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Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Bella must've watched the Herbie movies as a kid. First she felt bad for the Volvo and then the truck. Cute!
I loved that Bella was able to pull off the revenge on Emmett and I'm glad that you did not have Emmett take up Bella on her request!
After swimming, Edward says screw the dare. Is there going to be more loving before the wedding?
Reviewer: Krissy1 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
still reading this and loving it.. I am guessing her tatt is near her heart can't wait to find out..
Reviewer: ingenue77 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Loved the story...But pls use less f-bombs, takes the romance out of it.
Reviewer: isabellatrix (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
I thought what you did with the car was wonderful! :) That was a great chapter, thanks for the update!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
I must say I love this story! And good choice on the car.
Reviewer: elislyn (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Well, now I need to know what got Edward so hot and bothered about his brothers seeing her tattoo, too. I mean, I can guess, but its way more fun to hear it explicitly stated... emphasis on explicit.
Reviewer: Laurendanielle (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
I love this story :) So I just wanted to say 2 things and ask 1 thing:
1. Great chapter. Emmett is my favorite character and the prank was hilarious. Nicely done.
2. TOTALLY RANDOM! At the bottom of this chapter, there is something I just noticed, maybe it has always been there, eye dee kay, all I know is that it is telling me the temperature right now in Forks. I laughed and thought you should know :)
My question:
Are you planning on continueing this past the marriage to make sure Bella completes everything on her list, or will you just end it at the wedding with the assumption that the list will be complete?
Reviewer: mommyjgv (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
I am loving this story!! Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: MissBella (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
HURRY UP AND GET TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!! AHHHHH!!!
Reviewer: ECD (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
please keep writing..... we've got to get through the wedding to the first time!!!
Reviewer: MissBella (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
mmmmmmmmmmmm spicy :) love it! now i have to do a quick review so i can go to the next chapter. ahhh!
Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
OMG...How is it even possible that I love Edward even MORE?
I adore this story! The humor, Em & Rose, Jasper & Alice...awesome. The sexy scenes are smokin-hot-panty-melting, but I'm one who likes a great storyline too. And you've Most Definitely captured both!!! U R AWESOME so Pretty Please Update..like..NOW!?
Reviewer: SuzyQ (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Hey! I stayed up til 4.30am this morning to finish reading the entire List so far and I don't do that for every story I read! (Oh to be a vamp who doesn't need sleep eh?! :D ). Anyway, just wanted to tell you that I've loved every minute of this so far (and er, the hubby's enjoyed the fringe benefits too! XD) so thanks and I can't wait to read more! ;)
Reviewer: Loves_Twilight (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
It's all amazing! I'm sad that there's only one chapter left to read now!!!
Reviewer: ECD (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
You are a WONDERFUL Writer. you have kept the characters true while you've added realistic sex!!!
Reviewer: Loves_Twilight (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Quite simply, you're amazing! I've found this site recently and am working my way through, you are absolutely among the most talented here. Thank you SO much for writing something for us "big girls" for whom an ocean and a fade to black is SO unsatisfying! LOL
Reviewer: lulu123 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Wow i love this story! It is so good and though the characters can be a little ooc sometimes they are still the same! You write soooo well and i can't wait to read the rest of The List!!
=)
xox
Reviewer: Krissy1 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
I don't know what to say other than I am lovin this story ;)
Reviewer: Loves_Twilight (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Loving the list! Thanks so much for your time and talent!
Reviewer: ilive4music (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Well, I must say I've been enjoying your story immensely. My husband is overseas so this has inspired me to make my own list of how to celebrate his return. THANK YOU!!!
Reviewer: CLBee (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
I approve of your car choice LOL it does seem to fit Bella more than a Ferrari. Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Reviewer: drimeth (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Oh my I love your story. (heart, heart, heart!). I've never been into fanfiction before, but two of my friends read it constantly. And I found a link to this site...I don't remember how. But of course I needed lemony-goodness, because SM didn't put enough into the stories. And then I found this story, and oh I love it! You have such an amazing talent, don't stop! You keep all of the characters so in character, something that rarely happens in the other fics I've found. And maybe it's because I'm single that I love E&B's relationship so much, but I can't help it! I had to take a break after chapter 11 (darn real world!), and it had been driving me crazy that I couldn't finish until tonight. I can't wait for more!!! Sorry this review is so scatter-brained, I've never written one before. But still - can't wait for more!!! You are amazing (heart!)
Reviewer: musicalwithfangs (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
holy crap! i just read this entire story in one go. i dont think i've ever blushed so hard reading a fanfic! god, that was so hot. please please please keep going. whoo! i might have to make a list of my own one of these days . . .
vampire kisses,
musicalwithfangs
Reviewer: CLBee (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Oh I really loved how you put Bella's Lullaby in here, great idea! Wonderful chapter, yet again! Keep it up girl
Reviewer: CLBee (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
What a lovely chapter. Great writing as usual :)
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