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Reviewer: Kim620 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
The List - Awesome chapter once again. Loved that Edward found the book and added a little something. Bella is going to be so confused. I love it :D.
The final farewell to the truck, Awwww....Edward is just too perfect.
Totally loved the reactions to the Tattoo. At first I was going to suggest that Alice and Rose sport temporary tattoo's but the more I thought about it the more it would be perfect for Emmett to do it LMAO!
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
you know the blood Bella gave to Carlisle? I keep picturing that after she is changed, she pours it all over herself, and has him lick it off!! HOT
Reviewer: LisaLoo (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Wowza. I still love Edward's reaction to Bella's tattoo. Thank you for some of the hottest and most intriguing writing out there.
Reviewer: Blaculicious (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
You know you've been ready too much fic when you're on pins and needles waiting for Edward to put his peen in Bells' sundae! Thanks
Author's Response: Yes, yes you have!
Reviewer: bookworm7073 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
OMG! I think I passed out while reading this. I need a cigarette, and I don;t even smoke!!!
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Y'know, I really have no problem with this "Bad" news if it means we get that "Good" news, muahahah! Oh! And Number 8?! Woot!
I'm kinda surprised Bella (or Edward, for that matter) didn't try to turn their little respite under the stars into Number 33, but that just means we get to save it for another time ;-) Like Edward, I can't wait to see Bella's reaction the next time she takes a look at her list...teehee....
Reviewer: Tudor1 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Update
Reviewer: BeCullen1 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Another great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one. Great job.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Great chapter. I'm glad Edward's found the list. Now they can get things done faster! Can't wait to read the next chapter. I have been looking forward to number 8.
Please update soon.
Reviewer: JacksonsGirl (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
I
LOVE
YOU
That was fanatastically amazingly wonderfully WOW...
did that get the message accross?
Btw, still workin on the slide show. Is it ok to use some lines from the story? just let me know..
Author's Response: XD Looking forward to it. You're more than welcome to use some lines!
Reviewer: vamptramp16 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
YAY! A new chapter! This new FF addiction is really bad! I need FF Rehab!
Reviewer: BluEyeDevil (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
I am loving this fic so damn much!
It has completely distracted me from revision.
I love his reactions and the intensity of it and I can't wait to see more!
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Can't wait to read more!
One question: has Bella noticed 36 yet?
Reviewer: stuckinreverse (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
I was so excited to see an update earlier today (well yesterday haha). Loved it. Can't wait for part deux.
As always, you're brilliant.
Reviewer: magicdreams (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Haha this story is so freaking hot. And sweet =)
Reviewer: magicdreams (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Okay I'm halfway through this and I just had to stop to write a review. You Are a GENIOUS. Aaawesome!
Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Holy cow you're good at what you do. Probably good that you split the chapter. I'm already on meltdown and I don't know if my body could have handled that all at once.
Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Holy cow you're good at what you do. Probably good that you split the chapter. I'm already on meltdown and I don't know if my body could have handled that all at once.
Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Fuck Yeah! I cannot wait for #8! Don"t get me wrong -- I loved this chapter, but I have been waiting for #8. Just something really special about that one.
Let me tell you that the way you began this chapter with each word on a separate line to accentuate the importance was brilliant! I got teary-eyed reading that. It was so beautiful. Just...lovely sentiment. I am a sucker for sentiment. :)
I liked that Edward found the list, and his reaction to it was really cool. I liked that you had him be a bit angry at first. It made a lot of sense to me that he would feel that way at least a little bit.
The scene in the bed of the truck was gorgeous. Edward's idea was extremely romantic and heartfelt. She didn't quite get to have an Edward sundae, but this was pretty freakin' cool.
I loved the ending moment of Bella curled up on Edward. Simple, sweet, and perfect.
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
seeing that there was already a chapter 19 in this series made my day today. i was so freaking happy about it that i had to set up the mood and all before i read it so as for me to enjoy it thoroughly while reading it. =) edward finding the list was brilliant! i had thought about that before, if he would ever actually get to see it. but now that he has, can't wait to see what edward plans to do with the rest of things that are yet to be done.
and i am so happy that i wouldn't have to wait long to read the next chapter. you said latest is friday right? i'd be holdingyou on to that. i just can't wait to read each new chapters. i sincerely hope you never ever have to end this series. it gives me something to look forward to everyday (how i wish you could add new chapters everyday! hehe)..
so goodluck to you laura..more power and keep up the good work! thanks for making my day. =)
Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
OMG HE FOUND THE LIST!!!!! HE CONTRUBUTED TO THE LIST!!!!!!!!!!! NUMBER 8 IS ABOUT TO HAPPEN!!!!!!! AND THERE ISN'T A LONG WAIT BETWEEN CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!! DUFFMAN!!!!!!!!!!
I also really liked how they were stargazing together in the truck bed it was so sweet. Can't wait to see Bellas reaction when she looks at her list again :) :) :) :) :)
Reviewer: EMX (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
ahhhh this is soooo good cant wait for it to be updated
Reviewer: Krissy1 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
That was hot lol I so love my rob porn haha ;)
Reviewer: Chassy369 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Wow, fantastic. A great writer and a great story. as an aspiring writer i can only hope to create such wonderful scenes. Thank you!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
I love that he added #36 and that he is trying to help her complete that list.
I'm already excited for chapter 20, thank you for posting this. :)
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