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Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

You never disappoint!!!


Reviewer: strwbrryflds (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

Once again this chapter did not disappoint.  I just love this story.  I am sooo excited that she added to the list.  I hope that this story goes at least until all is checked off.  I also hope that you will do a story with Edwards list.  I just love you writting.  This has to be my most favorite story from both web sights.  Thank you so much for this.

Reviewer: lionslamb1901 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

Loved it, especially your explanation about the car! Haha, Edward continues to amuse me! Can't wait for more! (:

Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

Definitely enjoyed! Ok, when she gave him a bj in the car, that was hot! The idea of Edward losing control like that is definitely exciting and all that! I loved the part when he went and talked to Charlie cute. And I do like how you had it where she got to pick out her own vehicle, because as much as I thought it was sweet that in the book Edward had given her those as gifts, they didn't fit her personality wise and all that, and really I felt like that is something Edward would/should take into account, so I'm glad you also considered that.

Love this story so much! Great chapter as well!

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

First I want to say I totes agree with you on the car thing in your AN. It bothered me in BD too. Second I loved how you revealed the tattoo to the others. That never even occurred to me but yeah I can see how that would impress the guys. Third, you just do a great job mixing smut with actual character development. That is what makes this story so damn good. It's not pointless smut.

Thanks so much for the update!

Reviewer: jen280289 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted

your writing is really great, u have definite talent! great story x

Reviewer: lookingforhoofprints (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

I loved this chapter! As much as I love your smut, it is wonderful to have plot thrown in there too, and you do an amazing job with that! And I agree with you that Edward shouldn't buy her cars without asking, knowing how much she hates expensive gifts (or gifts of any sort). However, I don't agree with the car you had her get...I don't think it is something that the Cullens would drive. We don't have to agree on everything...variety is the spice of life!  Anyway, amazing job as always!

Reviewer: mattys_mama (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

Loved this one, just like everyone before it! And I don't understand people getting upset about differing plot lines - if I wanted the same old thing, I'd read S. Meyer's books again! I love that she got to pick her own vehicle, and I LOVED LOVED LOVED her getting Emmett back. And DH says he totally understands Edward getting turned on by their admiration of Bella's tattoo. I may have to re-think my "no name tattoos" rule now. ;-)

Reviewer: Anne Shirley-Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

What a great chapter.

Hot, emotional, full of love.

I couldn't agree more with you regarding the car!

Your chapters come before making dinner...

Let him wait, unless of course he wants to treat me as well as your Edward does... ;-)


A million thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

loved him sliding the seat back to get better access for road head--she totally owned his sparkly sweet ass!

Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

Riotous good fun :)  I loved Edward's reaction when Emmett noticed her tatoo. So sweet Edward reassuring Charlie.

Reviewer: krosson247 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

"The icecream won't even melt!" HAHAHA LOVE IT!!

Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: April 13, 2009 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

Great chapter, and I totally agree with what you said about the cars in the books!!  Those cars bugged me in the books too (esp The Guardian!)

Reviewer: twilightteacher (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

This is just such a wonderful story. While so many stories are filled with lots of drama, yours is filled with love. It makes my day when you post.

Reviewer: Hermia (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

Wow, so much about this chapter I liked. I loved the prank, the reaction to the tattoo, and I really loved the end.

Also really liked the change to bring Bella into the decision making process over the vehicle. Nice to see this Edward give up a bit of control and see this Bella assert herself. Nothing wrong with that.

Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

I have been out of town for a week!  and was SOOO excited to see an update upon my arrival home!  This is an awesome story and you are a very talented writer!  I am enjoying this story immensely!

Reviewer: LisaLoo (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days


Thank you. I have checked for an update about a thousand times and IT WAS WORTH THE WAIT. Yum and Yum, I love the reaction to the tattoo. I'm glad Bella got a say in the car. Edward's gentility towards Chief Swan is dreamy. Wonderful writing (per usual)

Reviewer: VampiresWillNeverHurtYou (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

Awwwww, update! :D

Reviewer: MoGanHannah (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

I can see why this story is THEE most reviewed on twilighted. it is amazing. i'm itching for a new chapter!!

Reviewer: Lyght (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

I don't know which chapter it was in, but the love letter written by Edward was extroidinary.  I acually burned my heart a little- truly romantic.   It created a searing yearning that I only remember from first love. But it was never as good as Bella and Edward of course. 

Keep writing.  I'll keep reading.




Reviewer: amber cullen (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

I never review, but decided I just had to for this story.  

Thank you for having the courage to tackle the sexuality of E/B.  You have done it REALLY well without being vulgar. I really appreciate that E/B are so in character and that there is romance/love involved throughout each encounter.  I hope there are many more chapters in store.  By far, my favorite fanfiction! 

Reviewer: gjmb2000 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

Thanks....I have enjoyed reading

this,and look forward to more.

Reviewer: JasperLove429 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

OMG!!!!!!!!! I cant even explain how much I love this story!! It's so hot and romantic at the same time. Which is what true love is all about. I hope you can finish this story, I'd really like to know what they do to Emmett, lol.

Reviewer: magicdreams (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

Um. I had to read it again it was so good. Hmph. I want to be able to write like you.

Reviewer: magicdreams (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

Goodness gracious girl. Are you a published author? Because if you are, I am SO happy for you, and you deserve it. And if you aren't... well you really should be! Gosh I hope you keep updating!

It's clever and beautiful and hot and romantic and gah! So good.

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