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Reviewer: alison (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 1
just read your whole story and LOVE IT! PLEASE update soon, now I'm hooked!!
Reviewer: The Loving Kind (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 25
moar. nowies. x
Reviewer: Andi (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 02:01 AM · On: Chapter 17
i sooo love the way you've written kellan, its just how I picture him in real life!! lol. Im really enjoyin this story, SB is a douche!! haha
Reviewer: coco987 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2009 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 24
i freakin squeed at this from the prev chappie ""Every kiss was me kissing you," gahhh...and this chapter..the VF fair..omg omg i love the vf shoot ref..she truly was magnificent beyond words and rob was all starry eyed hotness. i really love how jackson is so carefree and kellan is so playful..and peter is just awesome. i love them like i love u
Reviewer: coco987 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 20
omg i'm biting my nails cuz i wanted to know what happened and i am relieved that it's didn't go there..big whew and his recollection..oh my heart! just wanted to say in the prev chappies that kellan is totes adorable and peter too but nik and tay..ehh not so much..they need to be schooled. but i see a hint of j&a there? will i see more of that? ;)
Reviewer: coco987 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 16
wow that was quite a ride..whew..dirty rob is hot and i gasped when he pulled out the scarf ;) yeah bb
Reviewer: coco987 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 15
oh i 4got to tell u, i really love the rpov, and the text at the end ..nice. btw, i love that you said this "And I don't know the people I write about, but if I did, they would be locked in a closet until they understood how meant for each other they are."
Reviewer: coco987 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 14
yey! she finally said it..k can't wait for her to say it in person now :) and the grey shirt and the white..how cute as a button were those?
Reviewer: coco987 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 13
sigh..yey he's not hiding it anymore and it makes me smile everytime he says he luvs her...btw, ur characterization of how he notices those little things ie breakfast,book, etc..and how the cd is all about her..so awesome
Reviewer: coco987 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 12
gah..caveman rob is all kinds of hot with a predatory look? you're description of the bad boy is omg! total win.."..He hooked an arm over me, forcefully pulling me onto his body. He put his hand in my hair while the other hand started raking his nails down the sensitive flesh of my back...." thud, i think i just died..sigh.. and why won't he let her say it but he said it at the end? :) suspense is killing me...and wth is up with tay?
Reviewer: TheBlackCrow (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 25
Ok, first of all, Woah!
Second, Jesuseffingchrist!
third, give me a sec while I go spazz in the corner over there for a minute...
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ok, Now that I got all (as if) the hyper slash giddyness out of my body, lets see if I can manage a somewhat normal (read: sane) review.
This story is just too good to be true.
I know I started reading it at some point, and for some reason which I'm currently unaware of, I stopped reading it (I think I sent a review at some point, but I wouldn't be able to say so for certain). However, thank the gods, I woke up in a Robsten mood and started to read it again...
and now I'm hooked... as in addict hooked... as in I'm going through withdrawal while writting this because I can't believe there are no more chapters, no matter how much I refresh the window. yeah yeah, sad but true.
Anyway, back to the shameless flattering. I seriously LOVE your characterizations to this people! Mainly Rob... I'm seriously smitten with him and his adorable ways and mannerisms. And well, Kristen kicks ass, plain and simple.
I adore how you constantly keep on building their relationship; how you mention those small things that in a real life couple are so important, be it something as small as them noticing each other's smell, or just feeling content with the other, words or no words in between. Simply amazing in a heart-about-to-burst-with-joy-for-those-two. Really, I can't keep the smiles out of my face while reading their alone time... and well... their alone-physical time is simply mouthwatering; not only in the raw sensuality of the act, but also in the constant passion and love in their actions. Lovely, heart-warming and smokin' hot! A VERY good combination if you ask me ;)
Now, onto other characters: Peter owns my soul, plain and simple. And Kellan... I want to steal him away and cuddle him for eternity! Such a nice guy!! Ashley and Jackson make me smile whenever they're mentioned, so I hope to see more of them in future chapters =) Taylor.... I want to smack his hands with a ruler... or maybe hit him across the nose with a rolled up newspaper... And Nikki... well, to be honest, I want to slap her... hard... yeah...
So yes, basically, you own my sanity right now. I really don't think you can imagine how shaken up I am right now, sitting on the edge of my chair, clutching the sides of my desk and vibrating with nerves... gods, with all the times you've mentioned the sht that's coming soon (and with the forewarned name of the upcoming chapter) I'll be lucky if my brain cells are still up for comition for the next update...
So, long story short (yeah, short, lets all laugh together right about now ;) ) I think this story is amazing, if my opinion wasn't noticeable before xD
Can't wait to read more! ^_^
-waves-
Reviewer: klynndizzle (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 24
You should totally make a BTR2! I swear, i can't get enough of this story, lol. I love it!
Reviewer: rcselbsmn (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 18
LOVE IT!
Reviewer: leesed (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2009 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 25
love love love it... just stayed up wayyyy too late reading it all! I clearly don't know how you plan to end it but I think a sequal would be great!!! Cant wait for the next update!
Reviewer: Oliviamk1218 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 25
Hi Linda,
Loved the chapter, as usual. Nikki is such a WENCH!!! Excited for the next chapter,
Sistuh! :-)
Reviewer: skye282 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 25
Wow, I love how you write r/k, they seem so realistic, I hope you take the story further and let us know how things work out for them :)
Reviewer: coco987 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 9
grr sharkboy needs a bitchslap in this story and oh i love how u included that he totes came early for the NM film and how he's gonna "hang around the set "
Reviewer: coco987 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 8
buzz..buzz...hahaha now i get why you lol'ed at my comment about buzzing you sending vibrations..can i just say that i drooled a little bit with your thigh biting? he's totes a biter..and to say that he's fallen for her..how awesome is that and totes sweet just like u
Reviewer: rain88ph (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 24
A sequel. Summer and Eclipse filming. Please.
Reviewer: coco987 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 7
this quote :"how do you tell your boyfriend that the reason you fought to get someone cast was because you felt something with them you never felt with anyone before?" so true and very realistic
Reviewer: coco987 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 6
hahaha the hug and roll..chandler! and oh oh, dont tell me she's gonna think he's gay cuz he's mr. lova lova and all. that man can never be gay ;)
Reviewer: coco987 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 5
gosh that was hot! oh lol on the iron bed bed and twi references:) this quote:" He lifted the corner of his mouth and quietly laughed. He unbuttoned the top of his jeans, never losing eye contact with me. The simple act caught me off guard. I knew where all this was headed, but the sight of his jeans unbuttoned, the dark trail of hair leading from his abs and disappearing into his jeans was almost too much. "that visual...i might have drooled and passed out a bit.
Reviewer: Unfable (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 25
Yes two chapters to read and I had no wait it seemed. Well a nice long wait for chapter 24, but who cares! Brilliatn as always! Ahhh I want more I love the drama.
Reviewer: bbness (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 2
I love this story but just for accuracy sake, in British Columbia, legal age for everything is 19. It's the States that the legal age is 21 for things. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading this story, and for leaving a review! I should point out, that at the time when she first arrived in The Couve, she was 18. She turned 19 a few weeks after she arrived (in April). I'm so glad to know that you are reading so thoroughly that you picked up the age issue, and thought of the legal age differences between the US and Canada. This story brings her to Canada in late February.
Thanks so much for reading and I really appreciate your time in leaving a review. I hope you like the rest of the fiction. :)
Reviewer: coco987 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2009 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 3
oh i lik ite when he doesn't have restraint and when he's thinking of not being 'edward', and nice touch on the jacket. u had me there! i totally thought it was peters until this chapter..and did i tell u how much i love wild hair rob..i call it his simba hair hehehehe and u know that i think i might have been to the first beach, if it's in stanley..i was thinking victoria and if it is in stanley, i totes understand, that place was huge ;)
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