Love it

Very erotic. Now Edward, please. Good writing.

Love especially the ending and how close they really were.  Bella remodeling his childhood home was so sweet!

The last chapter was one of the main things that brought me back to read this story again. Every time I think of this story, that chapter with the shower scene comes into mind. I don't know why (lies, lies....)

I'll go keep reading now. This story is better than I remembered.

YUMMY

NEW TO ME---LOVELY STORY

Omg. I am crying so much reading this final epilogue. 

I read SM trilogy a few years ago and never thought of reading a fanfiction (didn't even know there was such thing). Recently my partner of 14 years agreed to re-read the books to me. Luckily he loved them also (twilight was his least favourite bc SM wouldn't shut up about how amazing and gorgeous Edward is lol). I get really sad when I finish reading a book and finishing this particular trilogy was almost painful. I miss Edward and Bella et el so much (tha sounds really weird).

Thank you so much for bringing them back to life for me. I choose your story bc it was the most favourited (makes sense). I was surprised that is was erotic and surprised at how much I enjoyed that side of it. I mean who didn't want SM to go into a little (a hem A LOT) more detail. But I must say what surprised me more than the sexy stuff was your story and the (my/our) characters. Alive again. So perfectly written. Edward. Bella. Alice. Emmett. Rose. Carlisle. Esme. Jasper... Oh god Charlie. Perfect. I have giggled and laughed out loud at some of your scenes. I have cried more than once. I'm talking big fat tears streaming down my cheeks with multiple nose blows. When Bella is given the Cullen crest locket with pics of Charlie and Renee (oh wow so many tears). Bella's conversations with her new family before the wedding (yep, tears). This final chapter I think there were audible sobs. How wonderful that you created this for all of us. For me, it is real. Part of E&B lives together - maybe more than the SM renesme storyline? 

I am going on too much. People are going to think this crazy Aussie fan is trying to write her own chapter! I have read The List in its entirety in just over a day. I feel lucky I only just found it - I hate waiting! Of course I must say this story (of course) is sexy as hell. Some scenes made me blush. Though so exciting too and giggle worthy and inspiring. I often found myself saying omg :O this is awesome! And it excited me (smiling from ear to ear) with EPOV when this thoughts were  in italics - so real. Yep you had me hook line and sinker. 

Now it's time to google Forever Freed. Will I read anymore twilight FF? I don't know? I feel the same with The List as I did when I finished the original trilogy - I don't want anything else tainting it for me. We'll see. Thank you again. What the hell, it's 1.03am and my baby just lifted himself up, looked and me and smiled - go to sleep Takoda - mummy should be asleep too. Ok enough. You may never even read this. It's been ? Years? 

Ok ok. Thank u. SM owns. U rule. Love ur number 1 Aussie fan. Kim

You are a master at writing a HOT, sexy, intimate yet emotion-filled scene.  Amazing work!!!

Kudos to Bella for outright deviousness!  Loved Jasper's reaction to Bella's "gift" - as I am sure Alice does too!!!  You almost have to feel sorry for Edward - almost...

Awesome!

I totally agree with you regarding the cars (your chapter end notes) and I like better your vision of things. After all, Bella deserves this kind of respect.

I was a little sad that Edward didn't find his release, but I understand now that it would have been too much too fast for him. You knew better. So,

kisses

Tisinne

Dear Laura,

I have to tell you that I loved so much your story, that this is my third time reading it. I never reviewed before, but I'll try to do it now after each chapter. For the time being, I don't have much to say, so I'll press "Next" and re-read the second chapter.

Kisses,

Tisinne