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Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Yellow Rage
Every other week is a step up I guess!
I need to know more about this OOC Elizabeth Masen wh ohas screwed up my boy!
And way to go Bella for being an awesome girlfriend here.
Reviewer: Edward_Bella_Nessie (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Yellow Rage
awesome! again!
Reviewer: Edward_Bella_Nessie (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Stoned Secrets
awesome!
Reviewer: Kathryn Mason-Sykes (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Yellow Rage
ok, wow. Definitely a different twist on all of the above characters (except maybe Bella & Charlie). The writing itself is very honest and true to the characters you're using/creating. I'm intrigued...I can't wait to see where you take this.
Reviewer: dollegirl (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Yellow Rage
SOO...POTHEAD JASPER'S CRUSHING ON ALICE...EDWARD'S IN THERAPY AND WANTS IT TO END....MAMA MASEN WAS AN ADDICT...ABUSIVE...EDWARD IS HAVING RECURRING DREAMS....BELLA IS A PERFECTLY UNDERSTANDING AND SUPPORTIVE GIRLFRIEND THAT KEEPS HIM CALM....
ON THE OUTSIDE...ACCORDING TO HIS LOGIC...HIS LIFE IS GREAT...HE IS FINE...
BUUUT....MY SPIDEY SENSES ARE TINGLING...ALL IS NOT AS IT SEEMS...
I LIKE IT...I DO...I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Yellow Rage
WOW! Poor Edward having such a past... Good work with writting this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. :)
Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 10:30 AM · On: Yellow Rage
Mmmm...interesting. I normally dont like AU-Human stories, but you have me hooked. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Yellow Rage
Wow! Thats diffrent! so looking forward to more!
Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Yellow Rage
Ahh, I always liked Elizebeth. Oh well, I love the chapter and what it does for Edward's character. Awaiting to see what happens next.
Reviewer: Saphie1990 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2009 09:58 AM · On: Yellow Rage
so there's nothing actually wrong with edward? I thought maybe he was schizofrenic.
Author's Response: We shall see.
Author's Response: We shall see.
Reviewer: elfarmy (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Stoned Secrets
i love a love struck Jasper. Well, I love any Jasper. Great start. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: dreamsatnight (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Stoned Secrets
edward, please don't go all apeshit on jasper! it's cute... so miserably in love that he has to get high to dull the pain? okay when i say it like that it's a little sad... but still cute because it's jasper and alice.
what does edward have an appointment for???
loving this so far. come back soon!
Reviewer: dreamsatnight (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Too Early
straight guys who rock purple and pink confidently are HOT. my one guy friend used to get a lot of shit for the purple and pink shirts he used to rock from the other guys, but i found it fucking sexy. nothing hotter than a cute guy so confident in himself and his sexuality to say fuck off to the stereotypes
Reviewer: PaigeDotCom (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Stoned Secrets
Wow! Cannot wait until your next update!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Stoned Secrets
Of course Jasper and Alice.
Funny about psycho Princess Barbie... fricking hilarious.
Loving this!
Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Stoned Secrets
Ha Jasper has the hots for Alice and she hates him or at least that's how it seems. Poor guy, now I understand why he has blue-balls. LOL.
I like the story so far, keep up the good work.
Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Stoned Secrets
Very good so far! Really enjoying the humor of the story versus the angst found in others. Can't wait to see what happens!
Reviewer: vickitori303 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 08:34 AM · On: Too Early
I think it's off to a good start and I'm interested in seeing where it goes.
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Stoned Secrets
Awesome! Keep up the good work. :) And update soon. ;)
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Stoned Secrets
BWAHAHAHAHA!!!!! Oh man, if there's ANY way to p*ss off a guy's best friend, it's to want his SISTER! And his LITTLE sister at that. Yeah, this should be interesting.
Glad to see Edward and Bella are together....she's not Jazz's sister, is she? They were just walking into school at the same time?
Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 06:30 AM · On: Stoned Secrets
I love it, in love with his friends sister, classic but so works. Can't wait to find out what Edward's problem is. Also, I love that Edward giggles when high.
Reviewer: twilightjie (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 05:31 AM · On: Stoned Secrets
your story intrigues me. i wonder why edward has to visit a doctor every week.
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Too Early
Looks like a great start. keep it coming. :) Update soon.
Reviewer: crymzn (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Too Early
Wow this is really good so far! lol its good and I actually like Edward in this one. lol and I love the last line, "I'm such a man" XD
Please update soon!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Too Early
I think these characters are hilarious... and I'm looking forward to finding out why they need a second chance? I don't yet understand the title, but if the characters stay like this, I'm in for the long haul :)
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