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Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Settling In
Poor Edward detoxing and dealing with the bad dreams and worrying about Bella. I hope he doesn't fall apart soon. I really don't think he will Because the way you write him and his relationship with Bella is very true,open and they communicat alot to each other which right now he needs. Fabulous writing skills and plot contemplating. Keep it Up! Upate soon Please!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Coming Home
Thanks for the sweetness and please, please, please don't let him get taken again
Reviewer: Nashi (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Settling In
Ah poor Edward. James is so going to be trouble coming up...
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Settling In
That was good chapter i am glad hes worried he needs to be. Everyones all hunky dorey and well theres still trouble in teh shadows and thats some scary shit ! Look forward to the next chapter I am glad you didn't go into al the details thats must be so hard for Edward and so embarassing!!
Post again soon!!!
Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Settling In
excellent chapter
Reviewer: hbgo (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Settling In
Really enjoying this story.
Reviewer: TwilaEveningStar (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Settling In
Great chapter as always! I feel so bad for Edward because he can't even feel safe or relief when he's not around Bella. I get that way too after I watch a scary ghost movie. I always think that my dead guinea pig that I did not feed will pop out and torture me by feeding me carrot sticks. Anyhoo, thanks for that lovely chapter!
Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Settling In
why doesn't he tell charlie about the threat on bella? he is the police chief and all. it might throw a wrench in things, but isn't her safety more important? just sayin'. love your story.
Reviewer: audio science (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Settling In
loved it!
cant wait for more!
Reviewer: Bkwrm (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Settling In
Uh.. why hasn't Edward told people that Bella's in danger? Such as her father, the police chief?
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Settling In
Poor guy, detoxing and developing PSTD, he had a long way to go before him :( Great update!!
Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Settling In
I hope your luggage finds its way home soon :) That really really sucks.
But what definitely doesn't suck is your latest chapter. Woohoo!! Very scary. Wish Bella could stay over with him and help him through those shaking moments - then maybe he would get through them easier.
Now...why isn't he saying anything to the police - at least Charlie - about the threats against Bella? Not getting that...
Reviewer: malimed (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Settling In
transition into dream = really freaking scary. good job.
poor edward. : (
Reviewer: darkchyld1980 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Settling In
Another great chapter!
Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Settling In
Great chapter!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Settling In
I hope nothing happens to Bella. That would be terrible for Edward, and for Bella. Please update soon? I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Sorry about your luggage. :(
Reviewer: Chelsea (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Settling In
I'm so glad you updated. Love this story.
Reviewer: rachelosaurus (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Settling In
AHH, so good! I love this Edward...his little comments, like Days of Our Lives and "lame old blood" are the highlights in each chapter. I love this, and am SOO anxious for what you've been so heavily foreshadowing...I'm on tetherhooks! Please update soon! Sorry about your luggage, I hope you got it back!
Reviewer: Mrs Jasper Hale (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Settling In
Love this chapter. Edward needs to tell Charlie what is going on. Someone needs to make sure Bella is ok. Love that that they all stayed with him. Can't wait to read more
Reviewer: debbieg (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 06:37 AM · On: I Love You. I Hate You
this is really good so fair.. I dont think i like the jasper smoking pot all thie time but this is your story... Mike and alice?? differant.. keep it going.. :)
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Coming Home
Post again
post again!
PLEASE
PLEASE
PLEASE!
I love second and first chances great stories and I am totally squealing over him having a welcome home chill out session!!!
Update soon for my sanity and Edwards!
Reviewer: Misbehaving Mom2 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Coming Home
Excellent!!! Glad he finally escaped.....now to see how he deals with it and the drama that ensues!!!!
Reviewer: Edward_Bella_Nessie (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Coming Home
If your happy and you know it clap your hands *clap clap*
If your happy and you know it clap your hands *clap clap*
If your happy and you know it and you really wanna show it if your happy and you know it clap your hands *clap clap*
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Edward_Bella_Nessie (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Coming Home
I ABSOLUTLEY LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AS USUAL!!!! ITS SO FREAKING AWESOME!!! UPDATE SOOOON!!!!! ALICE AND JASPER!!!! YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
EDWARDS BACK!!!!!!! *happy dance*
Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Coming Home
great chapter. poor edward. i admit that i breezed over some of the parts where edward was being held. i did not like those parts... very sad and dark.
i hope that everything gets back to "normal" for edward soon!
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