (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
O. M. G! This chapter was SO hot!! You are doing an amazing job... looking forward to reading more. Thank you!!
Reviewer: nannagud (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
i loves it!
more please. :D
Reviewer: Hazelnut4o6 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
it is VERY unsanitary to have sex on the beach. They better go somewhere where sand crabs aren't present. It's some known fact that a sand crab can... get in
Reviewer: Hazelnut4o6 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
it is VERY unsanitary to have sex on the beach. They better go somewhere where sand crabs aren't present. It's some known fact that a sand crab can... get in
Reviewer: IndieQueen (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
fabulous. absolutely fabulous. this is definitely one of the best sexy fan fics i've read. kudos!
Reviewer: Tasty (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Christ, I have started by own list at this point and it's making my hubby extremely happy! This chapter was just f-ing hot and exactly what I imagined as I was reading the books thinking 'what the hell are they waiting for to at least get steppin with 1st-3rd base already'. Can't wait for him to fufill his tasty promise to B and soon!
Reviewer: Tasty (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
I have been remiss in not reviewing sooner but I couldn't take my eyes off the pages long enough!! This is the best version of pre-honeymoon juiciness I've enjoyed yet! I am L-O-V-I-N-G the whole list and the grinding on the tree in earlier chapter and this dom scene were just HOT. LOVE IT!
Reviewer: maria1991 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
ok girl it's a nice story.it's not just sex it's love.you made a perfect story.so i would like to when the next chapter will be out and if your story contnues after the marriage?keep writing!!!!
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