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Reviewer: Twi-zzled (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
um holy crow!! the panties funny love the whole idea!!
Reviewer: tooblu96 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
I loved the decision about the cars. I was never to keen on the cars Edward chose for Bella either. I'd never see her driving the Ferrari. She'd probably take the Volvo and Edward would use the Ferrari...like he would mind that anyway. Loved the chapter. Looking forward to reading about Edward in leather. HOT!
Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Loved this chapter. Yes and Bella added more to her list. Edward in Leather. Lucky girl. Well I to understand about the car and I believe you wrote it the right way. I can't wait for more. Update soon. =)
Reviewer: v1cky84 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Wow...I love this chapter...gotta love the prank they played on Emmet, too. Please update soon.
Reviewer: hihi (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY. ITS NOT LIKE OTHER STORIES WHERE THEY DESCIBE BELLA AND EDWARD AS SEX MANIACS. HERE THEY SHOW THEY LOVE EACHOTER BY TALKING NOT JUST BY HAVING SEX. SO THIS HAS 2 BE MY FAVORITE
Reviewer: Dr Jones (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
I didn't mind the slight cannon departure... made more sense this way. Loved the drive home to forks. Would have loved more detail about why Jasper & Emmett were giving Edward "props" for the Bella's tattoo..
Damn charlie's interrupting phone call!
Another great chapter!
Reviewer: msdenisetexas (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
First I have to say I LOVE the departure from the canon car.. I think the new one just... fits.. better.
Love the payback they all arranged.. wonder what Emmett will bring back to the table though. Loved the swimming scene!!!
You covered so much time in this chapter. It was great. I CAN NOT wait for the Honeymoon now.. Can.Not.Wait!
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Awesome! Edward cracks me up...now he can't get enough of Bella!! I love your choice of cars for her too!!
What I'm looking forward to the most.....Edward when Bella gives him the vial of blood!
Reviewer: leena (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
i thought it was a really great chapter
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
damn, the start was so frikkin hot!! and being taken from behind XD Love it!
Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
You never disappoint!!!
Reviewer: strwbrryflds (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Once again this chapter did not disappoint. I just love this story. I am sooo excited that she added to the list. I hope that this story goes at least until all is checked off. I also hope that you will do a story with Edwards list. I just love you writting. This has to be my most favorite story from both web sights. Thank you so much for this.
Reviewer: lionslamb1901 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Loved it, especially your explanation about the car! Haha, Edward continues to amuse me! Can't wait for more! (:
Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Definitely enjoyed! Ok, when she gave him a bj in the car, that was hot! The idea of Edward losing control like that is definitely exciting and all that! I loved the part when he went and talked to Charlie too...so cute. And I do like how you had it where she got to pick out her own vehicle, because as much as I thought it was sweet that in the book Edward had given her those as gifts, they didn't fit her personality wise and all that, and really I felt like that is something Edward would/should take into account, so I'm glad you also considered that.
Love this story so much! Great chapter as well!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
First I want to say I totes agree with you on the car thing in your AN. It bothered me in BD too. Second I loved how you revealed the tattoo to the others. That never even occurred to me but yeah I can see how that would impress the guys. Third, you just do a great job mixing smut with actual character development. That is what makes this story so damn good. It's not pointless smut.
Thanks so much for the update!
Reviewer: jen280289 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
your writing is really great, u have definite talent! great story x
Reviewer: lookingforhoofprints (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
I loved this chapter! As much as I love your smut, it is wonderful to have plot thrown in there too, and you do an amazing job with that! And I agree with you that Edward shouldn't buy her cars without asking, knowing how much she hates expensive gifts (or gifts of any sort). However, I don't agree with the car you had her get...I don't think it is something that the Cullens would drive. We don't have to agree on everything...variety is the spice of life! Anyway, amazing job as always!
Reviewer: mattys_mama (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Loved this one, just like everyone before it! And I don't understand people getting upset about differing plot lines - if I wanted the same old thing, I'd read S. Meyer's books again! I love that she got to pick her own vehicle, and I LOVED LOVED LOVED her getting Emmett back. And DH says he totally understands Edward getting turned on by their admiration of Bella's tattoo. I may have to re-think my "no name tattoos" rule now. ;-)
Reviewer: Anne Shirley-Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
What a great chapter.
Hot, emotional, full of love.
I couldn't agree more with you regarding the car!
Your chapters come before making dinner...
Let him wait, unless of course he wants to treat me as well as your Edward does... ;-)
A million thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
loved him sliding the seat back to get better access for road head--she totally owned his sparkly sweet ass!
Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Riotous good fun :) I loved Edward's reaction when Emmett noticed her tatoo. So sweet Edward reassuring Charlie.
Reviewer: krosson247 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
"The icecream won't even melt!" HAHAHA LOVE IT!!
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Great chapter, and I totally agree with what you said about the cars in the books!! Those cars bugged me in the books too (esp The Guardian!)
Reviewer: twilightteacher (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
This is just such a wonderful story. While so many stories are filled with lots of drama, yours is filled with love. It makes my day when you post.
Reviewer: Hermia (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Wow, so much about this chapter I liked. I loved the prank, the reaction to the tattoo, and I really loved the end.
Also really liked the change to bring Bella into the decision making process over the vehicle. Nice to see this Edward give up a bit of control and see this Bella assert herself. Nothing wrong with that.
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