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Reviewer: Aspen (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

I completely agree with you about the car issue - it was something that always bothered me in canon.  Another chapter VERY well done!

Reviewer: lavish1 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

This story has really been an interesting read.  I'm glad that you have continued the story thread.  I liked too that you have allowed Bella to be strong.  I agree completely about the car choice.  The Infiniti is more Bella anyway...

You have wonderful capabilities as a writer.  As a reader, I find myself being pulled along for the ride.  Such great fun!

Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

I loved this chapter....and just cracked up when Emmett and Jasper saw the tattoo!  And FINALLY she got a new car!

Reviewer: demeterloves2 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

Okay...LOVED the car choice and the way Edward approached it! I, too, totally disagreed with The Guardian and Ferrari. Just wasn't practical and Bella deserves to pick out her own car :)

I thought Emmett's reaction to Bella's tattoo was just hilarious. He's a hard guy to shock, in my opinion. Oh! And the prank they pulled on Emmett had me rolling with laughter. It was priceless and I could totally see the whole thing...in High Def :D lol.

I love how understanding Edward is about Charlie and Jacob. I cannot, nor will I ever be able to, stand Jacob but I do understand how Bella feels about him. He really is her best friend and I see how letting go of the truck would feel like she was letting go of him and their friendship. To have Edward be there, saying these things to her, is so wonderful. I mean, he GETS it! :)

I am getting so excited about the wedding. I feel like Alice right now :D lol

Reviewer: Andilea (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

Loved the payback to Emmett.

Loved that Emmett found the tattoo.

Loved that Edward said Screw the dare and yet nothing happened.

Just Loved it all.

Thank you.

Reviewer: mrsjjjcullen (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

i couldn't agree more with your comments about the cars in breaking dawn ... your version of how he bought her a car is sooooooooooooooooooo much better ..

wow good job girly!! i'm sitting on pins and needles till the next chapter!!

Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

I like the idea of Bella picking out her own car.  Makes more sense to me and I love your logic for it.  Another great, hot and cute chapter!  As always, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

LOL @ your AN.

This was such a great chapter. The car scene was hot. I liked the Emmett-teasing thing too. But duuude you shoulda pushed it to the edge! = D But it was still good. Edward needs to explain the tattoo turn-on too = ] hahaha Hot mofo.

Thanks for this, though we waited forever, it was worth it. Please don't make us wait so long no more! = ] You rockk it hard!

Reviewer: mslane (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

Wow, what a good chapter!  Loved the payback to Emmett.  Can't wait for the next chapter.  :)

Reviewer: Blaculicious (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

I missed this story, felt really good to do a recap before I read the new chapter, Fantastic as always, can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

I liked you choice of how to handle the whole car situation.

BTW...the Emmett prank? ROTFL!!! I was dying! I read (parts) of it to my daughter and she laughed right along with me. This chapter is my favorite to date.

Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

I liked this little deviation from cannon about the cars because you are right.  Excellent chapter!

Reviewer: Twilightrocks1984 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

wow ! that was such a great chapter. I loved reading it and I can not wait to see what the next chapter will bring.

Reviewer: Blaculicious (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

I missed this story, felt really good to do a recap before I read the new chapter, Fantastic as always, can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

As always, The List delivers big time!  The car blow job is so amazingly hot because of Edward's reaction to it.  The joke on Emmett was tremendous--perfect revenge--his reaction was priceless!  Loved the car choice and your reasons for it, too.  Bring on more List!!!  U rock so freakin' hard! 

Reviewer: flute_genevive (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

I really enjoyed having the best of both worlds in this chapter, smut and plot.

I keep half-expecting Edward to find the list, which would make for an interesting twist, but you're doing a wonderful job and I love the story.

Reviewer: TastyOne (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

As always -great.  I really liked that she had say in her car and I REALLY REALLY like the idea of EDWARD in leather!

Reviewer: Burrberry Bugsy (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

I practically screamed when I saw that you had updated and dropped everything I was doing to read. Goodness gracious, how is it that you make EVERY chapter better and better? The Volvo scene was absolute gold and you wrote it perfectly. Gah, I've read a few stories where Bella has the confidence to do that to Edward while he's on the road but really, yours takes the cake. Promise!

And look at you and your 3,000+ reviews! You deserve so many more for the amazing plot and incredible writing skills you have! I hardly see any non-AU stories that I really like and this is definitely one of the best out there. I've recommended it to all my friends, so I hope that sends a few more readers your way because you deserve it. Update again whenever you can, I'm really looking forward to it!

Reviewer: Moni_MD (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

I totally understand what you mean about the cars...

Firstly, what is the point of giving a gift to someone you love if they won't like it? How is supposed to be happy about the gift after all?

It goes back to Edward's tendency (at least in the books) of doing things without consulting Bella, always thinking that he knows what is better for her.

Although, we should note that at the end of Eclipse, when they are at the meadow, Edward recognises that he has always imposed his will upon her and that from that moment they would do as she wanted but still, he bought the stupid cars without consulting her...

Very disrespectful to be honest so I like your version more.

The chapter was great btw. I really appreciate the fact that you manage to make things a bit hot even after the great weekend was over.

My favorite part was when he got hard at the lake and almost lost control when he took her to his bedroom and said "Screw the dare"!

Gosh that was hot! I cursed Charlie for his inappropriate phone call!

:-)

Anyway, thanks again and keep up the good!

All the best,

Monique

 

Reviewer: mzvez (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

Soooo good.  I love this story.  Brilliant!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: 1234cullen (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

wow i love this story!!!

all the chapters are so intersting to read and the new personality of edward and bella makes the story so much more better. 

Loved the whole thing. Way to go laura cullen!! :)

Reviewer: TheMrsCullen (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

magnificant. i loved the joke on emmett. and i loooove the car...

how i dream for a volvo...........

Reviewer: Stacey Joyce (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

First since I just read your comment, I love the infiniti, it doesn't detract at all for me and I completely agree with your reasoning. I didn't like that she was embarassed by the Guardian either.

As for the rest of the chapter, of course I loved it. I almost laughed myself to tears reading the prank on Emmett and I love that the tattoo gives Edward "props"!!

Reviewer: bubbadoghouse (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

Very nice.  I would have enjoyed reading what Edward heard in Jasper's and Emmett's head when they saw the tattoo.  I really like that you made Edward be reasonable about the selection of the car and that he understood what giving up the truck really meant.  Very cool of you!  Really enjoyed it!  Thanks!

Reviewer: EmeraldsTwistedSister (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days

Thank you so much. Always, always worth the wait.

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