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Reviewer: kittikat505 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 11
girl you are too good! you keep me drawn in and wanting more with bated breath. dont keep me waiting long ha ha
Reviewer: devilsgenie (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 11
that was... genius! i totally didn't know what to really expect despite the teaser and the little hints that you gave me. And... before i forget, you know that i absolutely adore helping you with anything i can, even when my dog pulls the 'crap' that she does.
I totally covered my mouth when Kris told SB the little bit about Rob... and with this whole build-up i can't wait to see what Rob & Kris are gonna do about SB's little antics... damn him and the channeling with the characters!
total awesomeness!
Reviewer: moonlipse (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 11
shark boy is fucking annoying. haha I love seeing updates to my favorites and finding this story at the top of the list! I get all giddy inside. =)
Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 11
I'm so happy the new chapter up.. Just NEED MORE RK BONDING TIME ;)
I dun really care about lemons, just the way they playing hide n seek with other person is cute enuff. MOOORRREEE please, and update soon !
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 11
Bella let herself get a little suckered in there. Is Taylor really the most trustworthy source of info on Rob?
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 11
Yeah...I think they're going to have to spell it out to Shark Boy. Something along the lines of Rob telling him "If you want to discuss this further, call me in the morning. You can reach me in Kris' room...but not before nine. I don't think we'll be up before that."
Failing that, a multi-colored diagram on a white board may be required...
Reviewer: Beignet (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 11
I really dislike Jake! Your story solidifies that. Down with shark boy.
Reviewer: PurdueLiz (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 11
OMG I want to strangle Shark Boy. Like really, really hurt him. He's pissing me off. Acting like a big freaking baby. Doing everything he can to drive a wedge between Kris and Rob. Ugh. I'm glad they talked it out. And holy hell "I'm so desperately in love with you..." GUH. So stinking heart melting and lovely.
But this "How very Jacob of him," I muttered, not realizing at the time how accurate I was." OMG that has me totally worried. What the hell is SB gonna do?
And Rob, retreating in his mind, "lost and alone". Sniff, sniff.
Reviewer: Sarahcini (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 11
soooo goood pllllease update soon hun
Reviewer: saredance (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 11
I just recently discovered your story and I have to say..
I love it! One of the best stories I've read! Keep it up! :)
Reviewer: Bey (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 1
hehe dis was very cute. i love how kristen thinks just like any other girl put into this situtation, always questioning things in her mind
Reviewer: kms1979 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 3
Whew! I really felt that tension! Nice job!
Reviewer: kms1979 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 1
I like your story. They are very Rob and Kristen and not Edward and Bella. And that's a good thing.
Reviewer: lilyfrenchy (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 10
Hey ! Your story totally rock my socks !
I hope we can have the new review soon ! =D
(Sorry for my english i'm french ...)
Reviewer: Estelicia (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 10
please do keep writting this is fantastic
Reviewer: Anka (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 1
I just recently discovered your awesome fiction! You should be an writer. I really don't know what else to say. 'Du bist einsame Spitze'! (That is german, well yeah I am from Germany, and means you are awesome....)
Reviewer: Nata (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 10
Words cannot properly explain how much I love this story. :)! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: belward (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 10
oh come on, to leave people hangin like that is just plain wrong.
Great story update soon please!!
Reviewer: Libertysfic (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 10
I have actually been reading this story but never reviewed but tonight I did because I was rereading it. Yeah, it's so amazing that it deserves to be reread. The thing is you paint this amazing picture to the point you can almost see this play out..from over protective Rob to annoying Shark boy. Does that make sense, I hope it does. I am completely in love with this story that yes, its a habit to check a few times a day for an update. I am not ashmed. I just wanted to say its a wonderful one. =)
Reviewer: 13Secrets (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 10
Ooo! Cliffie! I love it! I would review every chapter, but this newfound disclaimer keeps refreshing the page, and it's hard to remember what page I'm on...
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Reviewer: 13Secrets (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 2
So when you said "clean" fanfiction, you didn't mean literally did you? Cause apparently this is rated R/NC-17. That warning page keeps popping up and it's annoying me something fierce!
Nice chap!
Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks for the reviews! I often struggle with chapter length so I was really glad you liked the length of the first chap. This is my first fanfic over here, I have another one on a HP site, but it was a one shot so . . . . :>)
I admit, "good clean fanfic fun" wasn't meant literally! That warning is new this week, it was never there before. At least they want you to know, right?! LOL. Yeah. Chapters 5 and 8 are lemons...so proceed with caution!
I'm glad you like it so far. Thanks for reading it this far! I hope you like what follows. I like RPatz too, and I prefer him as the shy, unsure, but in love version. *sigh*. Kinda like how I prefer my Ron Weasley! ;)
Reviewer: 13Secrets (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
Nice! Great first chapter, and awesome length! I love RPF's, so I'll be following this one!
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Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 10
aaaa.. you really made my day, seeing my fave fic up and stuff. YOU SHOULD UPDATE SOON! I'm going crazy if I dont read, lol. Keep up the amazing work!
Reviewer: kittikat505 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 9
oh! jacob/ Taylor sucks! so you must have written well lol
Reviewer: kittikat505 (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 8
oh please let them be happy
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