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Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Sharp Object?
Holy fudgesicle. Yeah, that's the closest I come to swearing, sorry. This is so freaking intense, just, yeah. Great chapter, AMAZING
Reviewer: TLP (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 04:20 PM · On: Please Wake Me Up
Well fuck me running! That was NOT what I was expecting when I started this story (in a good way)
I'm looking forward to an update!
Reviewer: Saphie1990 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 12:04 AM · On: Too Early
Please update soon!
Reviewer: obessedwithedward (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Please Wake Me Up
please update soon. Im dying to find out what happens next.
poor Edward = dont hurt him too badly.
Reviewer: lmkf (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 11:46 PM · On: Please Wake Me Up
this story is getting really good. i would to see Bella's or one of the other friends perspectives to see how they are going.
Reviewer: leslo (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Please Wake Me Up
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! no!!!!!!!!!!!!! fuck elizibeth!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ahhhhh!
postpostpostpostpost!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: mysticsavantpixie58 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Please Wake Me Up
ok, freaky. good, but freaky. just keep going with it. it's got me hooked.
Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Please Wake Me Up
Oh God! Poor Edward. So well writen even if so dark and sad. Lizz is twisted beyond the pale, kidnaping to have her little boy back...
Awaiting the next chapter for what horrors and hopefully salvation awaits poor Edward.
Reviewer: cristynd (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Please Wake Me Up
I almost cried when she cut his hair too! I'm anxious to find out what happens next. His family must be losing their minds wondering where he is.
Reviewer: xoTinyxo (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Please Wake Me Up
omg!!!! poor edward!! PLEASE tell me somebody is going to save him!! i don't like this retarded mother of his!
Reviewer: memegan_rox (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Please Wake Me Up
UGH!! can you please get to the happy stuff? actually no, i like the drama. continue on, soon please :)
Reviewer: MonksMama (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Please Wake Me Up
Please, please update soon! I love this story!
Reviewer: MonksMama (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 10:40 AM · On: Psycho Princess Barbie
Presents McQueen with a sparkly princess tiara.
You rock.
And I just have to ask if your screen name is a tribute to Disney. (yeah I have a cars obsessed 2 year old)
Author's Response: I have actually never seen that. The name is a tribute to McQueen clothing.
Reviewer: MonksMama (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Yellow Rage
have some cheetos on me.
I love this story. So well written!
I love how E is still effected by his past but not consumed by it. Very realistic!
Reviewer: MonksMama (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 09:21 AM · On: Too Early
I like your E very much. I nice mix of youth, self indulgence and humorous inner commentary without being crude or pretentious!
(please ignore my spelling, I can barely spell my own name) :)
You are going on my faves after just this first chapter!
Dena
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Please Wake Me Up
OMG sniffle. poor Edward sniffle. His nighmare..... The one he had a few chapters ago I hope they don't keep pumping heroin into him until he begins to enjoy it and craves the addiction it gives him. Oh no! Some one Bella save Edward!!
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 04:50 AM · On: Please Wake Me Up
That fucking bitch. And her two little elves. Great chapter, I want to cry a little though :(
Reviewer: Fallingstar (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Please Wake Me Up
That was pretty intense. Elizabeth is delusional. Love it. Please continue soon.
Reviewer: Kathryn Mason-Sykes (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Please Wake Me Up
wtf does she want with him now? besides more money, i guess. this is all friggin ridiculous. as if edward isn't effed up enough, elizabeth has to haul her trashy ass back into his life and muck up everything he's got going for him. please oh please tell me forks is doing something to track these bitches down.
Author's Response: Ah, that is the side of the story you won't really see here. That and all the happenings on the homefront will be in "First Chance," coming soon to a board near you.
Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Please Wake Me Up
Gah, I am filled with so much angst for Edward and his true family and friends!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Please Wake Me Up
Oh my goodness! What are they doing to my poor boy!?!?!
This is terrible, and I must know what comes next!!
Reviewer: sdfan92 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Please Wake Me Up
OMG that is just horrible and how dare they cut his hair! I am going to hurt that red haired whore!
Reviewer: Saphie1990 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 02:31 PM · On: Please Wake Me Up
oooh I absolutely love it! update as soon as possible, can't wait.
Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Tattle Tale
Aww, the brotherly love is killing me. LOL.
Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 02:10 PM · On: I Love You. I Hate You
LOL! Perfect brother behavior.
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