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Reviewer: baby5 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 13
I love this chapter. Hopefully Taylor will back off now. Update soon.
Author's Response: So glad you loved the chapter. But do you really want Taylor to back off?! Think of the angst! LOL!
The next chapter is waiting for validation! I hope you like it!
Thanks for the review!!!
Reviewer: Unfable (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 13
I wanna read a fight xD
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 13
AWESOME!!!!! TAKE THAT SHARK BOY!!
More? Soon? PLEASE?
Author's Response: If you liked that SB moment...just wait. Once they get back to the set, my personal favorite one will happen. Teaser alert! LOL.
Yup, more is on it's way. It's waiting for validation!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! It really means tons!!!!
Reviewer: summed (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 13
I loved this chapter! I can honestly picture all this in my mind. Just wanted to check on something--you don't prefer Edward over Jacob, do you? lol
Author's Response: I'm so glad you loved the chapter. It was a minor challenge, let me tell you. :) Yay! I'm so glad you can picture it all in your mind. I hoped the readers could! Ok, so for me...Edward vs Jacob I like them both equally. I love Emmett and Edward a bit more than Jacob, but I do still get him. Hence the penname. But I "get" Jacob. I understand why he does what he does. Well, maybe not 'understand' him, but I 'get' it. Wow- does any of that make sense!? LOL.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 13
Oh no...you did NOT leave us just hanging there!!! May a rabid pixie on RedBull take you shopping on Black Friday....
Well, at least SB should be able to take THAT hint!
More, please...like today???????
Author's Response: Oh yes I did!!! LOL. Rabid pixies on Red Bull?!?!? Seriously..that KILLS me! I'm still giggling over here and you wrote this a few days back! So,uh, are you up for supplying me with a few quips in up coming chapters?! That was too funny! Well done, you!
Yeah, you would THINK SB could take that hint. But, come on, it's SB!!! LOL
I have the next chapter waiting for validation so you should have it soon! I hope you like it!
So, about those funny lines......:)
Reviewer: loolupe (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 13
*sigh*
Author's Response: Yup. Just wait...... *double sigh*
Reviewer: eternallyedward (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 13
love it-the separation anxiety is very sweet! More,please..
Author's Response: I'm so glad you love it! The separation anxiety, yeah, I thought it was sweet. But...just wait... there is TONS MORE in the next chapter (which is waiting for validation as I write this). Hope you like it!
Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 13
You know what, I really really like this fic and have been waiting for a while for the new chap. I'm so happy it's up! It's okay if it's r pov or k pov, I'm just gonna love it either way. Just please please UPDATE SOON!
Author's Response: I am so happy you like this fic! The next chapter will be up soon, it's waiting for validation right now. RL really got in the way of this last chapter. But I am almost officially done with the musical, so I will have time on my hands at night to write more often then I have the past two months.
The next chapter is both R and K POV. I hope you like it!
Reviewer: Libertysfic (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 13
Is it wrong that loved that he baiscally was marking his terriorty in some ways...god..jealious Rob is sexy. Wonderful chapter.
Author's Response: No! It sooo isn't wrong to love that he is marking his territory! That is so what I was going for! And I can't help but love a jealous Rob too! There should be more of that side of him in up coming chapters. Thanks for thinking it was a wonderful chapter. I was really nervous posting this one. The next chapter is waiting for validation, I hope you like where I take them with it. :)
Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 13
Gah! I almost missed this update because there was a bazillion updates this morning.
Okay - now you have me freaking out that something bad WILL happen while Rob is gone.
But I think my favorite part of this last update was the music discussion - the fact that they were so sleepy while they were talking - made it more honest and intimate. Of course the make out session was just awesome as well (could have used a few more details - wink, wink :)
Bring on Rob's POV!!
Author's Response: Gah! You almost missed the update!? Oh no!! LOL.
Oh something will happen while Rob is gone, but it is all good. I promise you! But I would be lying if I said I wasn't happy that you were freaking out. That is the point of that build up. You know where this is going in the next chapter, since you are the one that first got that nugget of knowledge! Thanks for the idea!
The music discussion was your favorite part!? Cool!! Yeah, it was a very honest, intimate, and raw moment. I know, there should have been more details of the smooch-fest, but I debated it and found for what happens in the end of the chapter and the next chapter.....yeah, had to skip it. But our conversations have lifted my block to the issue we talked about so I think you will find the next few lemons will show for it!
And Rob's POV is waiting validation! I really hope you like it! Thanks for staying with this one and for the idea!!
Reviewer: tickledpink89 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 13
I love this! I can't wait to see more of it. I sort of hope Taylor saw that and part of me hopes he didn't see the kiss.
I want to know soon! Update soon please!
Author's Response: I know we have PM'd, but I wanted to officially respond here. I am so glad you like this one! Oh Taylor did see it and just wait for the next chapter....I think you will like it.
Reviewer: tickledpink89 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 13
I love this! I can't wait to see more of it. I sort of hope Taylor saw that and part of me hopes he didn't see the kiss.
I want to know soon! Update soon please!
Reviewer: melderead (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 13
Thanks so much for the new chapter. I love this story.
Author's Response: So glad you liked the chapter and love the story! The next chapter should be up soon. I hope you like it! Thanks for reading this one and reviewing it. It means tons to me!
Reviewer: devilsgenie (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 13
*Screams to SB yet again* IN YOUR FACE!!!!!!!!LOL
I loved it, yay! hmm... i wonder if Billy saw that? or anyone else for that matter... anyway as always you know that i can't wait to see what happens next... that portion of the kiss just made my heart flutter! ahhhhh! okay, must breathe normally again!
talk to ya soon :D
Author's Response: You get him, girl!!
So glad you loved it! Oh- never thought about Billy! Dang! Good idea angle there! Glad you like the small end kiss. It was hard to write something so small but full of meaning!
Talk to ya soon! :)
Reviewer: saliri (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 13
OH MY GOOD :)
no he DIDN'T .. god they are screeeweed...
evil shark boy. pf i hate him. jacob, taylor. whomever.. just so smug and so "oh i'm little and cute but i can pull of the brawny werewolf as well.."
No you can't! you don't look hot! you always looked like a baby and you always will!
grrr
ok can't wait for next chapter.. :D
sorry for the taylor-hate-outburst. he just doesnt fit for brawny jacob. pf.
Author's Response: Oh yes he did! LOL!! SB is so bad, I love writing it all! I must admit! I am sure his a great guy, but someone has to be the antagonist of this fic, right?! Don't worry about that outburst. I get it, trust me and believe me..I get it!! LOL.
The next chapter is waiting for validation so it should be along soon.
Reviewer: belward (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 13
ok i am totally excited about Rob's POV u should do it and soon like within 2 days if possible!!!
Author's Response: Well, I did get it done and it is waiting to be validated. I really hope you like it. It's Part One of Two parts from his pov. If it goes well, I may write more from his pov. Let me know what you think once you read it. :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: obbesseddeb (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 13
Outstanding! I love that Rob gets a pov next chapter. I also love that he marked her as his..
obbesseddeb
Author's Response: Wow! Really? Thank you! Yes, Rob's chapter is next, and it's a two parter! Woo Hoo!! LOL. I loved that he marked her too. But in an oh-so-subtle-way. :)
Thanks for the wonderful reviews and for reading this one!
Reviewer: itunesx221 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 13
UPDATE
SB IS AN ASS
Author's Response: LOL!! Ok, the update is pending. Yeah, SB is a bit of an ass. Even if the RL person is nice, I had to have an antagosit for this fic, right?! LOL.
Reviewer: Beignet (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 13
fun update. I like the snarky ending & am excited about Rob's POV. Are you going to le us know what songs are on the CD???
Author's Response: Yay! I loved that you used snarky too! It's a personal fav of mine! Rob's POV should be up very soon. And the songs, no clue. LOL. sorry! Let me think about that. I might get some insight in the next few days. :)
Reviewer: Sarahcini (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 13
Toss Pot ..I love it. I may have to use that sometime! I loved the update...as usual!!!!! Keep up the amazing work girl!!!
I hope Taylor FINALLY got the hint...
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 13
I wish Kristen would just tell him she loves him!!!!!!! Way to go Rob for kissing her in frontof Shark Boy, stake your claim and let it be known!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: :) Just wait for the next chapter! And I know, I was really happy that kiss in front of SB played well!! Woo Hoo!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 13
This was fantastic. I am nervous now.... he is so afraid of losing her. Taylor's intentions are too possessive of her. He worries me. Kristen needs to put him in his place. She needs to reassure Rob as well. She needs to tell him how she feels! I can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Yay! So glad you like this one! Yeah, you should be a bit nervous. LOL. He is terrified of losing her, and the next chapter really takes that much further. Taylor's intentions are too possessive, but it's all good. Don't worry. He will be put in his place. No worries. It's been hard to not tell you why she isn't reassuring him, but the next chapter things happen that I think will make you happy. Next chapter should be up soon.
Thanks for staying with me on this one! Your reviews mean the world to me!
Reviewer: sweetpea (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 13
He smiled one of those guy ‘closed mouth smiles’. You know the one. The one that says, ‘I’ll let you think what you said helped but I’m still a guy and need to brood over here’ - Haha..this is so true! I love how real you're making the characters, it almost feels like they could be someone you know ;)
Rob was so cute in this chapter. Normally the guy in the relationship is portrayed as so suave and confident, and he's totally not. He still second guesses himself all the time, and the fact that he's so humble is really hot! And him remembering all the little things about Kristen. *sigh* It's just so so sweet.
Thanks for the update! I'm truly in love with this story.
Author's Response: So glad you got the 'guy smile' thing. I am so glad you feel that way about the characters. I really have hoped they would come across that way.
Yeah, I kind of thought Rob might not be the ultra suave and confident guy while still being very romantic about it all. The humble and remembering the little things makes even me swoon. LOL.
I am so glad you love this story! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! It means the world to me!
Reviewer: samiamgreen (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 13
Amazing as usual. Can't wait for Rob's POV...
Author's Response: Awww, thank you! Rob's POV is coming soon. I hope you like it!
Reviewer: plutofigaro (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 13
woohoo! You tell him Robert.
Author's Response: I know,right?! LOL. Rob's POV is next...hope you like it!
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