OMG LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!

xox

Road head!  That was great.

Laura,  I haven't really reviewed yet because I had to take a break for a while after the enormous heartbreak of "I Love L.A.".  (hopefully temporary!)  I saw your review in there.  Thank you for not writing angst in this story!  ugh... 

Ok, back to your lovely Edward and Bella, which could be canon (or close to) if SM's sexual morality was not what it is.  I SO love how you write these two.  Your lemons are tasty, and complete perfection I may add, but I am now equally intrigued by your story and character development.  These two are finally growing the eff up, which I really appreciate.  For example, I LOVE it how Edward actually gave her a CHOICE about the car he bought for her, and didn't just force it on her.  Speaking of cars, I love how he isn't constantly afraid anymore of hurting her, evidenced by all the recent sexy times and that especially fun time in the Volvo.  Progress!

I also LOVE your humor.  Little Miss Thang scaring Hulking Vampire Emmett in the garage was hilarious!  I can't wait to see how he gets her back.  I love the pranks and family dynamic you're writing.  What do you do when you can live forever?  You keep pranking your siblings, that's what!  And Jasper's earlier prank against Emmett?  Priceless!  Hit 'em wear it hurts!  haha  One last thing about your humor (for now), I loved Bella's description of Jasper helping her-

God Jasper's powerful.  Cripes.  I feel like my dog died.  Okay, that was a really bad joke. 

Funny, AND a call back to Jake.  Good one.

I'm REALLY looking forward to EPOV next chapter.  I really want to know what thoughts he was listening to from Jasper & Emmett in the lake!  Also, I love it that Edward was the one who broke down first and was willing to break the dare!  Yay!  I so love how Bella breaks Edward without even trying!  squeee!

Ok, I'm not going to be reviewer 3300 but I'm VERY happy for you that you've received 100s of reviews on this chapter alone.  You make us all so very, very happy.  Thank you for sharing your talents with us.  WE LOVE YOU!

I don't really like this story but whatever!!!

Author's Response:

To each his own, of course.  At 15, you really shouldn't be reading NC-17 stories anyway.

I completely agree about the car thing in the book.  You would think that had he known her he wouldn't have gotten her a car that would automatically draw that kind of attention to her, it would be the last thing she wanted.  Your Edward seems much more in tune with her feelings and her desires which is nice.

I must say that I am excited that the list keeps growing.  I hope that means that the story will continue also.  Another incredible chapter and lookforward to more.

Jaime

Not only was that incredibly hot (I'm sure you have heard that hundreds of times by now) but I love the story you have weaved into this.  It is encouraging to see Edward optimistic about the two of them together.  This list is not only helping them get closer physically but emotionally too.  Yet another great chapter.

Jaime

Wow, this rocks! I'm as addicted to this as I am to Twilight, please, please hurry up with more chapters....I can't wait! I'm pretty sure my husband is thanking you too! ;)

OMG I just started reading this. Awsome awsome awsome !!

OME! Will he ever get his tongue in her?

Okay, the whole Edward pressing her against the door and the "Screw the dare" business, one word...DUDE!!!!!

Nice work, as usual ;-)  Catchya in the Boom Boom Room!!

disgusting, but surprisingly sexy

Just started reading The List last nite and can't wait now for your next chapter! I am just as addicted to this as I was to the saga.  You have such a talent, you've opened up the characters further and taken them to a place where I was just dying for them to get to in the saga, while still being true to the essence of Twilight. WOW

This is so good it leaves me gasping, wanting more.  Keep it up and thank you!