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Reviews For First Kiss
Reviewer: Sally-Anna (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 11:42 AM · On: Edward POV

loved the story, just wish it was longer x

Reviewer: ArodLoverus2001 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 12:24 AM · On: Edward POV

HAHA great story!

Reviewer: Twilighter001 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 10:26 PM · On: Edward POV

Jacob so deserved that.

Reviewer: 78slayer (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 05:16 AM · On: Edward POV

Poor Jacob having Edward as a future father-in-law so not fair. I love this story though

Reviewer: kroe3 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2010 01:14 AM · On: Jacob POV


Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 10:12 PM · On: Edward POV

Lol! Really cute and fun! Loved it.

Reviewer: twilightelle99 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 02:03 AM · On: Edward POV

I'd love to see this as a full length story. You're an awesome writer! :)

Reviewer: julzrox (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Edward POV

kewl but i want more lol. Im glad you wrote a sequel!

Reviewer: TwilightGirl545 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Jacob POV

Jacob got busted, Jacob got busted!! He better run fast if he wants to live...

Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Edward POV

oh, why did you leave of here, I soooooo would have loved to rfead the following situation. great work anyway.

Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Jacob POV

lol love that chapter. thre'S nothing like the in laws appearing in the middle of a snogging session ;-) wonder what you'll do with this situation in the next chapter ;-)

great work

Reviewer: BandE4eva (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Edward POV


Reviewer: KatieCullen (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Jacob POV

That was so sweet. It is one of the better Jacob/Nessie stories I've read.

Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Edward POV

i sincerely hope that nessie or jacob get a chance to explain before jacob gets his head ripped off very messily. 

Reviewer: rob_on_a_stick (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Jacob POV

I Looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove this story! Keep writing

Reviewer: burnkitty (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Edward POV

Ha ha. This chapter was as good as the first! Wonderful cliff hanger, your totally EEEVVVIIILLL!!!!

Author's Response:

I enjoy cliff hangers :) Even if I do get hunted down with pitchforks...

Reviewer: burnkitty (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2009 06:55 AM · On: Jacob POV

Ha ha ha!! Oh no! Poor Edward....

Author's Response:


Unusual response seen as it's Jacob who's about to get beaten up...

Reviewer: TopazTwilight (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Edward POV

and take a risk carry on!

Author's Response:

I really can't, I'm Sorry. I'm going to be stubborn and leave it at that.

I am writing a new story called "The Dreams of the Boy in the Nighttime." It hasn't been admitted yet but it's on my profile which I think I put on my profile on here.

There's also "An Emmett Christmas Special" which hasn't been admitted.

It's a comedy. Do I have to say more?

Reviewer: TopazTwilight (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Jacob POV

wow, its done so well! and I love the suspense!

Reviewer: ice (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 11:17 PM · On: Edward POV

well what happenes next?

Author's Response:

I did think for a while to continue this, but then I thought that if I tried to continue something that was written on the spur of the moment and a burst of inspiration it would... malfunction. If you really want to know then I was planning for Emmett to stop Edward and make him calm down but I would only be able to stretch that out to a third chapter. I apologize for the cliff hanger - I seem to have some sort of addiction to them - and I hope you check out my other stories.

In fact there's one I was just about to submit when I saw your review. It's called 'The Blissful Dreams of the Boy In the Nighttime" if you're interested and it's under my penname there, EmmettGirl.

Thankyou for taking the time to review.


Reviewer: twilightfan4ever2009 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 11:20 PM · On: Edward POV

i like this story. i was hoping that it would go on longer than this.

Reviewer: becca-bella-bee-thatsme (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Edward POV

Please tell me that is not the end of the story!

I love it way to much for it to end that soon. Write more!

Reviewer: Emerald_Rosalie (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 03:49 AM · On: Jacob POV

I loved this! How cute was Jake? And Nessie! I just adore her!

Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 01:43 AM · On: Jacob POV

I LOVE Jake and Nessie stories! :) This was soooo cute, and I love how Edward freaks out at the end. :)

Uh oh...Emmett...can't wait!

Reviewer: emmettsbutterfly (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2009 01:36 AM · On: Jacob POV

HAHAHA!!! I love the end! and the beginning!! well I loved all of it, and I can't wait for Emmett's debue!

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