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Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 06:09 AM · On: Tattle Tale
So I think you're doing a great job of making me hate Mike, and want better things for Edward. I just can't get over Alice's awful judgment... Mike Newton... gross. AND you don't even have him as the stereotypical "hot guy" - pudgie face and all.
Oh, I am looking forward to Edward/Mike tension and as always, Edward/Bella love... eventually Alice/Jasper love?
Author's Response: We shall see.
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Tattle Tale
Jealous brother Edward is a riot, great update!!
Reviewer: kelsey_jim (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Tattle Tale
Hilarious.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Tattle Tale
Ok so we have the frisky fun side! The over protective side teh friend the warrior the gentlemen.... I love the diffrent sides to Edward Yumm! I hope he gets that Alice is safer with Jasper then the slimy toed one Newton! Go dad with the rash comment! I was drinking water that killed my throat to not spit it at my computer! hahaha
Reviewer: Mrs Jasper Hale (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Tattle Tale
Awesome chapter. I loved it.
Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: LovesSparkles (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 05:17 AM · On: Yellow Rage
aw, poor Edward! it's nice to see Bella so supportive, though. what a good girlfriend! I wish she could get Edward to stop doing pot, though. grossness.
Reviewer: LovesSparkles (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 05:07 AM · On: Too Early
edward taking a test with a hot pink pen? priceless:)
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 04:50 AM · On: Tattle Tale
Too funny! Loved it. I wonder if Alice is really into Mike though or if this is some sort of master plan of manipulation? Anyway, the whole Mike thing at the dinner table, watching Esme and Carlisle disliking someone (so rare), was just hilarious.
Reviewer: keepingupwiththekids (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 02:30 AM · On: Tattle Tale
Again, this is the best story!
Reviewer: Saphie1990 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Tattle Tale
ooh very good chapter! I just love how everyone hates mike, well almost everyone. Please update soon.
Reviewer: Fallingstar (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Tattle Tale
Aww I hope Alice and Jasper get together. It's cute that he has such a crush on her and Alice doesn't really notice. I hope she isn't as airheaded as Jessica or Lauren. She seems a bit immature so far but I still can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Tattle Tale
Lmao! Keep up the great work. I can't wait to read more. :)
Reviewer: pigzrool (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Tattle Tale
What did Mike do to Bella that Edward was referring to?
Reviewer: Kathryn Mason-Sykes (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Tattle Tale
bring back the romps! though this chapter was definitely amusing, if nothing else. :)
Reviewer: crymzn (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Tattle Tale
That was good lol
Update soon
Reviewer: lmkf (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Tattle Tale
good but missed aving Bella in the Chapter
Reviewer: thatgirljen (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Tattle Tale
Ok, I am already tired of Mike and Alice. Jasper needs to step up to the plate. And Edward is a sellfish ass telling Jasper thanks when Jasper says he will give up Alice for Edwards friendship. Its so completely unfair for Edward to agree to that when he knows how much his friend likes Alice. Maybe its because I am an only child, and dont understand the sibling relationships, but I would think it would be great for my friend to fall in love with my brother or sister. They are obviously your friend because you love them and think highly of them, so why wouldnt that be good for your sibling? I understand if they break up, you could be in the middle, but that could happen whether you were a sibling or not.
Author's Response: Ha ha! I understand where you are coming from. However as someone with siblings..... Nobody is good enough. Especially your closest friends because you know ALL their flaws and are probably not willing to loose them and have to watch them with sibling. However.... I'm just getting started with this bucket o fun!
Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Tattle Tale
excellent story
Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Tattle Tale
He didnt get a big part, but I loved Carlisle in this chapter. You captured his nature well.
Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Tattle Tale
so good indeed! love tokin' J & E.
Luv. It. Dinner scene = perfect.
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Tattle Tale
Poor Alice, being with Mike...yuck.
Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 03:16 PM · On: I Love You. I Hate You
Bitch slapping with a butter knife, best mental image ever.
Also loved Edward running out of the crowd of girls with Bella caveman style over his shoulder.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 06:03 PM · On: I Love You. I Hate You
LOL So you need a Review fix HUH! Well Guess What I love it! LOL I have no clue what is going on in Edwards head But I can't wait to find out! This story is kick ass and don't make me hold nmy breath to get you to post another chapter I'll do it! LOL I hope you post again soon!
Reviewer: thatgirljen (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 05:27 PM · On: I Love You. I Hate You
Is Mike just dating Alice to get back at Edward because mike likes Bella? When is Jasper going to step up and try to get Alice. Its so sad seeing him all mopey.
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 03:02 PM · On: I Love You. I Hate You
I think you are the very first writer to take the Alice and Newton route, and just the thought of it it's freaking hilarious, great work!!
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