Emmett just makes me laugh and laugh!

Is it just me, or is the word; "God," starting to sound odd? Bit overused. But other than that, very erotic. Very hot. The dirty talk was the only bad point. Congrats.

 

Evie, x.

Love the car! I like that you let her have a hand in deciding also, it makes it more personal that way.

Thanks for the update! It was great!

Another great chapter! I'm glad you elaborated on your decision to change the car Bella got because I was wondering why you did while reading, and I see why you edited that part of the story. I hope you update again soon, this story is a lot of fun to read! :o)

OMG so many reviews! YOU must be blooming (you deserve every single one - unless they are bitchy, then DELETE!)

Ok...LOVED LOVED LOVED the Road head. Very classy (and loved that Anstward didn't freak out and hurl her to the back seat clutching his manhood and whimpering)

Loved the joke - never saw THAT coming at all. Too cool...poor EM...and that Naughty Rosalie for coming up with the plan.

No worries on the care.For crying out loud - screw canon! I am SOOOO sick of people bitching about things not being canon. If you want canon then READ THE DAMN BOOKS AGAIN! GRRRRR - none of this was canon - it didn't happen, there was no list, no sex, nothing. The books weren't even pg 13...they were disney fade to black G...more sex in Shrek (ok I love shrek but that is beside the point). So, if they don't like it let them read something else! I get tired of people bitching about how my AU stories aren't canon or realistic...they are about vampires, PLEASE that in and of itself is unrealistic. Sigh.

Loved the chapter, thank you so much for posting and with your new found audience I do NOT expect a reply (it would take months to get through them all). Take care, can't wait until she gets to give him a "Bella Job" before her change Tee HEE

Dr K

"Bella, your mouth is killing me," he growled.  Growled.  God, I'll never get tired of that sound.  "We have to...you have to...Bella...," he pleadingly panted.

This entire scene was great as it was all about control. Bella taking control, Edward allowing himself to lose control. Not being able to focus on driving? Bloodly brilliant - as Edward has always been so blase about how ridiculously fast he drives. So great to read that at that moment even he was worried about his driving skills. Major kudos to Bella for causing that lapse in Edward's control. Turning a marble statue into putty in your hands is a major feat. Good girl!

"Uh, gee Bella, I mean...that's really nice of you...um...Bella, I don't think you could ever disappoint Edward."

Oh Emmett. *snicker* Nice try at saving your ass with the compliment but... He so deserved that minor discomfort of thinking Bella really wanted his help that way. Of course, like he promised, payback is a bitch and you just know Emmett is the best at that kind of revenge. I also thought the peek into how strong Jasper is with his powers was really entertaining to read. It was probably a lot of fun for him to be a participant in this practical joke and it really made me feel like he was more central to the family than he sometimes seems.

"You have earned me all kinds of, how did Emmett put it?, oh yes, props, with my brothers for this."

That is so not fair! We need more details on what Emmett and Jasper were thinking about the tatoo discovery. You can't just leave it at that! The family dialogue is some of the most fun to read and to only hint at what the boys were thinking is just cruel. Fine, be that way. :p  Anyway, I loved that Edward got so aroused because really it's such a guy thing to do and when does Edward ever let himself just be a guy? A peek into his head during that entire exchange would be just heaven. *sigh*

I wanted to reassure him that what I...did...before...would never happen again.  And that I would always take care of you and provide for you and love you. 

This is a perfect example of why we love Edward so much. Men like this just aren't a dime a dozen and to have been given a glimpse into his heart like that - so beautiful. I think it was extremely important for Edward to have that conversation, not just for him but for Charlie and for Bella. It was touching to read how he wasn't trying to misplace Charlie in Bella's life but was grateful to Charlie. It reminded me of the conversation my husband had with my father 18 years ago. A declaration of love is a powerful thing.

"You know, letting go of your truck doesn't mean you're letting go of Jacob," he said gently.

*le sigh* Another touching moment. It was a big step for Edward to say that out loud. Jacob will always hold a piece of Bella's heart, a small piece but still a piece - and for Edward that can't be an easy pill to swallow. Providing comfort without the jealousy when Bella needed it is exactly the right kind of companionship she needs. I also liked the "re-write" regarding her new car because sometimes Edward making decisions regardless of Bella's wishes chaps my ass. This was better. ;)

Great long chapter but I'm already looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

I absolutley loved you pulling out specific lines and then talking about why you liked them and what they made you think and feel.  It's always nice to know specifically what people are responding to!  Next chapter is EPOV, and while most of it will be the remaining 7 days before the wedding, it will begin by overlapping a little with this chapter.

I think you should depart from canon as much as you like. You kinda have already, and it just makes it better. Don't constrain you're inspiration with some notion of loyalty to canon.

I am so loving this story, can't wait to read more :)

Thanks

xxx

I must say... that you make a very good point. The beginning of Breaking Dawn somehow made Bella look pissed at Edward for giving her such a car. And in regards to the story... well it's fantastic. The way everything fits together is just perfection. Although im starting to notice that Edward curses more frequently now. I just thought that would happen like once or twice... but anyway...everything is going exquisitely.. I love how the book has so much relevance to the story.

Great chapter!

Aww. I agree with you about the cars...seriously, a ferrari? for Bella? This seems like a much better choice. Although the guardian was funny.  My favorite bit of this chapter was the whole car thing, with Jacob and letting go of parts of herself. Very nice writing, I must say

AWWWWW they are so sweet!!!! I love it!!!!!

Emmets revenge...HILARIOUS!!! i would have never thought it would be that,took me by surprise but loved it all the same.

Now i wonder what Emmett's gonna do as payback hmmmm...

So we are closer to the wedding yay!!!! Glad the dare is over,i didint think they would last untill the wedding lol

As always great writing,love every single chapter,keep it coming!!!

loved it!!!

:)Love the additions to the list! and Infinitis........yummy vehicles.