you'll get no whining from me . . . I think the Infiniti is a much better choice!

I could give a crap about cars myself, so the Infinity reference was actually sweet to me.  Thanks for the nice long chapter and the extra fulfiling combo of sexy times and passionate, tender first love.  AHHHHHHHH--

great as always!

Ok, I didn't think this story could get BETTER, but it just keeps getting better and better and better.  I love the trick they all played on Emmett.... and I love how Edward got "props" from his brothers for Bella getting a tatoo of his name..... oh, but to leave her hanging like that to go have a chat with Charlie?  Man..... if I was Bella I would have demanded they start back up at a later time!!!  Still, it's nice to see that Edward was so turned on that he would say "Screw the bet", but then end up honoring it anyway.

And I have no issue at all about the car thing.... I mean, during the whole series they talk about how they try to "blend it" and how Rosalie's BMW is ostentacious.  The Guardian doesn't real fit in with that line of thinking.  Even if it does seem like a very over-protective Edward thing to do.  I like your choice.... and that Bella got to make the final choice :)

And I love that Edward made all of those promises to Charlie and acknowledged what a mistake he had made before, and all the promises he made to Charlie to take care of Bella and love her.  We all know why he left in New Moon, but I think we'd all like him to grovel a bit more about it since he made such a unilateral decision without giving his family or Bella a say in the matter.

KUDOS!!!!!

 

 

Again, another fun, sexy and sweet chapter!  Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

Okay here is what I went through in this chapter:

Sad the weekend is over; blushing covering my mouth at her....well getting the score even; excited that the wedding is coming; laughing at poor Emmett; Feel for Jacob I still really like him; Happy that Edward was getting...Happy in the Lake; excited about the additions to the list...in particular who wouldn't want that banana in their split! Ha! Look what you've done to me!; and finally one of the most real feelings I've ever been made to feel in any story I've ever read....the idea of saying good-bye to your old life, excited and scared but still having to say good-bye to yourself, or at least a part of who you used to be. That was real, I mean I'm not married but I can imagine that that is what it would be like.

Any who! LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! Count down begin!!!!

Author's Response:

Awesome review--I'm glad so much resonated with you!

another fanfastic, amazing, and sexy chapter! thank you!!!!!

First...HOT DAMN. 

That's all I can really say.

Next, I completely love that you got Edward to actually ASK Bella about the car. Thank JESUS!

LOVE. More soon?

I have loved your story from the first chapter.  Can't wait to see what you write next.

Okay, so I must admit that this is one of my favorite stories (all of it, the entire thing) This is in part because SM left SO many dark spots in the book and we need adults to fill those spots *wink*. Also, because I secretly love a DTE!!! HEHEHE! I also think that because the list is long and there are some things that cannot be done until after Bella's change - you should keep going on with the story throughout the wedding into her change.. oh yes.. that's a great idea! But, all in all - it is just a suggestion.. I will be looking forward to the next chapter.

This story is brilliant and I check every day for another installment....Its like a novel and I wish I had a copy in hardback that I can carry around....

 

I wonder if Edward will ever see the list Bella is making and add a couple of his own ideas???

 

Edward in leather....I kept thinking of Queen of the damned with Stuart townshead,,,,phew....tee-hee

I liked our car plot line better....

 

looking forward to more chapters sooon and when the 13 drought is over...

 

rachie

Author's Response:

Yeah, that would be my/Bella's image of the more modern gothic-looking vampire she was fantasizing about!

I lurve this story!