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Reviewer: keepingupwiththekids (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Stay Away
I feel like I am about to have to go out and buy a box of kleenex! Something is about to happen!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 06:44 AM · On: I'm Fine
Oh no, please tell me he's not about to become sick or something. Ahhh! The suspense!
Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 06:02 AM · On: Stay Away
Mmmm...chicken biscuits.....hangover
Love the chpt. Can Elizabeth die now????
She can't put her hands on Bella or Alice! Ug!
Reviewer: truthordare (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 05:48 AM · On: Stay Away
i like being in edwards head (yes that does sound weird) - i prefer that and keep going!
Reviewer: blue2185 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 07:57 PM · On: I'm Fine
When is Jasper and Alice going to get together? lol I hope edward is going to be ok.his dreams are wicked crazy! good story
Reviewer: LuvCullens (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 12:49 PM · On: I'm Fine
More Jasper and Alice. I hate Newton. Update soon
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 07:40 AM · On: I'm Fine
All these people asking Edward if he's fine, it is worrisome. I hate the idea of him just taking off without a word. The dreams are disturbing, all right. I hope he remembers that he has people who love him dearly...
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 07:40 AM · On: I'm Fine
Good chapter! Little worried about Jasper. Not like him at all well normally so I guess this is totally like him for this story. i want those to to hook up and Mike to wonder off with lauren or Jessica LOL. I really liked this chapter teh dreams are freaky! Its like hes afraid he will turn out just like his mom and hurt the ones he loves most! Looking forward to the next chapter!!!!
Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 06:32 AM · On: I'm Fine
I'm totally loving this. Your Edward is so edgy and loving and emotional - the way he acts with Bella - just love it!
Reviewer: twilightjie (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 06:18 AM · On: I'm Fine
i hope edward would open up about his fears to bella.
Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 03:51 AM · On: I'm Fine
Ah Edward, denial doas no one any good... I wonder what insane overdramatic Edward stunt he is going to pull when he cracks under the stress...
Reviewer: kelsey_jim (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 03:13 AM · On: I'm Fine
Oh no, what is going one with Edward.
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 03:05 AM · On: I'm Fine
Say it again. Say my name like Destiny’s Child!
I’m such a nerd.
LMAO, I loved that. Great chapter!!
Reviewer: keepingupwiththekids (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 02:42 AM · On: I'm Fine
What is going on? I can't stand the suspense! Update soon!
Reviewer: Kathryn Mason-Sykes (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 09:34 PM · On: I'm Fine
ok, so Bella's worried, Alice is worried, something's going on with Jasper, Edward's having dreams about Elizabeth, and Emmett is thinking of Rosalie's panties....ok, so maybe that last one isn't an issue (or in any way abnormal), but the rest of them have me somewhat worked up and wondering what the hell is going on. Hopefully the next chapter will contain some revelations (or at least hints). :)
Author's Response: You know, you just may get your wish.......but not for another week or so.
Reviewer: Fallingstar (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 09:14 PM · On: I'm Fine
I love Jasper in this story. He makes me laugh. Especially him passing out under the dining room table. Edwards dream was disturbing. You really creeped me out with that one.
Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 08:54 PM · On: I'm Fine
You never fail to please with your chptrs. Elizabeth makes my stomach drop. Ugh....
I really am ready for Alice to stop dating Newton though. Can't Edward beat the crap out of him already? Maybe Jasper??
I will be waiting for my update email on this story. I really like the developments.....
Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 08:50 PM · On: I'm Fine
Uh-oh...when is the inevitable blow-up/meltdown coming? :/ Poor guy.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 08:44 PM · On: I'm Fine
Oh Jasper and Alice. Jasper needs to lay off the smoky and make a decent move.
Love the B/E morning lovin. Your Edward needs someone to love him and put together all his pieces... I volunteer for the job. :)
Reviewer: audio science (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 08:43 PM · On: I'm Fine
loved it!
edward and bella are too adorable!
please update soon! i want to find out whats wong with jazz and edward! and why on earth alice would every go out with newton. ew.
Reviewer: memegan_rox (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Whiskey Sour
this story is so good! i hope you update really soon, i cant wait :D
Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Whiskey Sour
Poor drunken Bella. Eager to see how things move along. I do enjoy your portrayal of the characters.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Whiskey Sour
SQUEAL!!! This chapter was umm perfect!!! LOL
Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Whiskey Sour
Hehehe...that was great.
I adore Edward in this story.
Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 06:48 AM · On: Whiskey Sour
Loved it! I love how protective he is of her - how close they are and dependent on each other. Can't wait for the next update!
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