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Reviewer: beautifulmonster (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Your story has me absolutely hooked; I can't wait for me. And I love that you let Bella choose her own car!
Reviewer: scoots_357 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Reviewer: MandyW (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
So fun! You should do an edit of the four books - your fix with the car, and the note, are DEAD ON! You rock!
Reviewer: lorij (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
I like it
Reviewer: Curlytop (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
I've been waiting for a new chapter. You are extremely talented. I LOVE this story, and each chapter leaves me wanting more. Can I just pay you to write every day!?!? You're aewsome. I love reading about this side of Edward and Bella's relationship. I understand why Stephenie couldn't do it, but for me, it was an area that needed to be addressed. And addressed you have - and then some! I actually sqeaul out loud while reading your work. I SQUEAL like a teenage girl - and I'll be 36 in 3 months! :-)
Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
okay, this is going to sound truly naive and stupid, but what the heck were you talking about when you added "69" to the list? i don't know what that is.
Reviewer: Jillian Huddleston (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Great Great Great!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! I'm also glad that Edward gave up the no nudity dare!! haha
Reviewer: tabs (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
my favourite part of that whole chapter was the prank played on emmett! i absolutely love his character and seeing him pushed out of his comfort zone, and by bella of all people, was fantastic. he was so sweet, i really felt sorry for him in between fits of laughter!!! :) would it be possible for their friendship to be explored further, maybe not in The List but in another story in the future? Their closeness is only really implied, even in the actual books, but that implied friendship and comraderie is one of my fav things in the whole series. when it counts emmett's got bella's back unconditionally and i really think she has a soft spot for her big brother and vice versa. im not talking romantically at all by the way...
i hope that all makes sense to you :)
anyway, thanks for the new chapter and keep em coming!!!!! :)
Reviewer: obbesseddeb (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Revenge is so best serverd sweet. I almost felt sorry for Emmett, almost. They have grown so much as a couple, makes me proud. You are such an amazing writer.
Lots of love,
obbesseddeb
Reviewer: obbesseddeb (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
That was fantastic. i hope the wedding hurries up and gets here. The anticipation is killing me. The symphony sounds incredible.
Lots of love,
obbesseddeb
Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
As Emmett says, "props" on the car and related story! I'm glad you gave Bella a choice!! : ) Update soon please!! This story is too amazing to keep us waiting.
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
I must say...I love YOUR Edward. In many of these stories, he really pisses me off! Even when he's being human, he's a wanker. YOUR Edward gave me my love of Edward back - he's not such a controlling, angst-ridden pain in the butt. :)
Please, hurry and write some more chappies. Life sucks these days, and I need a happy ending. :)
And while this may be weird, as I don't know you or anything...but if your writing is any indication, you strike me as a very cool, intuitive woman to write so sensitively about the balance between sex, romance, and love. SO...I hope that YOUR life is as happy as Bella and Edward's! :)
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Sniffle....this was my FAVORITE CHAPPIE EVER!!!!!!!!!! Of course, the sex was amazing, but the romance...her saving HIM for once...him realizing that he could never hurt her, because it would be like cutting his own heart out...them snuggling and talking about their relationship....just....wow. Makes this old jaded woman think that true love CAN be found!!
*wipes tiny tears with tissue and kisses her cat's head for comfort*
WELL, WELL DONE!!!!!!!! 15 out of 10!!
Reviewer: foreverswt16 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
As always, beautiful writing. Love the scene in the car on the way to Forks!
Reviewer: keekee223 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
My rating/commentary is for all 18 chapters. I just started reading last night and wasn't able to stop. I was even, shamefully, reading at work - which wasn't the greatest idea considering the topics. But, as I said, I just couldn't stop. You're an amazing story teller with a fantastic imagination and I hope you bring us more chapters of this wonderfully long list!
As you guessed, I was a little thrown by the car. I'm glad you explained it at the end and I can't say that I entirely disagree with your point. Given your right to artistic interpretation, and the fact that you're making all of this up anyway, I don't see why you shouldn't be able to change things that didn't sit well with you in the origional, even down the car Bella drove.
Anyway, thanks for the great read! Please keep them comming.
Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Poor Emmett. They just never stop teasing him....he so deserved it. I love Edward's reaction to his brothers "props" for the tatoo. I would love to hear EPOV during that conversation and the joke on Emmett.
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
You are an evil woman. This is YOUR list:
1) torture innocent readers with smut until their heads explode.
2) turn all male readers' balls Smurf blue
3) cockblock readers with cliff-hanging naughty chapters
4) increase the national birth rate due to reading of vampire erotica
5) cause a steep incline in cigarette sales due to post-vampire-coital nicotine needs
6) cause late-night snack runs for single readers: if we can't eat Edward, we've got to eat something!!!
7) reduce readers' productivity at work, due to late-night reading sessions....just....one....more....chapter!!!
I will add to your list as the issues arise!! :) (nothin' but love!!!)
Reviewer: Elizabella (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
i truly love your story.. it is amazing
Reviewer: lrknot2 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
I just started reading this this past weekend and I couldn't stop! I hate that I read it so fast and now I have to wait! Ugh! It is a great story that draws you in from the very beginning! LOVE IT!
Reviewer: bluebelle (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Please please continue soon... ^^
Reviewer: bluebelle (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
The List is my favorite Twilight Fanfic ever! I love it like its one of SM's twilight books ^^ you are really talented, and also I love the way you consider each and everyone's emotions specially Bella's, you make me love Edward more. hee :)
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
WHOA NELLY!!
Wow. Kinda hot, kinda gross, kinda nasty....definitely intimate though! I'd be blushing like mad but telling myself to go for it!! lol...
I love cussing, horny perv Edward....imagining Rob Patt in person, whispering that shit into my ear? Hells bells.
Or Jasper. Or Emmett. Or Carlisle. >:>
Reviewer: TBelle (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
I want to review but I'm having trouble typing! Wow!!
Reviewer: clairesuter (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Loved it! Can't wait for the next one! Thanks for a great story.
Reviewer: Gypsylady (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Oh my. These just get better and better.
I loved seeing Emmet stuttering! Priceless!
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