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Reviewer: snoodles (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 4
I really love the writing The story is good. I'm just a little weirded out about the main charcters. I'm going to keep reading and pretend that it's someone else with Rob!
Reviewer: SpeedGirl (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 4
Great Chapter! I cant wait for the next
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 4
I can't wait to see how Kristen seduces Robert!!!!!
Reviewer: mandacullen (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 4
hey, really i don't care 'bout lemons if this means another chapter!!=D you'd said this story would have 4 chapters, or something like that right??
well, anyway, awwww peter was so kind!! idk, i feel like this is just one thing he'd do if this story was true.. you know, like a father who wants to see his children happy!! and insecurity rob was so cute!!!
will be more drama?? you know, like taylor wanting to be jake??
it was a cute and romantic chapter!!! love it!! i really can't wait for the next!!! =*
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 4
This was SO freaking drop the panties HOT. I have been checking every day for an update to this story. I literally did a jumping up and down dance when I saw that you posted. You did not disappoint. The chemistry is so hot, it burns, between these two. And Rob is so romantic all of the time. I love this story SOOOO much. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I hope you continue it throughout the New Moon shoot. I would love to read more about how their relationship develops. Great job!!!
Reviewer: elphabacy35 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 4
This chapter was more than ok, I like a good buildup! What show are you in? Break a leg!
Reviewer: devilsgenie (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 4
i'm just happy that we got an update however short but this story has me holding on to it for dear life and i love that! keep up the great work!
Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 4
I'm so glad you updated! I've been thinking of your story and wondering where the next chapter would take Kris and Rob. Love it! What a great imagination and sense of adventure you have with these two :)
Reviewer: RedChevy (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 4
Hey, thanks for the shout out!
Loved it, even though it was lemon free ;-)
I love what you've done with Peter...such a sweetie, looking out for these two.
Good luck with your show!
Reviewer: tby789 (Anonymous) · Date: January 29, 2009 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 4
Wow, I am sooo jealous. Ilove the way you write Rob, it's just how I imagine him. It was an awesome chapter and think you made the right choice by waiting for the lemon. Robs line at the end was PERFECT.
Christina
Reviewer: PurdueLiz (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 4
Oh that was excellent! I loved seeing the part Peter played in getting them together. So sweet! I've seen the cottage (thanks Red) and it is perfect for them. Loved Rob admitting that he didn't know much about romancing. And how Kris is like, YOU are what's important. Sigh. Can't wait to get to what happens next. Yum.
Good luck memorizing your lines.
Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 3
More please i am really really loving your story :)
oh i wish it were true :)
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 3
WRITE MORE!
Reviewer: epm0001 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 3
I love this!!! Can't wait for more....hope it's coming soon.
Reviewer: ilovedwardcullenmost (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 3
AH SOO GOOD i just read the whole chapter i need the rest!!! and lemony goodness you speak off hahaha! pleaseee update soon!!! :) i beg of you :)
Reviewer: catloves18 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 3
Really loved this fic!!!
so realistic with the hobo brit rob!
PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!
Reviewer: fanpire-4-life (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 3
FUCK!!!!! MORE CHAPTERS
you got me all excited then ended it!!!!! GAHHHHH!!!!!!
Reviewer: alison (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 3
oh, please please PLEASE write more to this story!!!!!!!! i absolutely LOVE it!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: kezcullen (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 3
this has been fun- i have only started reading fanfics in this style and this is certainly one of the best so far. smooth dialoue that is very realistic!
two points- the difference between affect and effect- the last is the noun, the former the verb. and you're vs your- the last is the persoanl pronoun, and the former an abbreviation of you are.
write more!!
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 3
Whoo-hoo! Glad they got THAT straightened out. Can't wait to see where they take you next...
Reviewer: chevelia (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 3
Great! thanks so much, beautiful! Cant wait for the "physical-gnasty-love" part
Reviewer: TwilightAddicted (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 3
that was a brilliant chapter.
and probably what everyone was waitig fo lol.
Reviewer: irisandlights (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 1
Beautifully done. I love the relationship you've depicted between them. They're not particularly trying to be funnyor overly romantic. They're just themselves and it's beautiful.
Reviewer: mandacullen (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 3
*squeal like alice*
ehhh, rob is back!!! NM final chapters!!! =D
anyway, i got surprised by the fact peter helped rob, i mean, he gave rob's coat to kris... peter is just so smart!!! and lemon next chapter??? YEAH!!! and two more chapters?? NOOO!! you could write any situation 'bout rob being jealous?? i mean, c'mon they're shootinh NM... i thing it'd be funny...
well, it was a great good amazing cute wonderful chapter!!!=D see ya in the next chapter!!;)
=*
Reviewer: devilsgenie (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 1
I truly have no words to say... i LOVED it... again! didn't even realize how sly Peter was! lol
will anxiously wait for the update! :D
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