I loved this...yet again.  Yay Volvo action.  I'm loving seeing Edwards control slipping.  Slowing down and having to stop the car.  Go Bella!  Plus the lack of control over the dare in the bedroom after the swim.  She has him in the palm of her hand *hehe* so to speak.

And as for the additions to the list.  JESUS. WEPT. woman, how did you know Edward, I mean Rob, I mean Edward.. in snug leather pants (low slung of course) is one of my MAJOR fantasies.  Add a mostly open baggy white shirt showing the happy path leading to the happy trail and I am done.  Make him vampward and I'll just fold in on myself....moaning all the way.

Can't wait for the next chappie..but oh yes....there might be something else making an appearance too....

 

keep it up girlie! i need my fix.

I love your writing so much! I laughed out loud quite a bit haha and man alive, you HAVE indeed inspired me to make a list. Yeah. Hope you keep updating frequently - it's agonizing to wait for the next installment! Hehe awesome job

Oh my gosh, I was laughing so bad with the whole Emmett scheme! And Oh my! Bella! *chuckles* I loved Edward letting go of some control and actually stopping the car!

And I for one am with you on the car buying thing. Gah, there's just too many things I love in this chapter!! Can't wait to read more!!! :)

So I've taken to calling this story "Foreplay is Fun!" because damn, do you come up with some imaginative ways to get the two of them off without having sex. Awesome. I LOVED Jasper's revenge on Emmett for teasing him and Alice. Way too often Jasper's talent is only used to calm and it really could be so much more interesting used in different capacities.

Your car choice was MUCH better.  I despise the epic fail of most of BD, and that just started off the stupidity.

Car head.  Never tried it-God, that's a first, huh?  Vehicular sex has never much appealed to me-I'm a comfort gal-but this was just delicious, Laura.

I'm sure the girls from the Boom Boom Room went nuts-the mole AND buttonfly pants in one chapter? *shiver*

He only thing I wasn't crazy about was the prank on Emmett-the whole thing felt a bit forced, and not your naturalistic style.  Not to flame-just an observation.

This story has gotten better with each chapter.  It's not just the sexin', cause sometimes that skirts the fine line of believability for me as far as Edward's control is concerned, but it's better because of your growth and confidence as an author.  Congratulations!

i lvoe when you swicth pov.. it reallys give depth!! hot stuff..

I love crazy Edward that appeared at the lake! And I seriously cracked up when I read the part about the boys giving him "props"...loved it! I can't wait for more!!

Here is the thing I dont understand about the Cullens and their cars. You would think that since they are living until the end of the world theyd be more concerned about global warming... the wasting of finite resources, remember? Since they are going to live through the effects of it, and they depend upon a balanced animal food chain... Isnt it about time they started investing in Hybrids? lol. I totally agree with you about the Guardian and Ferrari tho.

Im really sad that they got interrupted, but at least Bella can use his words against him if he tries to remind her about the celebacy dare! Im sorta still curious about the guys's reactions to the tattoo tho. She did make a note to ask about it later, maybe next chapter you could have Edward clarify more? I mean, why did he say she earned HIM "props" with his brothers--because she is now cooler in their eyes? or because this somehow makes Edward "the man" since it represents her being marked by him and the other guys get this. And were Jas/Em like a little turned on by it or something and this translated to Edward being horny from their thoughts? (15 min later they all rushed off to be alone with their partners... The youre so sexy and dont even know it line confuses me I guess.) Or is Edward just turned on by how badass bella looks. like the Bella motorycle jacket?

Author's Response:

Your point about the Hybrids made me laugh, though it's completely true!  The next chapter will be in Edward's POV and will begin by overlapping slightly with Bella's in this chapter, so some of your questions will be answered, but generally, you got more than you thought about the guys' reaction to Bella's tattoo.

Another fuckin' AWESOME chapter!!!!  You have such an amazing gift.  As a matter of fact......I started to story over again and read it beginning to end for the 4th time.

The joke on Emmett was awesome, I can only imagine what he is going to come back at her with.

The tattoo is such an awesome twist in this story and the fact that it gets Edward all hot under the collar is even better!

Keep up the great work with this story.  You truly have an amazing gift and I cannot wait for the next chapter (or two, at once, works too!! haha)

I so look fwd to all the updates you have on here! You are doing a awsome job!

What an incredibly FUN and DELICIOUSLY long chapter! You spoil us with all the YES! of it!

I absolutely love how you incorported Bella's new car into the plot. As well as the kind and delicate mention of Jacob. Beautifully done.

And the joke on Emmett was hilarious!

One thing, I really hope we get to see an EPOV of what transpired in this very full chapter. Everything from Edward's "release" in the Volvo, to his jealousy in Bella's taunting of Emmett, to his overheard thoughts of his brothers at seeing Bella's tattoo, to the death of the truck and mentioning of Jacob. PLEASE GIVE US AN EPOV OF IT ALL!

I really hope there are MANY more chapters left in this story line. I just can't imagine it ever ending. Sigh....I just love to extremes!

MORE PLEASE!!!!

Author's Response:

Your wish.  My command.  The next chapter will be EPOV and will begin by overlapping with B's POV in this chapter...

I missed 3000 but I hit 3100!  yay!  Still reading...

Author's Response:

XD  Glad to see ya at any number!!