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Reviewer: maz2401 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
I don't know what to say besides absolutely fantastic!
Reviewer: Twilight Temptress 79 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
This is one of the hottest chapters of anything I have ever read. If this doesn't get the "juices" flowing... I have no clue what will... Great Job...
Reviewer: icshly (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
The surprise Bella made for Edward made ME breathless, how the hell did you come up whit that? I meen, I almost cried when he went around looking at everything. And the toy train! And the pictures. And everything. They had like the biggest luck ever that all was there.
Reviewer: occaquokka (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
Loved it!
Reviewer: maz2401 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
I was really surprised that you had Jacob imprint already, not that I thought you would bring Rennesme into the story. I looked at the photo of Bella's dress, absolutely gorgeous. I always had a hard time imagining the dress SM picked out for her. The wedding night was great my only nit pick and really it is silly...Edward flushed the condom! You NEVER flush condoms down the toilet...NEVER ;)
Reviewer: occaquokka (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Aww the symphony was so romantic!
Reviewer: maz2401 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Hello! That last thought Edward had with Jacob watching "mine fucker" Just an awesome little but of hilarity! I thought it was sweet that she went to each family member especially Jaspers...so nice. Kinda wish that was in the actualy series. Yay for #8 and damn Bella is flexible
Reviewer: edwardisavilf (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Ok, love the blood explainations. I've always thought exactly the same thing. But what I love more is Edward completely unhinged and talkin' dir-tay. *Smile
Reviewer: edwardisavilf (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
This work is great. You have a way with words and body parts. Thank you for making me squirm with delight.
Reviewer: maz2401 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Oh can't wait for #8!!!! This chapter was lovely...I have always wanted to foold around in a truck bed
Reviewer: maz2401 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
I was wondering about the departure from the book but I also like that she got to choose her own car. I was really hoping Edward was going to cave while they were swimming so she could cross another item off the list
Reviewer: Twilight Temptress 79 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
A very naughty, taboo chapter, but I loved every word of it. A real turn on.
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
To say I loved this story is an understatement, I've read it twice so far and reccomend it regularly. I am sure I will end up reading it agian in a few months. I hope there is a sequel in the works. Actually, I am really hoping I discover that there is already a sequel just waiting for me to find it. Thanks so much for all the hard work you put into this, I know it's not easy to satisfy all the fans and keep things going in real life as well. Just know that all of us out here really appreciate it.
Reviewer: Twilight Temptress 79 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Simply erotic.. I'm melting as I read this.
Reviewer: edwardisavilf (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
I can think of quite a few things to add to that list. With an indestructible God of a boyfriend, Bella can get much more creative. Fabulous chapter. I LOVE seeing Edward lose his cool (it makes me lose mine ;)
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
I hope.....please, please, please.....that you are considering a sequel. A nice long, hot sequel.
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
That teaser chapter would have been funny....if followed immediatly by the real one. Otherwise there would have been tons of readers out there with our mouths hanging open followed by yelling at the computer screen. Loved it, can't wait for the next.
Reviewer: hot99z (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
so I've finally finished the list, and it was great,,,, going to add you as a favorite and hopefully see if edwards list has been started yet.... if not i have great ideas i'm just not as good with the details as you are... I am currently working on my first novel, not coming along so swell though, I cant stand the small details, get job cant wait to read more of your work
Reviewer: Twilight Temptress 79 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
This chapter was so hot, I need oxygen. The force of his need was so great. And all of it was very erotic. My favorite chapter yet...:)
Reviewer: edwardisavilf (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Wet Edward makes every woman wet. Are you trying to kill us?
Reviewer: edwardisavilf (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Hot Hot Hot Hot Hot Hot Hot...(excuse me, I'll be right back) ;)
Reviewer: adirondackmommi (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
AND THATS HOW IT SHOULD HAVE HAPPENED..........
Reviewer: Twilight Temptress 79 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
awesome chapter.. had me begging for more.. love the banter...
Reviewer: Twilight Temptress 79 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
I loved this chapter. I am looking forward to the next...
Reviewer: maz2401 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
I know I should expect it but the thought of Edwards cum being cold kinda creeps me out.
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