I haven't been able to read fanfic for a while, so I'm catching up here.  The weekend - there are no words. I'm literally speechless it was so good.  I'm glad the volvo got some attention too (not that the Aston Martin wasn't awesome).  I would like to put in a very enthusiastic vote for "role playing - vampire" to happen soon, but frankly if you wrote 5 pages of Bella and Edward staring at each other, it would probably still be the hottest thing ever, so I will read anything words you care to put in front of me.  This story seems to have really caught on - 3,000+ reviews!!!  You deserve every one of them.  Can't wait for more!

........*runs to find boyfriend*

Hot, flustering--I blushed!

This chapter was really great. 

I love how you manage to make Bella sexy and a little dirty while, keeping her so sweet. Like when she went down on him in the car, and then didn't want to give up his cum- kinda perverted, but at the same time awww.

I loved Bella's revenge on Emmett, hilarious!

I'm glad that Edward let her choose her own car, and I agree about Bella's cars in BD.

As always, wonderful job, and I'll be looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response:

LMAOROTF

Ok, first of all I have to thank you since you are the one who recommended this story to me… and it is awesome! It is very odd how we seem to have the exact same idea of how Bella and Edward should have been in many ways in Stephenie Meyer’s world. I try not to criticize her too much, she is after all a huge success and I do love the Twilight series. But so many things let me down, specially with the last book. These are some of these issues that you treat in a very different light: 1. The weak communication and trust between Edward and Bella, they rarely seem to stand as a team, it’s more about one constantly protecting the other (ie Bella lying to Edward about not being in pain during her transformation, what ever for?). 2. The cars… I completely agree with your take on this issue, Bella’s before car made fun of her, ridiculed her and her human status (not cool, Edward!), and her after car??? Did Edward ever MET Bella??? A red Ferrari? Really? The truck was discarded in such an unjust way, discarded along with Bella’s ‘blurry’ memories of her human self. 3. Sex. Ok, so I was not expecting THIS level of detail, lol! But I did find it a very bad idea to go from chaste kisses to full on sex in one day, that has to be scary and not even if you are afraid to kill your mate. It just seems much more realistic to go step by step rather than all the way in such a short period of time. Also, you board the subject of safety when it comes to Edward’s ejaculations, something that was unrealistically ignored in the book. It is most likely that vampire cum is venom, therefore not safe at all for your mate.

 

Anyway, thanks so much for taking the time to write this awesome story, you are a terrific writer!

Excellent chapter, as usual~ Keep up the awesome work~ I look forward to more.

i loved this chap. n i loved the joke bella played on emmett. i cant wait to see wat emmett does as revenge. but i loved this chap. keep up the good work. just curious, r u gonna continue this story all the way to the wedding. i hope u do. n if ur still in the mood to continue the story after the wedding, i would love nothin more than that.

This chapter was great and I loved the part where Jasper made Emmett cry everytime Rose was in the mood.  Hilarious!!!  Poor Rose. I think you expressed how Bella felt about her truck great

aaaah!!

Back to character for Edward--that's good.

Hope he's bad again, though.

Very arousing!

Aaah, I finally got to read your update.  I'm never disapointed in your updates!  You are setting a pretty high standard, you know.  I did have to look up what an Infiniti EX35 looks like though.  haha

So, I loved the lean over in the Volvo.  So perfect.  It's so funny because I've always kind of thought of that manuever a right of passage (of sorts).  It was just a really fun part of the story.  I found myself cheering Bella on.

You continue to make my heart melt over Edward's words and actions.  The moment when they are in bed together at the end of this chapter made me misty-eyed.  It was so touching the way you had him just listen.  Just listen!  Why can't all men learn to just listen! 

Anyways!  I ramble review, I know.  Keep it up, Laura!  When will he see the list?!?!