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Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 01:38 PM · On: I Love You. I Hate You

In the woods!  Holy cow!

Great chapter!

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 01:10 PM · On: I Love You. I Hate You

Alice and newton?!?! EWWWW!!!

Reviewer: crymzn (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Too Early

alice...with....ew!! anyways lol update soon. I wonder wat edward's up to

Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 10:46 AM · On: I Love You. I Hate You

Love your story!  It's definitely in my top my favorite AU-Human stories!  My heart even does an irregular beat everytime I see you've updated :)

Reviewer: Kathryn Mason-Sykes (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 09:49 AM · On: I Love You. I Hate You

"Please. I will bitch-slap him with a butter knife."

OMG, the visuals in this chapter (such as the one quoted above) had me in hysterics. Except for the visual of Alice and Mike. Ewwwwwww....

Great chapter. Soon needs to come...soon! Sorry, there really was no better word choice here. Expediently? Eh, I give up...

Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 09:04 AM · On: I Love You. I Hate You

:)  Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 09:03 AM · On: I Love You. I Hate You

Really, really enjoying this story!  Yep, time for some major Bedward action!

Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 07:57 AM · On: I Love You. I Hate You

LOL, so brilliant to put Bella in homecoming court! I'm excited to see what comes of it!

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 07:44 AM · On: I Love You. I Hate You

Nothing like before-school head!  *giggles*  I wonder how Bella got on the list?  Doesn't someone have to nominate that person or something?  Not really sure, I never paid any attention to that kind of thing.

Poor Jasper!  Ugh, I've never ever seen Alice paired with Mike Newton before, my mind just doesn't know if it can handle that.

Reviewer: keepingupwiththekids (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 07:40 AM · On: I Love You. I Hate You

I love this - the story flows so easily!  I am hooked!

Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 06:52 AM · On: I Love You. I Hate You

That was evil of Edward.

Reviewer: pigzrool (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Messed Up Family Tree

Why don't you have your stories on fanfiction.net?



Author's Response: Because I have never gotten around to it and my blackberry hates the format of the site.Lame but true. Might be headed there soon though if this place doesn't work out.

Reviewer: keepingupwiththekids (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 03:13 AM · On: Messed Up Family Tree

I love this!

Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Messed Up Family Tree

I'm absolutely intrigued. And I love the sweetness between Bella and Edward. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Messed Up Family Tree

Ahh delightful.  Apocolypse twins = hilarious and dead on.  I am looking forward to Jasper and Alice coming together and her helping him.

I love BxE and can't wait for more of them. 

Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Messed Up Family Tree

Wow, very interesting story, I look forward to more!

Reviewer: Edward_Bella_Nessie (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Messed Up Family Tree

PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNN!!! PWEETTY PWEETTY PWEESE???? btw AWESOME STORY!

Reviewer: Kathryn Mason-Sykes (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Messed Up Family Tree

Not to overdo it, but this chapter was....you guessed it, so good! It's great learning more about Edward's sordid past and I got a bit gooey when he spoke about marrying Bella. Heart. Plus the plug about Jasper having some weird vibey ability to turn people away...awesome. I'd love to see more of Alice's character in coming chapters...definitely keep the good times coming!

Reviewer: PaigeDotCom (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Messed Up Family Tree

Ah! Another amazing chapter! This seriously made my day! Can't wait until your next update!

Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Messed Up Family Tree

Ahhhh!  Another chapter update.  Thank you so much.  Keep up the great work.  And please update soon.  :)

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Messed Up Family Tree

Yumm that was a nice chapter back info which is kind of freaky.  Watch his mom pop up into his life or something  that would be the worst!

I love the story the angel its taking its nice to see its not all peaches and cream!  Lifes a bitch and then you die.  Just good to see hes trying to live a little before that!  ;)

Post again real soon! 

Reviewer: Mrs Jasper Hale (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Messed Up Family Tree

So very good!  Very interestint see where Edward came from.

Can't wait for the soon.

 

 

Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Messed Up Family Tree

Esme smells like cinnimon? So cool. The backstory was sad, I feel bad for little Edward. Oh I love the sparks between Edward and Bella. Can't wait to see what their plans are.

Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Messed Up Family Tree

Great chapter! Thanks for the back story on Edward, heartbreaking btw, and the B&E cuteness at the end :)

Reviewer: PaigeDotCom (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Yellow Rage

"Reviews are like Munchies to Jasper"? God, that is like epic.  It's seriously my favortie part of this chapter, LOL.

Anyways, great job! Can't wait to read more!

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