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Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
This was very erotic and sweet! I can't wait for the rest!
Reviewer: amp23 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
oh - I love Edward knowing about the list! And a promise of #8 - I'm soooo excited!
Reviewer: missymarieb (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Another amayzing chapter, cant wait for # 8!
Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Great chapter! I love that Edward added his own to the list! And a hot one at that!
Can't wait until the next chapter! Number 8...YAY!!! Wow, hotness coming!
Thanks!
Reviewer: myedwardismine (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Well you've obviously done it again!!
You've made me so happy that #8 is finally going to happen in the next chapter. Been waiting for soooooo long for that!!! (My personal fav!)
Edward finding the list was written perfectly...with the full range of emotions that he went through. So glad he added one of his own...and what a good one that was!!!
I was thinking the same thing with the dare...they've come so far and then to hold back for 2 weeks would just make their wedding night harder (pun intended!) wouldn't it??
And well Edward in the shower thinking about #32...there's not much I can say about that except THANK YOU!!!!
As always, can't wait for more!
Reviewer: lrbassmom (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
I'm thinking about giving her list to my husband, with a "I want all of that!" Once again. I didn't think it could get any hotter.
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
a-w-e-s-o-m-e!!!!!!! Wonderful! I am surprised Edward let it go that far!!!!!!!WOOOHOOO!!!!!!!
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Ooh la la!
I am going to miss this so much when they reach wedding day ... or maybe you will write a Wedding List ...?
I'm THRILLED to see your review count. It must be a site record!!!
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
OH,OH, OH My, I was screaming profanities when I realized E found the notebook hidden between the bed!!!!!!!! Thank God I was alone!
I continued screaming through all of his reactions and I finally couldn´t take it anymore when he wrote #36, I screamed YEEEHAAAAAAAAAAA! LOL.
I am so happy # 8 will finally be scratched out.
You are a Genious.
sincerely,
Karina.
Reviewer: STAR1633 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Can we rub Edward down with oil sometime? I do it nightly in my dreams... I'm just saying it works for me....
Reviewer: Twi-zzled (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
I love this one!!! I love that the dare is over !! how is he so freaking hot just with words.. im glad I have my husband to practice the list with lol
Reviewer: mp604 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Laura you are amazing!!!!
Being a new twilight and rob fan I was desperate to come online and find some good nc-17 stories and you have blown me away!! My boyfriend is jealous of my reaction to your writing compared to him lol :)
I was meant to be in bed 3hrs ago but couldn't stop till i ran out of chapters...omg please keep updating soon!!! Despite it being more adult themed than the books and movie I just want to say how wonderfully insightful and accurate your charater depictions are...noting puts me off fanfic quicker than unrealism but your writing is fantastic, the adult theme just makes it so much more awesome hehe, keep it going!!!!!
xxx
Reviewer: terriberryc (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Great chapter, as per usual. I loved getting Edward's point of view of the tatoo exposure. I am thrilled that he found the list, and his reaction to it. I can't wait for next time, I've really been looking forward to number 8. And I'm excited to see how he is going to manage it without letting her know he knows. This should be interesting!
Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
This was another sweet, wonderfully erotic chapter--you never disappoint!! So glad the dare's off! I really enjoyed Emmett's reaction to the tattoo; Edward's discomfort while Bella slept, and his romantic idea to be in the truck. I can't believe he read the list!! I would have said she'd just die of embarrassment, but maybe the new, more sexually confident Bella will just start right in on 36! I can't wait for the next part!
Reviewer: Haleylauren (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Another awesome chapter! I cant wait to see how number 36 works out! hahahahahahah :) Thanks!
Reviewer: an_edward_chick (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Another brilliant chapter. I enjoy your writing so much because I can feel the emotions of the characters as I read just like I'm there. For example, in the beginning of this chapter, I started feeling the nervous excitement of Edward and I was bouncing in my seat in excitement thinking "OMG, Edward and Bella's wedding is sooo close."
By the way, I LOVE the addition Edward made to the list. Looking forward to the next chapter and the execution of #8.
Reviewer: Venus_Star2_com (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
YES! He found the notebook!!!! hahahahha number 36! I wonder if Bella would suspect something???? I was laughing at Edward's frustrations....ALthough it was VERY SHORT I can't wait for the next installment.....I wonder what plans Edward would have for Bella now that he is away of the notebook...ohh the ideas are flowing but whatever I can think of pales in comparison to the awesomeness ( is that even a word??? well it is now) you create
Rachie
Reviewer: meyerjc2002 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
God!!!! I love that Edward found the list! Awesome! I have to ask? Are stopping this at the wedding??? I really hope not, I would love to see everyone of these items in writing. I mean, even if you needed to open up a "The List" series. It would be so worth it. Love love love the story. Can't wait for number 8, and anything from 25!!
Reviewer: Bled Dry (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Number 36!!!!!!! I think that is all I can say right now. So. So. Awesome.
You rock.
Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
You rock! Keep it up!
Reviewer: northernlight (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
great chapter thanks
Loved that he now read the List this is going to be alot of fun Edward has really come out of his shell and he is so much the better for it
love it
Reviewer: Vanya (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Lol i laughed so hard when Edward found the List lol. I can't wait to read about the wedding night ;).
Reviewer: Ms Black (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
I love the fact that he found the list and added to it. LMAO! Cant wait for the rest of the chapter.
Reviewer: Redlady (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Lady...your stories are killing me!!!! More! More!! MORE!!!!
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
unbearably HOT!!!!
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