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Reviewer: DarceyG (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Psycho Princess Barbie
Edward plays baseball? YUMMY!
Reviewer: DarceyG (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Tattle Tale
Ugh...LOVE this chapter. I love fics that are angsty, and serious and lemony, and then peppered with unexpected comedy. I laughed out loud more than once!
Reviewer: DarceyG (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Messed Up Family Tree
Seriously? If I didn't love Edward before...this chapter would have done it! Thanks for writing!
Reviewer: DarceyG (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Stoned Secrets
Ugh, I'm in love with Jasper. love-sick, pothead Jasper is my FAVE. And I love that Edward giggles when he's high. Brilliant. Thanks for writing.
Reviewer: DarceyG (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 10:38 AM · On: Too Early
YIPPEE...I'm so intrigued. I know it's completed adn it seems kind of lame to comment at this point, but I love this Edward. And I love the relationship with bella is already established. Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: bobo (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Too Early
more please you can NOT end it here (although it is quite a perfect ending ;) please please write a squel!
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Too Early
An ending? Oh please say there will be an epilogue saying that they did have their HEA and that he got exactly what he wanted with Bella. Or a sequal I guess either way is good for me. LOL
Reviewer: audio science (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Too Early
sequel!!
please please please!!!!!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Too Early
Great Ending!
Reviewer: runner28 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Too Early
so good.
Reviewer: lachica Bella (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Too Early
Umm, loevly but I wish there was more! Yeah, there's light at the end of this pitch black hole he's in, but at least something jumping into the future to show that everything did turn out okay with them. Yes, there would be bumps and holes in the road ahead,but it would be nice to have certainty that Elizabeth and her gang maybe the could have died in prison or prison rape for James and then he fell off the face of the earth and died. You know give Edward piece of mind, and finally a future without having to look over his shoulder.
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Too Early
I am sad it's over but that was a great way to wrap things up, loved this fic, thank you for sharing it with us :)
Reviewer: mrsn (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Too Early
Thank you for sharing this story - it was excellent! :)
Reviewer: mrsn (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Please Wake Me Up
I am not all the way through yet, but I just wanted to comment that your story is terrific! :)
Reviewer: elizabethmac (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Too Early
Really enjoyed this story!
Reviewer: twilighteyes (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Too Early
Will there be a sequal? Because that ending sounds like the sort that gives way for one.
Author's Response: I usually don't do those, but Edward and Bella have piped up a bit, but Jasper is louder right now. So, I dunno.
Reviewer: IrishLove (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 07:30 AM · On: Too Early
Great ending, I loved this story. I hope you update your other story soon.
Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 07:30 AM · On: Too Early
Congratulations again on finishing!! There is still just this part of me that wishes you could keep going - so we could see more of the healing process and time with Bella. I'm selfish :) But I'm also excited to see where the rest of your stories go.
Reviewer: Telly21182 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2009 05:54 AM · On: Too Early
So, he ends up at Washington State with Bella?! I loved it... such a great story!! Now, can't wait to read the rest of Cloven. That was actually the first story I saved in my faves once I figured that whole thing out!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 10:02 PM · On: Too Early
Great ending. I'm sad to see this story go.
Reviewer: Misbehaving Mom2 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Too Early
excellent job....great story
Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Too Early
Lovely. :) So sad to see it end, but it was perfect.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Too Early
sniffle no pout pout pout!!! I don't want it to be over I mean I wantthe heartache over with but what of all the medning and growing and i wantto see Edwards wish come true everything he wants with Bella. POUT!!!!!
I loved it you did a great job I look forward to the rest of First Chance!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Too Early
Will there be a part 2?
Reviewer: Mrs Jasper Hale (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Too Early
Really great story. So sad to see it end.
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