Wow! 

 

Feel a bit flustered! lol

Love that Edward found the List. Great reaction. I like that he was a little angry, then the Bella's ideas turned him on. I feel like he's gonna get a little mischievious with his new-found knowledge!

Emmett's reaction to the tattoo was great too, made me laugh. Is it possible for vamps to get tattoos? I could totally see Rosalie getting one if she could, after Emmett's reaction!

There are just so many things right with this story! I just love it. And after that teaser, I can't wait for the next installment! :)

Oh God... so funny - Edward found the notebook! And he added another one! *LOL* That is just too priceless. Oh, I can't wait till Bella sees it, she'll go from shocked, to embarassed, to pleased, to aroused in 1 second flat. :D And it's just so sweet of him to play out her fantasies like that covert-op style. Haha...

Please write more soon!

I SIMPLY LOVE IT!!!

"reasonable, possible, and significantly less macabre" hahahaha

 

This is fabulous.  I'm so looking foward to the next chapters!

I just read your whole story in one sitting and I truly tip my hat.  Writing lemons is excruciating (at least, they are to me), and this entire story is 75% lemons.  Wow.  I'm not worthy.  I bow to the mistress.

Also, this is the first non-AH Twilight fic I've read in its entirety.  Normally I skip any story that keeps in line w/the books, but you sucked me in.  Fabulous job.

I usually don't review until I have gotten to the end of all the written chapters, but I think I couldn't resist reviewing this a few times while reading.  This is undeniably, unbelievably, and arguably the best smut I have ever had the pleasure of reading.

so freaking wonderful and hot as hell!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yay!  I'm really excited you're posting ANOTHER chapter either today or tomorrow!  Laura, you rock bb.  You're the best.

This was hilarious.  I was cracking up about Edward forging Bella's handwriting to add #36!  I can hardly wait for her to see that!!!!

I think this was the most romantic chapter for me.  Since we've been following the List, we already know what Bella wants.  Edward's romantic tryst in the bed of Bella's truck was unexpected and oh so heart warming.  I equally enjoyed their "afterglow" time when he pointed out constellations and told her the myths.  That part alone had to be just about the most romantic moment for me in this whole story.  Nice touch.

I'm also VERY happy he lost the dare!  yay!  From the beginning, I always felt Edward going to his wedding night, not becoming desensitized to sex with Bella, would be disastrous.  I didn't like that about the book, but love that you're addressing it here.

Looking forward to #8, however you decide to write that.

By the way, yes, I live in Seattle, I can see the Olympic Mountains outside my window (when its not cloudy like now) and its fun to know Forks is just on the other side of them.  Whenever you're ready to return, I'll roll out the welcome wagon for you!

Your ideas are so ridiculously romantic and sexy, I almost want to marry you. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Aw.  That's sweet!  XD

Simply delicious...thanx!

LOVED it!!  The truck bed was such a romantic and sweet idea!!  Can't wait for the next chapter!

Ah!  I never ever wanted that chapter to end.  I want to run to Maryland just to give you a big hug and a "thank you, that was amazing" in person.  haha

I LOVED Edward's reaction to finding the list.  It was perfect.  I also loved his addition.  He's so naughty...  Naughty Edward is the best. 

I cannot wait for the next chapter.  You. Own.

p.s.- Why don't the ratings go higher than 10??

brill